Arquen · 16 February 2004 · Chapter 1
I saw your SSP at HA, and thought I'd take a look. I am blown away by this vignette. I have always been a sympathizer of Denethor's, and this story shows that everyone should be. The poor man was tormented in so many ways in the end, that his final act of desperation should be understandable, even if it was extreme. Your writing is very strong, and really drew me into Denethor's mind, even though it was not chapters long. You've done a great job!