Aloysius · 21 May 2004 · Chapter 4: The First Engagement
You describe the confrontation with great tension and vivid detail, and I like how you foreshadow their next meeting - very effective.
A Destined Reckoning by Gaslight
A Destined Reckoning by Gaslight
Aloysius · 21 May 2004 · Chapter 4: The First Engagement
You describe the confrontation with great tension and vivid detail, and I like how you foreshadow their next meeting - very effective.