On the Road to Imladris by jenolas
rhiannon · 12 May 2004 · Chapter 10: Namarie
What a great story. It really brought Eldarion to life and it is nice to know that the Twins have lost none of their mischief :). I especially liked the ending with the butterfly and the whispered namarie - very touching. Thanks for a great story.
Karri · 1 August 2003 · Chapter 10: Namarie
A wonderful story! Your portrayal of Thranduil was excellent. The twins were delightfully mischievious. Haldir was marvelously serious. Eldarion really came alive for me. Celeborn was wonderfully Celeborn-ish. :D I adored the line about fearing having to deal with two angry elves in the first chapter. Your descriptions of Mirkwood, Lorien, the river, and Legolas and Thranduil decked out in their formal attire were exquisitely vivid. And the closing scene was beautiful. Excellent work!
Author's reply
Thanks so much, writing about so many delightful elves was fun and I am glad you enjoyed the story.