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Burden of a Healer  by Laikwalâssę 40 Review(s)
SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/5/2013
Good one Lai! It seemed as if the patrol to obtain spider venom was going well, until you popped in that last line! The Elves giving comfort in song to their wounded was moving. You are spinning (pardon the pun) a dark tale and, as usual, I look forward to the next Chapter.

Author Reply: where would be the fun without a cliffhanger? LOL! Thatīs why we love the elves, right? Fierce warriors but also emotional companions singing for a comrade. Iīm glad you are still enjoying my story. The next chapter will reveal why the patrol has better to hurry. Thank you so much for reviewing, Semmley. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/3/2013
Ah! A cliffhanger! Time will apparently show how much further danger the party and its wounded members are in, then.

Author Reply: yes, they will learn soon enough and Elrond is waiting really desperately for their arrival. Thank you for reviewing, Larner, itīs always appreciated. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 7 on 9/15/2013
Okay, that was mean, leaving us hanging, more or less, from a tree branch wondering what has happened to Glorfindel, but Legolas was cute and if Elves could have heart-attacks, I think he almost gave the two healers one with his antics. Can't wait to see what happens next, Lai.

Author Reply: it was mean, you are right but with many armed Mirkwood warriors Glorfindel should be ok, or? Elrond is only half-elven an I think he was very close to a heart-attack. My beta willing the next chapter will be up soon. Thank you so much for reviewing, Fiondil. Itīs most appreciated. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 7 on 9/14/2013
On the ground, armed with a sword and with Mirkwood archers covering him, I am hoping Glorfindel will make it through unscathed. Now little Legolas makes a surprise entrance. Will his curiosity lead Elrond and Thornil searching for the antidote another way? A nice little cliffie. As always I look forward to the next chapter Lai.

Author Reply: Galadhion will hopefully be alert enough to come to Glorfindelīs aid, yet spiders are unpredictable and intelligent. Legolas was needed to lighten the dark mood, yet he almost gave the healer a heart-attack, I guess. How they will discover the antidote you will see in the next chapters. Thank you so much for an appreciated review, Semmley. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 9/14/2013
And he has reason to be fearful as we know, as he does not, that Glorfindel hit the ground with a couple of the most deadly spiders of the lot! Hope the other Elves have their bows ready!

Author Reply: they better have otherwise Elron will have another victim to mourn for. He has enough on his mind right now. Thank you so much for reviewing, Larner. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/31/2013
And so they are in Mirkwood and Glorfindel is going on a spider hunt. Should prove interesting. Let's hope the hunt proves successful as well. I like the way you portray Thranduil and the interaction between him, Elrond and Glorfindel. You can tell that they are good friends and are on easy terms with one another. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author Reply: yes, it should be interesting, but hunting big spiders is not really Glorfindelīs cup of tea, what he will find out the hard way. Iīm so glad you like my interaction of the three Elf lords; they are no easy characters. Thank you for a most appreciated review, Fiondil. Lai

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/29/2013
All the players are finally together. Now comes the harrowing search for the antidote, hoping to keep one step ahead of the orcs all the way. Elrond has the added fear for his sons. So looking forward to the next Chapter Lai.

Author Reply: Elrond has finally reached a promising working base yes, but spiders are not easy to hunt, which Glorfindel will soon find out the hard way. Mirkwood is a large territory and every minute can a new victim knock on the healerīs door. Next chapter is on the way. Thank you so much for reviewing.I really appreciate it. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/28/2013
At least they have a starting place, and have a good chance to find the antidote in a timely manner now.

Author Reply: a chance yes, but spiders are not easy to catch as Glorfindel will learn the hard way. Thank you for a much appreciated review, Larner. Lai

EllieReviewed Chapter: 6 on 8/28/2013
At last there is hope for some progress in learning more about the poison and finding an antidote.

Author Reply: hopefully their hopes are not in vain but with Glorfindel on the hunt.... LOL! Thank you so much for your review, Ellie

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/23/2013
A distinct relief to know his son wasn't a victim of the new poison, but the search grows more important to achieve. The trip to Lorien doesn't sound pleasant, though.

Author Reply: the trip will not be pleasant and with reaching their destination the goal will not be achieved. Elrohir was lucky but fate can catch up any minute. Elrond has to hurry. Thank you so much for reviewing, Larner. Lai

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