French Pony · 19 November 2003 · Chapter 2: Spirit Reforged
Again, very nice. It's clear from the very beginning of this part that the species of the smith is different; I like how you differentiate the thinking patterns between Dwarf and Elf. There is more song in this story, and more of a sense that the sword is being made especially for one particular person. Yet the love for good metal still shines down through the ages. This is a great tale, and I'm glad I read it.