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| Twins in Rohan by Lady Bluejay | 14 Review(s) |
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| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2009 |
| You had me guessing as to what she actually wants to do and was very surprised as well with the twins' reaction and apparent willingness. The end just had me laughing out loud. A very nice short piece. Author Reply: Thank you. Pleased I kept you guessing.LBJ | |
| utfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2009 |
| I knew it was not going to be the obvious, but you totally "got me." This was great - very, very clever. Thank you Author Reply: Thank you. Glad I managed to fool you. LBJ | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2009 |
| Cute and funny; I didn't guess until the end that the twins knew all along what the girl intended. Author Reply: Ha! Glad I fooled you. Thanks very much for reviewing.LBJ | |
| Parmalokwen | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2009 |
| I love a good trick ending. Author Reply: Yes, so do I! Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ | |