Reviews (5)

Kellen · 27 January 2004 · Chapter 5: Going Home

Ah, Bill, I am remiss... I realized this morning that I had not, in fact, finished reading "Deeper than Skin" and immediately set to rectify the problem. And a problem it was, with, fortunately an easy solution. That solution being: Read an immensely detailed, rich story, with an emotionally wrenching, rather stark realization that, though the world is not perfect, there is a purpose and plan to it. What a beautiful coming of age, epiphany type story! That said, Bill, I am SO sorry I haven't finished it earlier. *beats head on desk* Ow. Remind me not to do that again. Anyway, I must have just lost track of it... I love this one. I was sitting, tears in my eyes, during the whole last chapter. Kudos to ya!! Cheers, Kellen

daw the minstrel · 16 January 2004 · Chapter 4: The Wool is Lifted

I'm glad to see this story here, Bill. I enjoyed it on ff.net.

Jen Littlebottom · 8 January 2004 · Chapter 2: Mithion

Ahahaha... I love Thaltarma's vague response. The plot thickens - Thranduil owes Mithion a favour, certainly, but what is it that Mithion wants?

Jen Littlebottom · 8 January 2004 · Chapter 1: The Stranger

Ooo.. fascinating! I love little Legolas getting into trouble - and his older brother, trying so hard not to lose his temper. I spotted just one typo: “Not to me, but to your niece, you’re father, and Celebithil his advisor.” <-- you're should be your. But other than that, a most curious beginning, and I'm wondering who this Mithion is...

Nikara · 6 January 2004 · Chapter 1: The Stranger

I'm sure this will prove to be very interesting. It is well done, and I love the descriptions of your characters. Keep it up!