Larner
· 12 July 2025
· Chapter 99999: Story Notes - Finished!
My imagining of the death of Lalia is told in "Second Mum." Love that we both imagine Pearl as having received the old dame's respect. She deserved that respect, I believe.
Author's reply
I've added "Second Mum" to my reading list! I am looking forward to spending some time reading fanfic this weekend, for sure..
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 99999: Story Notes - Finished!
Interesting notes. Yes, Ferumbras became Thain at his father's death, but as the Took Lalia had too much power for such a difficult individual.
Thanks so for several hours of entertainment!
Author's reply
You are very welcome. Thank you, in turn, for reading and for taking the time to share your insights and impressions. I quite appreciate your thoughtfulness.
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 9999: Epilogue
A wonderful return of a beloved and brave sheepdog. And to be commanded to hold the children under his charge during the wedding--I laughed and applauded!
A wonderful story. Your Pearl is much different than mine in many ways, and I honor her for her willingness to sacrifice her happiness for the sake of her family's needs.
Thanks for this!
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 37: Last, But Not Least
And treasure it is! Both she and Isum have earned their treasure the hard way. May they both be blessed!
And bless Ferumbras for his wisdom and sense of fair play that his mother failed to share!
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 36: Aftermath
Hooray for Frodo! About time someone takes time to get Pearl home, now that Lalia is gone and I'm certain Ferumbras will not make her live up to her promise. Sara has the chance now to catch up to his cousin and see his brother-in-love restored to his proper place.
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 35: Best Laid Plans
Not the Thain, but the one she truly loved! And Lalia brought upon herself her own death for fears for her son! No wonder Pearl fainted--I certainly would have in her position.
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 34: For the Sake of Love
Tough choice. Terrible choice! And Isumbold must stand by....
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 33: Seeds of Conspiracy
So, that is her plan, eh? Now, to stop her in her tracks. And Pearl can perhaps let Ferumbras know so he, too, can stymie his mother.
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 32: Food for Thought
Time for her to follow Rosemary, then? I hope to see her tell the witch off!
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 31: The Long Ride Home
Stupid rule. Now to get home and actually be able to talk with one another.
What a terrible thing to do! The obnoxious old crone!
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 29: The End of the Trail
At least they found the lad. Now, to get him to a warm, safe place. Alas for Lop.
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 28: The Search
Lop? Oh, yes! No wonder you want to bring him back!
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 27: Missing
Indeed, not safe for a child.
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 26: The Colour of Sunshine
A delightful gift, chosen by the proper companion. Love it!
(Not that Aragorn would want that sunshine-yellow cloak--it would not have fit him! Heh!)
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 25: Resting Comfortably
At least there is understanding now--that the fever has broken. And now he will survive his mother. Am looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 24: Battle Ahead
Strep throat? Yes, take care of it as best can be done.
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 23: Repercussions
Repercussions indeed! All involved would be at Lalia's mercy.
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 22: On to Buckland
Oh, yes--a spot of tea will do well right about now! Glad Rory is so obliging!
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 21: Good Measure, Heaped Up, and Running Over
Yes, time to earn his keep. And Rosemary is safe.
Love how this is turning out for the good. Even Ferumbras is on the side of Ferdi's family.
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 20: Departure
Yay! Guess who has grown a spine at the proper moment! Good thing that Ferdi hasn't been speaking, so he will not be forced to tell what he might guess.
And Father has realized what he must do--until the moment is right for the truth to come out. Heh!
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 19: Into Thin Air
A daughter for his hearth, and happiness in store for his son for the future. And freedom from an unwanted betrothal to and older Hobbit who most likely will be relieved as well.
Bittersweet is a dear, clever one, isn't she? Love her!
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 18: A Switch
So, cutting Estella's hair is not her first experience with such a disguise! Quite an effective plan, I believe. How appropriate!
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 17: A Rescue
Oh, yes! The perfect solution, and there's nothing for Lalia to do about it! Heh! Love seeing the harridan being over ridden in this manner! And this is the marriage proper for both her and Hallie!
With Ferdi's blessing, even their father can do nothing against them. Hooray!
Larner
· 11 July 2025
· Chapter 16: Last Night
Unfortunately, fire has again caused its own distress in the troubled tween's heart.
Bless them all, including Lalia. A new year indeed, and hopefully without requiring Rosemary to sacrifice herself to Ferumbras.
But then, there is the Time of Troubles to come, as WE know. And we know where it is that Estella Bolger goes to find safety from a fate worse than the one Rosemary faces now!