One Life by frodo16424
grumpy · 15 December 2003 · Chapter 9: Living
hi there, just wanted to tell you how much I liked this story and your other stories. This one is great, I like the way it uses a spirit to show what would or would not happened if one of the twins was not arround. The part about Radagast at the end was very good. looking forward to more
Lairewen · 11 December 2003 · Chapter 7: Love
Eeep! Evil cliffie! Great chapter, though I doubt Estel will be doing that run anytime soon! More? Please?
Jay of Lasgalen · 7 December 2003 · Chapter 5: Training
Oh dear, poor Elrohir - all those things going wrong for him! I have days like that, too. I take it that the knife demonstration went horribly wrong? Was it because Elrohir was sulking and not paying attention? No wonder he feels so awful! Can I come and give him a hug? Jay
Yuna_Dax · 3 December 2003 · Chapter 3: Sorrows
OOO this story is intruiging... To ponder what could trouble Elrohir that he would quarrel with his twin, then seek solitude is most puzzling, but makes for rivetting reading. Please continue!
Author's reply
I am so glad you like the story. The next chapter will tell of Elrohir's reason for seeking solitude. Hope you enjoy the reat of the story
lindelea · 2 December 2003 · Chapter 3: Sorrows
fascinating premise, sort of "It's a Wonderful Life"? (At least, I have that movie on the brain, what with the season and all...) How much more is there? p.s. appreciate all the translations at the bottom of each chapter, very considerate of you
Author's reply
Thank you for your review. You are correct, that is where I got my inspiration (no angels will get wings, however LOL) really don't know just how much more, the story is basically writing itself. (Do have last chapter planned, tho LOL) p.s. Thank you, it seems easier to put them at the end, rather than break up the flow of the chapter.
Lairewen · 2 December 2003 · Chapter 3: Sorrows
Oh, this is really good! I can't wait to see what happens next! More soon please!
Author's reply
Thanks! I will do my best to update as quickly as possible. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Jay of Lasgalen · 2 December 2003 · Chapter 3: Sorrows
I wonder why poor Elrohir is in such a foul mood? Thinking everyone would be better off if he was dead! (He'd better come to see me. I could convince him otherwise.) And who is his mysterious escort? I like this - it's rare for a story to focus on just one of the twins. What will we see when we get to Estel and Elladan? Will Elladan be grieving the loss of his twin, or has Elrohir never existed? I can't wait for the next chapter! Jay
Nilmandra · 30 November 2003 · Chapter 1: Quarrels
Elrohir is rather upset! I hope that whatever has turned his mood black is not serious!