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The Abduction of Éomer, King of Rohan  by Lialathuveril 103 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/29/2010
They make quite the pair, really. And she set fire to her brother's boat? Heh!

Author Reply: She's a bit of an arsonist...

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 7/29/2010
She has managed to bring complications upon herself, hasn't she? Heh!

Author Reply: I get the feeling this Lothiriel is good at getting into trouble. But then most of mine are ;-)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/29/2010
She still is mistaken regarding his identity. And he's willing to continue playing along. At least she's falling for him--hard!

Author Reply: Very hard! But she won't thank Eomer for it when she finds out!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/28/2010
And she still fails to make the connection. She does have some things to learn yet. At least he now knows she is resourceful as well a pretty and spirited. And she knows he is inventive. Heh!

Author Reply: It would have been no fun if she'd made the connection already ;-) Also if you've got an idea fixed in your mind as the 'truth', it's difficult to see the signs. The reader knows so much more.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 7/28/2010
She is being a bit slow at the moment, isn't she? And now she sleeps? If he weren't as he was, he could now take the boat back to the eastern shore and drift back to the camp once more. But he will, I think, do much to earn her trust.

Author Reply: I think that unconsciously she's already taken his measure and knows she can trust his given word. And she's grown up amongst men of honour, so is really a bit of an innocent still.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/28/2010
At least I can no review! I take it that it was Eomer himself that came guised as a messenger to take her measure, and that he liked what he saw. Then she mistakes one of his companions as the King, her already drawn to him without yet realizing it.

And now, trying to kidnap her brother, she's instead managed to capture the very man she's been trying to avoid? How typical and funny!

Author Reply: Hello Larner,
what a nice surprise to hear from you again! And you've been busy reading ;-)

This turned into a story full of twists, some of them even taking me by surprise as I wrote it. But I'm really pleased to hear you enjoyed the story.

Thanks for reviewing!
Lia

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 6/13/2010
What a fitting epilogue! Loved the glimpses you gave us of Eowyn and Faramir, my second favorite couple. Poor Eothain, you'd think he'd have learned his lesson. I'm glad Eomer and Lothy were able to convince Imrahil that nothing inappropriate happened. Hope to read something about my favorite couple again soon?

Author Reply: I'm pleased that you liked the epilogue! As for more, there's nothing in the pipeline at the moment, but you never know. However, I'm working on an original story right now, so I'd really like to finish that first.

Again, many thanks for reviewing!
Lia

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 14 on 6/13/2010
Lovely chapter---I'm glad they got the chance to talk things through. I like your nickname for Lothy here, "Pirate Princess"...is that another potential story line? ;-)

Author Reply: Don't get the plot bunnies started! It would make for a funny story line...

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 13 on 6/13/2010
I can only imagine the juicy gossip circulating around Gondor at this time--must have been quite scandalous, but very romantic I must say. It's a good thing there weren't any tabloids back then. ;-)

Amrothos, as always, is my favorite Dol Amroth prince.

Author Reply: LOL, I can see the headlines in my mind! And Lothiriel would have been beleaguered with paparazzi...

And Amrothos is my favourite as well, that's why he usually manages to sneak into my stories even when his older brothers don't.

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/13/2010
I enjoyed reading Lothy's thoughts while waiting for her father to be summoned. And Leona's "ambush" proposal was very very romantic. The first time I read this I was wondering if we'll ever see the young couple again.

Author Reply: Léona realized he was running out of time, so he finally had to take his chances!

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