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Thunder & Lightning  by Lady Bluejay 69 Review(s)
FadesintothewestReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/1/2013
I love it! Wonderful so far so I do look forward to the next chapter. You really bring the story to life. Richly descriptive and the characterization wonderful!

Author Reply: Thanks a lot, glad you are enjoying.LBJ

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/31/2013
Love it. Yes, they can make good sparring partners. This is very well done, as were your other stories. Thank you very much!

Author Reply: Yes, more sparks yet!

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/31/2013
You capture Eowyn perfectly.Eomer seems too like his sister in lack of manners, but maybe he improves when you get to know him like she does. Eagerly awaiting more.

Author Reply: He doesn't improve for a while - but then I always imagined him as rather proud. LBJ

annajaneReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/31/2013
Just caught up to this story - and am loving it! I so like this couple and am always glad to read about them. And this is an excellent set-up.

Thank you!

Author Reply: Glad you are enjoying, thanks a lot for reviewing.

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/31/2013
Ah - good to see that Éowyn and Lothiriel have befriended each other - they could make a formidable pair if they put their minds to it, I think.

Author Reply: That's assuming they both want the same thing!

LuthorielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/24/2013
Funny, the night that I first started reading this, I dreamed about gulls and terns....

Author Reply: My goodness, it must have been a powerful image LoL. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/23/2013
Hmm, that encounter didn't go so well. Let's see how this will progress. I love the way you set the scenery and the mood for this story. I never thought about where all the horses would end up after the battle. A discussion about 'horse-dung' in the streets? LOL.

Author Reply: I have always had a bit of a thing about how they dealt with the horses. They would have needed to feed thousands of horses and thousands of men. Tolkien sometimes missed the practicalities. LBJ

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/19/2013
This appears to be as great a story as many of your others. I really like your different take on what was happening between Cornallen and the coronation. So many changes had to be happening. Thanks.

Author Reply: Yes, I have always wondered about the practicalities of installing a new king and dealing with the huge amount of Rohirrim in the city. Not that the story is really about that but it was in my mind. LBJ

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/18/2013
A new story - hurrah! And a very interesting opening chapter it is, too.

Author Reply: Thanks. Glad you enjoyed. LBJ

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