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| Choices by Laikwalâssê | 21 Review(s) |
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| minuial | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 11/19/2010 |
| It was great to see Glorfindel awakening and on the road to healing. He was, I think, the only one in Imladris who wasn't very surprised about the arrival of the eagles and their passengers. Now to see how Elrond and the twins will return to the land of the living. Good work. Author Reply: Hi minuial, yes, with Glorfindel on board again all will be fine, or will it? Thank you so much for still reading and the time to review. Lai | |
| minuial | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 11/5/2010 |
| Hi. Beautiful chapter. I like the involvement of Celeborn and Galadriel in the story and I love the eagles coming to help (so Celeborn can summon them as Thranduil can? that's good). Looking forward to their arrival in Imladris. Author Reply: I´m so glad you like the chapter. Galadriel and Celeborn had to be involved by such a tragedy. Yes, I can imagine Celeborn be able to call for the eagles; he´s as ancient as Thranduil and as powerful. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. See you at the arrival in Rivendell. Lai | |
| Mrs.Glorfindel | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/29/2010 |
| Hi, I just wanted to say how much I like your story. your story is one of two, that I'm reading on this site right now. it's very dramatic and has all of my favorites, Elrond, the twins , Erestor, Legolas and of course Glorfindel. the only one missing is Estel, but I understand this story happens before he is born. anyway, I can't wait to read more. Author Reply: *blush* thank you for letting me know. I´m so happy you enjoy my story. I´m glad the tension intented worked. Now that they are at home all will be well, or not? The next chapter is already done so you have not to wait long. Thanks so much for the review. Lai. | |
| minuial | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/18/2010 |
| Hi. I wonder why Erestor is thinking that Elrond and the twins are lost already. He is a bit pesimistic, isn't he? Looking forward to the next chapter. Author Reply: Hello minuial. Maybe he´s a bit overwhelmed with all the happenings and who should help the three half-elves now? Stay with me and we will see how all involved will adjust. As always thank you so much for still reading and reviewing. I really appreciat any comment. Lai | |
| minuial | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/7/2010 |
| Hi. I like the arrival of Legolas, unexpected but so much needed. Let's hope that things will go up from here (I mean, it can't get any worse, can it?) "g". Looking forward to the next chapter. Author Reply: Hello minuial, I think Erestor could have managed but Lagolas´presence is welcome nonetheless and it can get worse...LOL. Thank you so much for reviewing. Lai | |
| Kathurien | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/1/2010 |
| What a cliffhanger! :-) Hope to see justice done and my favourite elf-lords well again. Author Reply: justice will be done; after all they are my favourite elves as well. Hope my beta can shorten the time to the next chapter.Thank you so much for reviewing. Lai | |
| minuial | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/30/2010 |
| Hi. You really like angst and putting those dear elves in such dire circumstances, don't you? "g". I liked the chapter even though I think that a warrior like Glorfindel would not be so easily surprised and wounded by those men. Looking forward to see how you get them out of this situation. Good work. Author Reply: Hello minuial, yes I like this tool and it always workes well..*blink*. You are right about Glorfindel and I struggled with the same question but even Elf-Lords are sometimes not in their best conditions, in this case the worry over Elrond, and so I think it is believable in some way. Stay with me and you will find out how I intent to get them out of the hole I´ve thrown them into. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it. Lai | |
| minuial | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/22/2010 |
| Hi. Beautiful chapter. I like your description of Glorfindel's feelings and emotions. Looking forward to see what Erestor is doing in his search for the men. Great work. Author Reply: thank you so much. I´m glad it worked. I could not imagine the elf-Lords without some sort of irritation. The next chapter is almost done. Hope to see you there. Lai. | |
| minuial | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/15/2010 |
| Hi. Love the twins entrance in the story and what they are trying to do. Let's hope they succeed. And I'm glad that Erestor got angry and he will seek the men and deliver justice. Good work. Author Reply: thank you. I´m so glad it worked. I know that elves do not seek revenge but I cannot imaginge that they would not wish to bring the men to justice. I think we can have faith in Erestor. Thank you for reviewing. Lai | |
| minuial | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/8/2010 |
| Hi. It was good to see that you started posting a new story. And what a beginning! I hope that Glorfindel will find and punish those four men for what they did, not only to Elrond but to the other men from the village as well. And I hope to see the twins sometime in the story. Good work. Looking forward to the new chapters. Thank you. Author Reply: Hi minuial, I thank you for reviewing. I´m glad to see you again and that you like my new story. Glorfindel will not let the men go unpunished and the twins will of course appear later. The next chapter is nearly made. Until then. Lai | |