Lera
· 5 February 2004
· Chapter 4: Everything Is Going as Planned
Elana's thoughts of how this was so different than how she'd dreamed of having a baby was so touching, so poignantly put. I absolutely can't imagine the torture she's endured. Who is the king of Rohan?
Lera
· 5 February 2004
· Chapter 2: Newest Broodmare in the Stable
Oh, my gosh, how auful! You describe it all so vividly, Elana had my sympathy immediately. This is definitely a new plot line!
I liked how she stood up to the orcs with only a meager knife. You showed her strength with out doing any stupid Charlie's Angels stuff.
It is such an terrible and weird thought, a woman bearing a half-orc. Alright, off I go to read more!