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| My name means hope by Laikwalâssê | 29 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/13/2015 |
| It is now that estel is most needed within the extended family. Author Reply: in fact, bodily ans spiritually! Thanks for reviewing, Larner. Lai | |
| obsidianj | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/13/2015 |
| At least Eldarion did not die immediately. Now the question becomes what if any damage was done. I can feel with Aragorn and Arwen. You did a great job giving me the feeling for how interminable the long wait for news was. Author Reply: we all know the anxiousness while waiting and hoping. I´m glad the feeling came through right. Thank you so much for a most appreciated review. Lai | |
| Semmley | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/20/2015 |
| Eldarion responded well to the twins healing trance, however, there is no doubt they must operate. Relieving pressure on the brain will most likely involve removal of bone fragments, so the parents cannot possibly be there. Like Aragorn and Arwen, we must sit in the waiting room and fret. Naturally, I'm waiting on your next update Lai. Author Reply: I can unsderstand Aragorn´s anger but it is the best decision to stay out of this, as the following chapters will show - evil grin. The elves will do a great job but healing is also coming from another source. Hope to see you at the next chapter, Semmley and so much thank you for a most appreciated review. Lai | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/9/2015 |
| Apparently the seizure made them change their minds. May Este guide their hands! Author Reply: they could no longer deny regardless the risk. They will need all the help they can get. Thank you so much for reviewing, Larner. I really appreciate it. Lai | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/8/2015 |
| Hmm... first the Twins say they won't operate and now they decide they will. Not sure what that's all about, though I'm sure we'll find out eventually. They're smart to deny Estel access. Doctors (and Healers) shouldn't operate on family members. The Twins, at least, can divorce themselves from what is happening and maintain emotional distance while working on the boy. Thanks for the update, Lai. Looking forward to the next chapter. Author Reply: even for them it is hard not to get emotionally involved, but their professionality won out to Change their minds. Estel has to be kept out without question. It will not become easier for all of them - that I can promise. Thanks so much for a most appreciated review, Fiondil. | |
| Semmley | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/3/2015 |
| The gravely ill child, Arwen's pain, the healer who has laid a terrible decision on the despairing Aragorn, give this story such an emotional edge Lai. But, the twins have arrived unexpectedly! What may we expect? Author Reply: to place the story on an emotional level was my intention and obviously it worked. LOL. Some hope has now arrived with the twins but can they work a miracle? Thank you so much for a most appreciated Review, Semmley. Lai | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/19/2014 |
| A most difficult and painful place for him to find himself. I rejoice that the twins have arrived so swiftly, while there is yet time. May the One guide their hands. Author Reply: the twins will need all help they can get. Profession is the one thing but some guidance from the One cannot hurt. Thanks for your loverly review, Larner. Lai | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/18/2014 |
| I'm glad you're able to continue this story , Lai. I sincerely hope the Twins will be able to help. It looks as if everyone is hanging on a thread emotionally and the object of their concern knows nothing about it, poor child. Author Reply: Hi Fiondil, I´m glad to be back. The twins have learned from the best but in this case they will need more than their skills. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate it. Lai | |
| Marianel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/17/2014 |
| Wheres Gandalf or maybe better Radagast when hes needed? I hope some Istari can show up for this and help Elladan and Elrohir somehow with Eldarion. I like Arwens fierceness, like a lioness, and I know that protective feeling. She is magnificent and Im sure she will be important as well as Estel in Eldarions healing poor child.Fantastic storytelling! Author Reply: I have not considered the Istari until yet, but that´s an intersting concept. This way I have always pictured Arwen; gentle but also fierce. I like the picture of a lioness. I´m so glad you like my storytelling and thank you so much for your lovely review, Marianel. Lai | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/15/2014 |
| Trepanning will help the child. I only hope that Elladan and Elrohir arrive in time! Author Reply: it may help but who can do this? and the twins are far away...... Thanks for reviewing, Larner. Lai | |