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Smoke & Mirrors  by Lialathuveril 118 Review(s)
whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 9 on 8/24/2016
Felt so sorry for both Eomer and Dordes in this chapter, wish Eomer didn't have toleave but I think this time apart will also help them evaluate their feelings for each other.

Author Reply: Yes, absence might make both of them take a look at their feelings and realise what they are.

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 9 on 8/24/2016
Very sweet domestic scenes of Eomer and Lothy, wish they had confessed their feelings around this time, it thrills me to read when they are reunited.

Author Reply: Wow, you've been busy reviewing - thanks so much! But if they had confessed their feelings in this chapter, the story would have been over much quicker ;-)

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 8/22/2016
A very fitting end - thank you!

Author Reply: Thank you for reading :-)

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 8/22/2016
A delightful end to an enjoyable story. I'm so pleased they have their much wanted baby.

Author Reply: Thank you! I'm sure Elfwine will be a very much loved and appreciated child :-)

Thanks for reviewing and take care!
Lia

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 15 on 8/22/2016
At last they have had their much needed talk, but it almost went horribly wrong. That was a surprise that she was in love with Boromir! I like the idea Lothiriel has visions like Faramir.

Author Reply: I just couldn't resist having one last misunderstanding ;-) And I thought since Imrahil has very distant Elven ancestors too, something like Faramir's gift might be running in his family too.

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 14 on 8/22/2016
I'm so glad Eomer is willing to make peace with the Dunlendings.Poor lothiriel having to put up with his moods.

Author Reply: I couldn't help thinking of the situation of Germany at the end of Word War II and how the Allies managed to turn it from a defeated enemy into a valuable ally. Hopefully the Dunlendings will one day be at peace with the Rohirrim.

KathReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 8/22/2016
Thank you for the extra slice! Lovely to meet the baby and see them all so happy!

Will definitely read your book and look forward to more LotR fan fiction!

Author Reply: You're welcome! I thought it would be nice to have a glimpse of their family life, now that they're finally honest about their feelings.

Thanks for reviewing and until the next time!

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 13 on 8/22/2016
Poor Lothiriel. What a temper Eomer has! A gripping chapter.

Author Reply: Thanks! Of course Eomer has his reasons for not trusting the Dunlendings, but sometimes you have to take a leap of faith.

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 12 on 8/22/2016
Eomer is certainly in love as he is overreacting to everything Lothiriel tells him. I hope he doesn't curb her free spirit. So sad there is no baby yet.

Author Reply: He is overreacting a bit, isn't he! But then he still hasn't quite got her measure.

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 11 on 8/22/2016
I loved all Lothiriel's little touches. Great to see Aragorn and Faramir.

Author Reply: LOL - I thought you'd like to see them ;-)

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