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A Teleri Treasury  by Rhyselle 83 Review(s)
CeleritasReviewed Chapter: 17 on 11/25/2008
Wow, that must have been a tense moment! I'm curious to see whether you will follow up on it or not!

Author Reply: So far the muse has not given me the words, but I'm still hoping! Thanks for reviewing!

CeleritasReviewed Chapter: 16 on 11/25/2008
Oooh, great foreshadowing! I had often wondered if/how the Sea-longing hit the Teleri even before they had beheld it.

VirtuellaReviewed Chapter: 17 on 11/25/2008
Yet another gem. This is almost like a series of still pictures, each in itself exquisite.

Author Reply: Virtuella, that is quite possibly the most beautiful and wonderful thing anyone has ever said about my writing ever! Thank you so very much!

Independence1776Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 11/24/2008
*cringes* Oh, that must have been hard for Finarfin.

And how Olwë reacts will be quite telling for how the rest of Valinor reacts.

~ Indy

Author Reply: Yes, because if Olwe had rejected Arafinwe, the difficult path to being recognized as king of the remaining Noldor would have been even worse.

I appreciate your comments on my stories and ficlets! Thank you very much for letting me know how you feel about them. :)

VirtuellaReviewed Chapter: 16 on 11/23/2008
Lovely. This provides a very fitting background to the whole series.

KayleeReviewed Chapter: 16 on 11/23/2008
So adorable, meldenya! *huggles wee!Olwe* He's so cute, splashing in the waters of Cuivenen! ^_^ Adorable. And yes, he has always been called to find the Sea. *nods*

Lovely little flashback. :)

~Kaylee!

CeleritasReviewed Chapter: 15 on 11/22/2008
Interesting tidbit on the ignorant Noldorin sailors.

These doubts were very realistic, but the last word ultimately gave the right answer and clinched the rest of the drabble perfectly.

Cheers!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 15 on 11/22/2008
Oh, I can see just this series of questions occurring to Olwe, and the same answer coming to him. How easily and succinctly--and perfectly--you have caught them.

KayleeReviewed Chapter: 15 on 11/21/2008
Aw! Poor Olwe! *huggles* Well, he stayed true to the Valar, and there was nothing really that he could have done to save his ships or his people, unfortunately. :( Wonderful job as always, meldenya! *hugs*

~Kaylee!

CeleritasReviewed Chapter: 14 on 11/21/2008
Wise of Olwe to leave the weapons behind. This was so tragic!

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