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The Eagle on the Ramparts  by Canafinwe 16 Review(s)
Kate Reviewed Chapter: 25 on 8/8/2017
Absolutely delighted to see another chapter. Thank you for posting.
I'm really enjoying how each of Thorongil's skills are slowly being discovered and used, and all with humility from him.

I couldn't help but feel a chill when Aragorn is looking east and thinking of the terror that dwells there.




LarnerReviewed Chapter: 25 on 8/2/2017
Ah, finally time to savor this tale!

I rejoice that Thorongil thought to go before the magistrate so as to better help Jamon, and it appears that Minardil has managed to find a beacon of his own to lead him to physical and emotional fulfillment in his attempts to support Jamon's own marriage.

At least Denethor knows now how deeply he is feared by the enemy, which must be both reassuring and capable of raising anxiety.

Good enough!

Reviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/31/2017
Canafinwe, I was thrilled to see a continuation of this fabulous story. I was even happier to see you writing again. I hope your pleasure in writing equals my pleasure in reading your words. So very glad to see you are back. Best wishes.

RowanfairReviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/30/2017
Thank you so much! I kept checking every other day lately in hope for a new chapter... vibrations must have reached you finally! ☺

I enjoyed Minardils reaction to the „wrong sister“ very much. I love these intertwining little sidesteps of yours. Looking forward to its unfolding.
Jamon on the other hand appears a little to bold in his way to deliver unexpected success to his Captain General. As proud as he finally may be to have gained that knowledge after all.

Anyway – can´t wait to read more…

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/30/2017
Seems like Thorongil's teachings to Jarmon were successful. But Denethor needs to be more careful in what he asks. If the prisoner does not talk or tells fairy tales, he will blame Jarmon and that is patently wrong.

KathReviewed Chapter: 25 on 7/30/2017
So good to have another chapter, Canfinwe. Was worried that you had had to give up Thorongil!
Hope Minardil will find love and poor Jamon is released soon!
Many thanks x

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