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| To See A World by Nightwing | 15 Review(s) |
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| Lossenchristal | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 4/9/2004 |
| I really liked this chapter! I loved Legolas's conversation with Tarnan, and I laughed over Legolas's threat to shoot Aragorn in the *cough, cough*...;) Whoo boy! Aragorn went a leetle too far...:D I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter! Please don't wait too long!:) Namarië, ~Lossenchristal P.S. I almost collapsed with laughter over your quick healing of Legolas at the beginning. Seriously, you almost had me believing that was your real chapter for a moment! I was like, "What?????? I want Legolas to be healed, but not that fast!!!!!" :D I will trust you to do it in a much better way in your own time...:) Thanks for sharing your story! It is one that I always look forward to updates on.:) | |
| fadagaski | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 4/9/2004 |
| Shucks. I finally get a clue, and it's the wrong flipping one. Just bloody typical. *sigh* Good chapter! For some bizarre reason I like the tension that sprung up between Aragorn and Legolas, though I hope it's resolved soon. Leggie really needs to gain back his confidence, which I'm presuming Aragorn realised. Of course, by warning against riding the stallion he's encouraging the opposite. Silly man. Tarnan is a good character! He's deep enough to be utterly believable as a part of Middle-Earth, but you don't take more words than necessary than giving him that depth. *applauds* | |
| Alina | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 4/9/2004 |
| And another great chapter - amazing how you pull that off. I guess Aragorn pushed a little too far here, even though with good intentions. It must be hard for Legolas to hit an unmoving target that makes no sound...I wonder whether Aragorn can persuade the prince to take on something that does move, he might be able to shoot it on sound. Well, weŽll see. IŽm definately sorry for Legolas, but I am very (!!!!) thankful that you do not give him a "miracle cure". This makes the drama of your story all the more real. I love it. Alina | |
| Lyn | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 4/9/2004 |
| What can I say that hasn't been said before? Certainly a story to cherish and re-read. It gives me a good feeling to read as I can "see" and "feel" the characters. My goodness! I was laughing quite vigorously when I read what Legolas decided to do to Aragorn to pay him back for his impertinence. You have such a way with words! And I love the horses. If I were rich, I would own a horse with plenty of land to exercise him (or her). No stallions for me, though. I've seen them up close! Still, being on a powerful trembling being like that has to be one of the greatest thrills of being alive. You shoot a bow? Good for you! May all of your arrows fly straight! | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 4/8/2004 |
| Actually, I kind of liked the neatly wrapped up ending, reminds me of my television watching days: Seriously maimed character recovers completely by the closing credits. And this line was classic: "and they all partied like lunatics even unto the ending of the world." But really, am glad to see more of this story. Not in the mood to write a serious review, tho. (Also out of time) Will have to try later. Thanks! | |