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More Than He Bargained For  by Grey Wonderer 14 Review(s)
Kaylee ArafinwielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/1/2009
*laughs* Oh, GW! This is perfect!

I just love Frodo's cleverness and Pip's stubborn insistence that Sam is 'flat-headed', not to mention Merry giving Pip an incentive to stay up all night...one he's got no right to give. I wonder if there's a sequel in the works so we can see what Paladin would have to say if Pip did go to the pub? Very well done!

Kaylee!

Author Reply: I am so glad you liked it.

I think Frodo did have to be very clever to stay ahead of these two trouble-makers. I don't know if there will be a sequel but it could happen. This one wasn't supposed to be about what I actually wound up writing. LOL That always happens to me.

Thanks for the lovely review and for reading.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/1/2009
“Frodo,” Pippin whispered.

“Yes, Pippin?” Frodo asked.

“I think Merry’s fallen asleep with his face in his plate,” Pippin frowned. “He’s getting gravy all in his hair, Frodo. Should I wake him?”

“No,” Frodo whispered. “Just finish your meal. I’ll get Merry to bed afterward. He’s had a long day.”


*snortgiggle*

Frodo is such a good mentor to these youngsters! What a delightful gift for our Dreamflower. :)

Author Reply: Frodo came up with a very good punishment in this. It fit the crime and Frodo was clever enough to get his chores done in the bargain. LOL

Thanks for reading this one.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/1/2009
LOLOLOLOL! Oh Thank you for this lovely birthday gift-- it has all sorts of my favorite things in it, like little Pippin and young Merry and Frodo being all parental and stern but loving.

Poor Merry! But I am quite sure that this will teach him not to try and trick Pippin in that way--at least not at Bag End--anymore!

And Sam's "flat head"! *cackles* That was just too funny!

Thank you SOOO much for my wonderful story! *hugs it close* "MINE! THE PRECIOUS is MINE!*


Author Reply: Aww, I'm so glad you liked it and I do hope you had a very happy birthday.

They should both learn that Frodo isn't about to let either of them get away with anything serious. He knows them very well and knows exactly what will work against them.

That thing with Sam's head just worked its way in there. It surprised me too. hehehe

You are very welcome, precious.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 7/1/2009
Aww...poor dear!

I used to sleep-write in my highschool typing class (which was right after lunch). I'd doze off with my fingers on the wrong lih3w 9r i36w qhe 297oe 2485e h95y8ht g66 gibberish...

tHaNjs fro teh b8rtyda7 w8syes11

Oh, er...Thanks!

Author Reply: LOL
I've no idea why I was so awake this morning. That's just not like me.

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