To Pity a Father by Lindaleriel
Morwen Tindomerel · 24 March 2004 · Chapter 1: To Pity a Father
Very good. Agrees exactly with what I think is going through Pippin's head at during his first meeting with Denethor, (not that I'm biased or anything ;). Movie!Pippin both pities and fears Denethor. And is perceptive enough to sense there is something more, and worse, than grief going on here even if he isn't knowledgeable enough to know what.
Grey Wonderer · 24 March 2004 · Chapter 1: To Pity a Father
Very lovely. Shows the feelings behind all of Denathor's angry as well as giving voice to Pippin's guilt and fears. Very interesting.
Sam's Amy · 23 March 2004 · Chapter 1: To Pity a Father
Um you need to format your atory into separate paragraphs as it'll make it easier on the eyes to read but other than that your story really is good!
Author's reply
Thanks for reviewsing! Sorry about the missing paragraphs. I'm trying to fix it, but I'm not too good with computers. I'm rather at a loss as to what happened to my paragraphs, as they were there when I first posted it, but they seem to have disappeard. I'm really glad you liked the story anyway! It's my first ever. Lindalëriel