Taken by Iorhael
Grey Wonderer · 1 January 2004 · Chapter 5: Tight-lipped
I still wonder how Frodo is going to deal with this. He is so on his own at this point as he has no way to tell anyone what is going on without being hurt. I hope the others don't start to think that Frodo is out of his mind. LOL So far he hasn't given them much of a cover story has he? You have really spun quite a tale this time! You have me hooked and I can only hope you update quickly.
strider's girl · 30 December 2003 · Chapter 6: Critical Decision
Oh my goodness! This is defenitely getting exciting and scary. I'm glad that Frodo managed to get his important message across to Sam, so hopefully he can tell the others what is going on. I have to admit you have a real handle on all the characters and have developed them really well! I can imagine each characters expressions and how they speak, and actions as well! Keep up the great work! Can't wait for me.
powerwriter · 29 December 2003 · Chapter 6: Critical Decision
Whoa, this is an awesome story...a little gruesome in a couple places but that's okay! The angst is magnified more than I ever seen it in a fic. Good job! I'm thrilled to no end :D I started writing a similiar story ("Do You Know Real Nightmares") like this about a month ago then I found yours and was like "someone had the same idea!" but that's okay. I haven't posted mine yet. I have no idea how you're going to end this fic, but I can't wait to find out! Please continue it!
strider's girl · 23 December 2003 · Chapter 5: Tight-lipped
This was a really good chapter. It's taken me! Your characterisation of all the characters are very well done. Keep up the good work.
Author's reply
Really glad to hear from you again! Thanks a lot for the encouragement.
Grey Wonderer · 20 December 2003 · Chapter 4: Terror
So, far I love it. Have no idea how you will resolve it as both Frodos seem unable to give any information to anyone without putting themselves in terrible danger. I hope you have a master plan because this seems like it might be a no-win situation to me. Can't wait for more.
Author's reply
I do have a plan but I'm not sure how to put it in paper. I hope I won't need too much work for it. This does seem hopeless. BTW, I have around 10 chaps already.
Grey Wonderer · 20 December 2003 · Chapter 2: Frodo, The Fog, and Strider
Frodo in two places at once and feeling the effects of Sauron in both! This is very exciting. Takes a whole different look at this part of the journey. Love how the parts of the actual story are worked into you new story. Very well done.
Author's reply
Am I wicked or what? :) to put Frodo in those kinds of situations. Thanks for liking it!
Grey Wonderer · 20 December 2003 · Chapter 0: The Fog
A new idea! I would never have thought of this one. I waited until there were a few chapters on this one to begin reading, and so far I am totally hooked. Can't wait to see how this is handled.
Author's reply
And I waited to know if people actually like it or not. He he. You see, actually it's influenced by my country's culture, something strange like this. But, thanks so much for reading it and reviewing it, too!
strider's girl · 19 December 2003 · Chapter 4: Terror
This is a very unique story. I am liking this alor with the changes in characters. I've never read a story like this before. Keep up the excellent work!
Author's reply
Excellent? *blush* I'm so glad to hear from someone new. Thank you very much for your comments!