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On the Wings of the Storm  by Lialathuveril 272 Review(s)
VanadesseReviewed Chapter: 31 on 2/16/2009
Hi!

I just want to say that you made me laugh and cry so many times with this story! that is wonderful to see them evolving in their love for each other. Being in a new relation myself and moving in with my boyfriend in July, I feel sometimes like Lothiriel and I liked reading about her.

Thank you!

Author Reply: Hello Vanadesse,
I'm pleased to hear I managed to move you so much with my story! Eomer is my favourite character from the books, and I like to think that he found happiness in his life after losing so much of his family.

Thanks for reviewing and good luck with your move!
Lia

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 31 on 2/16/2009
Ah, a proper first Yule for husband and wife as they prepare for the child to come and see the first fruits of the new order.

And Erchirion has a love amongst the Rohirrim, does he? A triple tie now between Gondor and Rohan!

Love the teasing of the husband and the baiting of the lady's maid! No, I don't think she'll stay in Rohan! Heh!

Wonderful tale, and look to seeing more in time. And I'll be thinking about your original work!

Author Reply: Hello Larner,
yes, I wanted to bring the story full circle again to Yule to show the difference. And quite a few of my readers asked what would become of the twins, so I thought I'd give a glimpse of their future as well.

It's good to hear you liked the story and thank you for reviewing!
Lia

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 31 on 2/16/2009
Lovely conclusion, Lia. Lothiriel's maid is hilarious. She needs to get away!

I like the contrast of the women all warm inside and the snow coated men who return from their ride.

Author Reply: Hello Daw,
I get the feeling that Lothiriel's maid will accept that offer of retirement soon! And I'm pleased to hear that you liked the conclusion to this tale.

Thanks for reviewing and until another time!
Lia

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 30 on 2/10/2009
Ah! Suitably erotic for this night of all nights! Love the "rescue" and the pillow fight. I have a feeling the servants will be suitably impressed and delighted, actually.

A proper wedding night for these two!

Author Reply: Hello Larner,
lol, you might be right about the servants! And I wanted to show how they have trust and laughter between them, a good foundation for their marriage, I hope.

Lia

CuthalionReviewed Chapter: 30 on 2/10/2009
Lovely, romantic and delightfully sensual. Bravo.

Mona

Author Reply: Hello Mona,
I felt I had to make it up to them for all the trouble I threw at them in the earlier chapters ;-)

Lia

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 30 on 2/9/2009
Another delightfully romantic chapter. I just love the custom of the bridal staff. What a sweet start to their married life--I especially enjoyed the references you made about their first few days together--the wet nightgown, etc. I feel a bit sad though because the story is about to end but also excited that another one might start too?

Author Reply: Hello Whitewave,
I had fun coming up with all these customs (although some of them, like the 'putting to bed', I just borrowed). And it seemed natural that they would look back to the start of their relationship and what attracted them to each other.

As for another story - I have got ideas for that, but it might not involve Eomer and Lothiriel.

Lia

GalimerilReviewed Chapter: 30 on 2/9/2009
*Sigh* If only there were such a man, eh? Truly a pleasure to read, I like the idea of the ribbons, maybe I'll find a way to work that into a poem or something, it's pretty. Very creative, I loved the pillow fight, I laughed right along with them! I hope you have a great week!

Author Reply: Hello Galimeril,
feel free to use the idea of the ribbons. I got the idea from a Swedish midsummer custom, where people dance around a maypole and twine long ribbons around it. And I'm pleased that you liked the pillow fight!

Have a great week, too!
Lia

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 30 on 2/9/2009
A delightful chapter.I'm glad they are married at last and have survived the ordeal of the ceremony.I love Eomer's thoughtfulness.May their soon be an heir for Rohan!

Author Reply: Hello Linda,
I know it was a bit of an ordeal for Lothiriel, but I hope that Eomer has made it up to her. And we'll find out in the next chapter if all those ribbons worked ;-)

Lia

CuthalionReviewed Chapter: 29 on 2/8/2009
I love those wedding vows! And Éomer's mentioning of "threats" made me grin from ear to ear. Delightful chapter!

Mona

Author Reply: Hello Mona,
I did not dare to stint on the wedding vows with you reading my story ;-) And the abduction will probably turn into a running joke between them!

Lia

ireneReviewed Chapter: 29 on 2/6/2009
Once again, I have to state that although Lothiriel and Eomer are not my favourites, your writing is simply great. It is a pleasure to read you.

Your - yes, fan - Irene

(P.S Congratulations to Didier Cuche!)

Author Reply: Hello Irene,
I'll win you over yet ;-) Although I don't know myself why I like Eomer so much, I just always have.

Thank you for your kind words!
Lia

P.S: and congratulations back to Austria!

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