Reviews (15)

Shield-maiden of Rohan · 8 April 2025 · Chapter 5

Hi! Are you still here? Will this story be updated? It has left off very much at a cliffhanger, and besides wondering if Éomer was hurt, I would like to see more Éomund and Théodred, not necessarily together. I first read this earlier this year, and liked it.

SimplegirlfromLP · 2 June 2019 · Chapter 4

I love that Theodwyn is so feisty and yet she still is soft and tender and that her fearsome warrior husband is just a wee bit fearful of dealing with his formidable wife.

EomerofEastfold · 19 July 2004 · Chapter 5

How utterly unfair to leave off at such a critical moment....... But, I'm anxious to see what becomes of it. And, my goodness, if I was Eomund, I would have to agree with Theodwyn's choice not to reveal anything. More because I'd be worried about how much I could be being made a fool of, but also because that kind of thing is, well, private.

Donna Lynn · 15 July 2004 · Chapter 5

Wow! What a cliffhanger! No pun intended, sorry. Reminds me of those cliffhanger stories they used to show at movie theaters and used again on early TV where I saw them (when I was a very little kid!). I'm anxious to find out which three boys fell off the high side of the wall and if they or any of the other boys are seriously hurt. And if one of them is Eomer.... I like your glimpses of Eowyn and Eomer in the kitchens and Eowyn not liking to sew. Typical little children and very sweet. I'd like to see more of Theodred and his interactions with his cousins. That is the only thing I'm missing in this story. I'm so glad you are continuing the story of Eomer and Eowyn's childhoods. Orcs and Babes is still my favorite story about Eomer and this is just as enjoyable. Thanks for writing them!

daw the minstrel · 13 July 2004 · Chapter 5

I recognized the wifely scene. Women tell one another stuff that would make men choke. My best friend's husband once asked her how in the world someone else had come to tell her something and we both laughed because it was the kind of thing that women just tell. Anyway, the boys appear to be in trouble. From their point of view, they were just having a good time, but from the adults' point of view, they wandered into danger when told not to. And then, of course, the wall appears about to collapse. Not good.

EomerofEastfold · 30 June 2004 · Chapter 4

I don't know, Eokat. There was some great content in this chapter, but it all seemed to fly by so fast. I think there's enough here that you concentrate on certain moments more, like Eomund telling Theodwyn that someone else will be taking care of the children, and maybe come up with enough to split this into two short chapters or go for one long one. Anyway, glad to see Theodwyn is going to recover. It would be really angsty if she stayed ill for the next three years.

daw the minstrel · 28 June 2004 · Chapter 4

I can see the future Eowyn in this Theodwyn, and that's good, I think. I liked the image of the little boy creeping into the king's bed with his undoubtedly icy feet. They tend to sprawl all over the place too. How nice fof Theoden!

EomerofEastfold · 10 June 2004 · Chapter 3

Sorry, meant to write this review long ago, but kept getting sidetracked. Anyway, I loved Eomund's reaction when Theoden spoke of him bringing Theodwyn *home* to Meduseld. He must love her dearly to get snappish with his king over a little slip of the tongue. I would have though Theoden to resent that just a little; after all, he is very fond of his sister as well. Is this illness going to be what eventually claims Theodwyn? I always imaginied her as being so wrought with grief over her husband's demise that it devestated her body. Though, I'm sure either way Eomund's death didn't help matters. Oh, and, how did Theodwyn suffer a miscarraige? You'd think Eomund would have kept her relaxing and in bed as much as he could.

Kitt of Lindon · 10 May 2004 · Chapter 3

I had feeling you would update today. Glad the feeling was true! Same as Daw there, I love the picture of Eomund searching for a doll. I am relieved they made it to Meduseld with out much trouble. (Excluding the doll incident, I suppose.) You write Theodred as a very fun character. Now that they're in Edoras, perhaps we'll see more of him? *big pleading eyes* (And I simply adore the name of Helm.)

daw the minstrel · 10 May 2004 · Chapter 3

I love the concern for family shown here. And Eomer is just as cute as he can be. I also like the image of big strong Eomund off in search of a doll!

EomerofEastfold · 2 May 2004 · Chapter 2

Sorry about the lack of reviews. I've been out of the reading loop for a little while now. Anyway, Orcs and Babes ended sooner than I would have liked, but at least now we have this. You still seem to me as someone who understands the Rohirrim rather well, as can be seen in the family dynamics of Eomund's household. Little Beoring should learn the sacred virtue of honesty, like the rest of his kinsmen. :)

daw the minstrel · 29 April 2004 · Chapter 2

Eomund is really wonderful. He's strong and so concerned for his family. And poor Eomer. It hurts to be unjustly accused and he had been such a good big brother.

Kitt of Lindon · 29 April 2004 · Chapter 2

Eowyn punching an older boy and Eomer going off to save his sister and her doll-that is very much like them. Great explanation! Oh, I'm excited about their trip to Meduseld too. Can't wait for the next update!

daw the minstrel · 22 April 2004 · Chapter 1

Oh dear. Poor Eomer was so happy to see his father. What went on? He seems pretty unaware of having done anything wrong, so maybe he's being unjustly accused. Theodwyn has had a hard time. A miscarriage and sick kids would really take it out of you.

Kitt of Lindon · 22 April 2004 · Chapter 1

I am glad to see the sequel up! Once again you are showing me what life must have really been like for the folk of Rohan. Eomer and Eowyn's sickness, Theodwyn's miscarriage, they are all grim but profound details. Oh dear, is Eomer going to get into trouble on the first day of his father's arrival? I suppose I’ll just have to be patient and wait for the next update… *bangs head in eagerness*