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Bridges by Bodkin | 13 Review(s) |
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Armariel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/16/2006 |
Ahhh...they are talking civilly, at least! Wonderful. Good elves. Pity it took a serious injury to bring it about. Come on, you infuriating elf,’ he muttered. ‘Do not make me wish to see your face.’ ‘Unfortunately I omitted to bring my sewing kit with me.’ Nice repartee! The Elves are so vividly characterized here. (Seems I've said so before, haven't I?) Shucks, I rather like Taryatur now! Tough old bird. And he has really been through it. I have to hand it to him. So has Leggy. But they endure! Author Reply: I think Elerrina and Linevende had been thinking of shutting them in a cupboard - but this is probably better in the long run. Provided they survive the experience! Legolas has been looking after Taryatur - and Taryatur is protecting Legolas. The wall between them is cracking - although they are still bristling at times - and they are really communicating. And realising that they actually share a lot, both in their past and their hopes for the future. Fingers crossed it helps! | |
Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/16/2006 |
You kept me on the edge of my seat again during this chapter. Love the dialogue between the two combatants. Author Reply: Thank you! I hope that they will get out of this quite quickly, so there's probably only one chapter to go. Legolas and Taryatur are actually communicating now - and recognising shared experience and shared hopes. I don't think they are likely to abandon hostilities totally, but I'm hopeful that they will understand each other better. There's not much for them to do at the moment but talk - I'm glad you're enjoying the dialogue! | |
daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/16/2006 |
Thranduil is right. Laerwen is ruthless and I'd hate to have her plotting against me, even for my own good. It's interesting to see how these two open up a little when life gets stripped down to its essentials and they can't walk away. Legolas's insight into how his father-in-law feels has to be useful. I can't tell if Taryatur is gaining similar insight, but at least he's asking questions instead of judging. Author Reply: Laerwen does have a very good idea what is going on in the forest. Not so much under it! I don't think she would be happy if she knew that her son and his father-in-law were actually in danger. I do feel that these two actually have quite a lot in common - possibly sharing certain qualities. And that Taryatur has allowed superficial differences to blind him to that fact. I think Taryatur is actually feeling quite protective towards the Wood-elf - and that can't be a bad thing! | |