Fashion Statements by Grey Wonderer

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EstellaB · 30 April 2006 · Chapter 7: Crime and Punishment

Oh dear. I *am* Pervinca. I may have put my little brother in one of my pretty flowery dresses when I was younger. He may then have answered the door to on of Dad's army people. The consequences may have been similar.

Author's reply

LOL Now that's funny! So you actually did this one? Thanks for reading and for the funny story in return.

Dreamflower · 28 March 2004 · Chapter 7: Crime and Punishment

This was hilarious! It was worth you messing with the timeline a bit; it's a good thing I wasn't drinking anything! ( chuckle...snort..wipe eyes )

Author's reply

Why thank you so much! This one has gotten the least hits of any of my stories and I figured that was because of what I did with the timeline. I am always happy when someone finds it and enjoys it in spite of Bilbo not being where he is supposed to be. I love Bilbo and can help but wish to include him in all of my fictions, even if he shouldn't be there. LOL

Hai · 25 February 2004 · Chapter 7: Crime and Punishment

I liked Frodo's plight with the vest! Saradoc reminding Bilbo how he thought originally about it helped Frodo out a great deal! I laughed so hard picturing Pippin and Merry dancing together and Pippin in a red dress! Wonderful! It was such a fun story, thank you for sharing it!

Author's reply

So glad that you liked this one. When I first posted it, it didn't seem to be doing too well and I thought maybe putting Pippin in a dress had been a bit much, but the longer it is up here, the more it seems to be getting nice reviews. Thank you and thank you for reviewing.

Krystal · 27 January 2004 · Chapter 7: Crime and Punishment

Oh, dear, dear Pippin! What a laugh! And Bilbo! Oh, that was great!

Author's reply

Hey, two reviews from a new reader in one night! Thank you! This one was written all in one day as it just kept coming at me. I've had less reviews on it than any of my others and so I wasn't sure if people were upset about my leaving Bilbo in the Shire after he was supposed to be long gone. LOL I really needed him for this one, so I took the risk. Your kind words are appreciated! Come back any time.

PIppinfan1988 · 20 January 2004 · Chapter 4: The Truth of the Matter

What a wonderful tale! I love it!

Author's reply

Couldn't have done this without Bilbo! I am so sad aren't I? LOL

PIppinfan1988 · 20 January 2004 · Chapter 2: Alterations

This is simply too funny! LOL... Look for an email--I can't post it here! PF

Author's reply

Now that makes me wonder! LOL Good new? Bad news? You have me on pins and needles now.

PIppinfan1988 · 20 January 2004 · Chapter 1: Party clothes

Oh my gosh, GW! I've been rolling on the floor laughing my butt off! This is too funny! LOL! You have a great way with humor! Pippinfan

Author's reply

Thank you! I'm glad this is making you laugh so far. I really don't think this one has done as well as the AU ones have.

PIppinfan1988 · 20 January 2004 · Chapter 0: A few words

LOL... Get back here, Bilbo! Grey Wonderer needs you!

Author's reply

This was such a cheat wasn't it? LOL

Pearl Took · 26 December 2003 · Chapter 7: Crime and Punishment

This was a blast!!! Thank you for the laughs! Pearl Took

Author's reply

Thank you for reading it and for your generous review! This one is my least read story so far and since publishing it, I have thought to remove it from the site several times as it seemed to be lacking readers. I thought maybe dressing the hobbits funny had been a bad idea. Keep encouraging me and I just might do it again! LOL

Chigger · 16 December 2003 · Chapter 7: Crime and Punishment

Heeheeheehee! Hohohoho! Hoohoohoo, Pippin you're positively evil. But right now, it's time to get off the computer and into bed after a wonderful story, so I'll say goodbye now, and have fun in Buckland!

Author's reply

Thanks for reading. You saved this one from being almost reviewless! Before you turned up, it had one very nice review. I will consider this one a learning experience. Never play dress-up with your hobbits! LOL

Chigger · 16 December 2003 · Chapter 6: Explanations

Sweet revenge for Frodo! Serves you right, Merry.

Author's reply

I love it when things turn around and the one doing all of the teasing gets teased.

Chigger · 16 December 2003 · Chapter 5: Merry's Partners

Quick! Escape to a dark cave somewhere and plot some evil revenge against your sister, Pippin!

Author's reply

Sounds like a plan, but maybe he could just use Frodo's dark alcove, closer to home.

Chigger · 16 December 2003 · Chapter 4: The Truth of the Matter

Hurray for Saradoc! At last someone's talking sense! But I still haven't found Pippin yet! So, I'm heading back in.

Author's reply

I have always liked Saradoc! I seem to write him in when I can for some reason. Good luck on the Pippin search!

Chigger · 16 December 2003 · Chapter 3: Hide!

It will serve Merry right if Fatty ruins his evening. Maybe then he would regret making Frodo wear that vest and teasing him about it. As to Pippin . . . I just feel sorry for him. (: But I'm heading back to laugh at him again. :)

Author's reply

Maybe I have gone too far? LOL Couldn't help myself on this one. Kinda like Deck The Halls, it started writing itself at some point. That may mean that I can lay blame on someone else if it flops!

Chigger · 16 December 2003 · Chapter 2: Alterations

She's not going to make him wear it is she? IS SHE?! She better not. I'd write longer reviews, but I'm quickly running out of time on the computer. AAAA!!!

Author's reply

Wellllll, she just might! LOL

Chigger · 16 December 2003 · Chapter 1: Party clothes

This is getting good! What are they going to make Merry wear? an apron? or another tacky vest? :)

Author's reply

So? to this point it was on track?

Chigger · 16 December 2003 · Chapter 0: A few words

"If the timelines don't work, you break them." (a slight misquote of Han Solo's in one of the Star Wars books) I shall now delve into this story as much as possible. Time flies when you're on the Internet! :)

Author's reply

Good to hear from you! This poor little one hasn't drawn much interest. Will be glad to hear what you think as I believe there are some trouble spots! Or most people are not into the Han Solo way of life.LOL

Zebra Wallpaper · 13 December 2003 · Chapter 7: Crime and Punishment

This was such a fun story to read! I actually laughed out loud several times while reading it. You're very good at capturing hobbity humor and sweetness--I especially liked how they teased each other and how Frodo showed so much affection for Bilbo. Thank you for writing this and for sharing :)

Author's reply

Thank you so much for this lovely review! As you may have guessed, I am a big Hobbit fan and I love stories about them. That is how I found this site. I read a fiction on a site called "Mushrooms" and was hooked! I was afraid that having Bilbo in this one long after he is supposed to have left might keep some people from reading it. I just couldn't see it without Bilbo, though. I just love Bilbo! I'm glad that it gave you a laugh or two.