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tolo dan na galad (`come back to the light`)  by Laikwalâssê 48 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/27/2011
Very good beginning. Needless to say, my hope is great. Strange things happen in Middle-earth.

Your writing of the family's grief is well done.

Author Reply: Thank you for the praise. I´m glad the feelings came around believable. Thank you so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/27/2011
Comfort can be so difficult to accept when the pain and grief are so very new. Now--to live for her son!

Author Reply: how true. Hopefully she can find the strenght to remain. Thanks for letting me know your thoughts. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/27/2011
A terrible loss. Now, to find the bodies of the others.

Author Reply: what a loss indeed and what a sad task ahead of them. Thank you so much for your review, Larner.

ellieReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/26/2011
I'm glad that Elrond let his sons go with him and Erestor as well. They will be a big help and comfort and support along the way. Elrond is so sweet in his comfort and support of the widow and in his practicality of approach to her at this difficult time. That ending was very sad indeed. Poor little guy!

Author Reply: I think he will need all the support and his sons are adults after all but to bring condolence is the hardest part and I do not envy him. Thank you so much for reading and letting me know your thoughts. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/25/2011
A very sad chapter full of angst and sorrow and pain, Lai. The emotions of everyone were well written and believable under the circumstances. Looking forward to more.

Author Reply: I´m glad the display of emotions worked. It´s a sad situation after all. Thank you so much for reviewing, Fiondil. I appreciate it very much. Lai

ellieReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/19/2011
How very sad. I worry for Glorfindel.

Update soon!


Author Reply: Hi Ellie, How very sad indeed! I worry with you. The next chapter is already on the way. Thank you for the time to read and review. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/18/2011
Oh dear. Thinks look rather bleak for everyone, especially Glorfindel. Can't wait to see where you go with this.

Author Reply: Hi Fiondil, I´m glad to see you at the start of my new story and that you like it. Hope you like also where I go with this. Thank you so much for reviewing. Lai

minuialReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/18/2011
Sad and full of mistery beginning of the story. Looking forward to finding out what happened with Glorfindel and the rest of the patrol. Great work.

Author Reply: Thank you so much and I´m glad you like my new story. Sad indeed! See you at the next chapters. Thank you for reviewing. Lai

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