Hope by Lily Frost
Aranel · 1 March 2005 · Chapter 2: Setting Out
This is great! I found your link through the MC group, and I don't regret "side-tracking" to read this... You've managed to leave Gilraen alive (=P) and woven it into a very reasonable story... though one thing i'm not used to is that Elrohir seems to be more mature than Elladan...
nessa · 28 October 2004 · Chapter 2: Setting Out
please do keep going, it is a good story. I'm not fantastic at so reviews so i'll leave it there
Kathira · 9 April 2004 · Chapter 1: Arathorn's Fall
This is excellent, with nice characterizations and lovely canon details. So good in fact, that I hate to see it marred by even a minor spelling problem - it's "bury" not "burry." I hope you will continue with this story, and even more that you will continue developing your already considerable writing skills, and especially that you will try your hand at a longer story.
Author's reply
Thank you so much for the lovely review! I've corrected that, and the use of 'of' instead of 'off' in the summary. I have a long story that needs some editing before posting here, it's on fanfiction.net right now.
webster · 9 April 2004 · Chapter 1: Arathorn's Fall
Lovely--you convey emotion without wavering into melodrama