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| Brother, where art thou? by Laikwalâssê | 50 Review(s) |
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| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/12/2009 |
| Elrohir's quite right! Of course they can't leave without searching for some trace of Elladan, even if it was just to find his body. (Which they won't, of course ... will they?) Author Reply: for Elrohir´s sake I hope they will find Elladan and not just his body. Please stay with me and find out. Thank you so much for the review. Lai | |
| Selene Aduial | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/29/2009 |
| Wow, A chilling start to your new story. Poor Elladan, they really got to him badly. I just hope the other elves will find him in time. I can't wait for more. Hugs Selene Author Reply: Hello Petra, thank you so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it, especially from you. I´m glad you like the beginning of my new story and yes it´s chilling. Find him in time? Where would be the fun? I promise to update soon. Many hugs. Lai | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/28/2009 |
| Well, one individual will remember his arrival, a least. Author Reply: Yes, but will Elrond and Elrohir find out in time and can he really help them? Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Lai | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/28/2009 |
| Good weaving of the tension. Author Reply: I´m glad it worked. Hope to see you at the next chapters. Thanks for reviewing. Lai | |
| Viresse | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/27/2009 |
| Oh no! poor Elladan! Elrohir can hear Elladan when he called out to him, then Elrohir felt that Elladan was still alive.... so at least Elladan was ok that moment. But Elrohir could not communicate with his twin afterwards, things could not be good either. What happened to Elladan then? Did the water flow him somewhere on-shore but no help? I can't wait to see how Elrohir & Elrond punish Harad! Please update soon. Author Reply: poor Elladan, indeed and it´s really a bad sign that Elrohir can´t feel his brother anymore and yes, Elrond and Elrohir are not really amused when they find out what Harrad had done to Elladan. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I promise to update soon. Lai | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/26/2009 |
| (That should read 'least'. I knew I should have previewed!) | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/26/2009 |
| Eek!! I know Elladan won't die (at lest, he'd better not!) but how on earth will he survive this? I'd like to see Elrohir's revenge when he finds out what the two men have done to his brother :>) Jay Author Reply: No, he´d better not, but can Elrohir cling to this hope as well? The men should indeed go out of Elrohir´s way when he finds out. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Lai | |
| viresse | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/22/2009 |
| Oh dear...you cannot just leave like that. What happened to Elladan? what's Elrond talking about his worst nightmare? Please update soon. Author Reply: Elrond´s worst nightmare? In losing one of his sons he must fear to lose both. Hope to see you at chapter two and there you will glimpse a bit of what happened to Elladan. The next chapter is on the way. Thank you so much for the review. Lai | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/22/2009 |
| This is intriguing! Whatever's happened to Elladan? And what was he doing off on his own in the first place? I love anything to do with the sons of Elrond, and I'm looking forward to an update. I think there will be plenty of angst ahead for Elrohir and Elladan :) Author Reply: I´m glad you like the start of my new story. I assume that Elladan and Elrohir are not always sticking together. It should be a simple errand for Elladan, nothing he could not do on his own. As you know by now, I too like anything concerning the twins and there w i l l be plenty of angst ahead. Thank you so much for the review. I promise to update soon. Lai | |
| Aiwen | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/21/2009 |
| A good beginning, with a cliff-hanger chapter ending. Nicely done. Author Reply: thank you for the praise and the much appreciated review. Hope you enjoy the following chapters also and to see you there. Lai | |