Reviews (9)

Kitt of Lindon · 19 April 2004 · Chapter 2: Spoilt Little Monsters

That is perhaps the sweetest little Legolas story I've read, and that's saying something because I've read alot of them. The switches from Legolas' point of view to Thranduil's are flawless.

LadyArwen · 12 April 2004 · Chapter 2: Spoilt Little Monsters

I like this. I like this very much. We don't see much of Legolas' heart in later times, and it is nice to see a story that shows us what his life as a young Elf could have been... Very touching. Kudos on a great story thus far.

mistry89 · 5 April 2004 · Chapter 2: Spoilt Little Monsters

"I can try" Poor Thranduil, and poor Legolas - we all have bad days and all he can see is that his day would be better if he had a naneth. Thank you

mistry89 · 5 April 2004 · Chapter 1: Daisy Chains

"That was me." Oh, this is lovely. A strong image of a dirty elfling at the end day trying to summon up a memory to please his father - and Thranduil wishing he could .. Well, "If wishes were horses ...." Thank you.

Pirate_chica · 25 March 2004 · Chapter 2: Spoilt Little Monsters

Aw that was precious!!! Im a sucker for little Legolas...so cute!! That was so cute and funny! *sigh* I especially loved the last chapter! So cute!!eee!!! ~Lar

Amlee · 25 March 2004 · Chapter 2: Spoilt Little Monsters

What a great, but yet sad story! Can't help but love Legolas! Please keep it going!

calenore · 24 March 2004 · Chapter 2: Spoilt Little Monsters

Oh, this is wonderful. It is very touching and heartwrenching.... good job.

rikwen · 24 March 2004 · Chapter 1: Daisy Chains

How like looking a photo album that has pictures of you as a small child. Everyone talks about this and that happening that day and even though you were there, you don't remember. But you remember other things that happened. Thranduil hoping that his son will remember some things with his Naneth by telling his son about events that happened when she made Legolas' quilt, Legolas not sure what he remembers or whether he remembers at all. You have a good start on portraying a small elf and the problems Thranduil faces in raising a child alone. Even though he is king and probably has many servants, noone makes up for the lack of a parent. Hope to see more.

Lera · 24 March 2004 · Chapter 1: Daisy Chains

Aww, that was really sweet. It must be so hard to be a single parent, especially when you're dealing with your own grief. You showed both Thranduil and Legolas's points of view well. Thranduil, really desperate that Legolas remember that important lady, and Legolas, desperate to remember, but frightened that he does not. One little typo: "Did one of the big girls teach me?" I think you meant "teach you." Sweet little story. Thanks for the enjoyment.