Reviews (11)

Lily Frost · 29 May 2004 · Chapter 1: First Second Breakfast

Cute! Very sweet, an elf's first second breakfast is quite an event, isn't it? The title fits it perfectly.

Duchess · 17 May 2004 · Chapter 1: First Second Breakfast

LOLOLOL Very funny and cute! Loved it and hope to see more such wonderful vignettes as this one. *vbg*

LKK · 16 May 2004 · Chapter 1: First Second Breakfast

Very nice, Lindaleriel! The hobbits' eating habits must have been quite of shock for Legolas the first time he encountered them. I think you depicted the encounter wonderfully and quite humorously.

fadagaski · 15 May 2004 · Chapter 1: First Second Breakfast

That was so cute! I loved how the style was somewhat serious, but the subject matter was utterly ridiculous (as hobbit meals are)! It made it all the funnier to read.

Tinnuial · 15 May 2004 · Chapter 1: First Second Breakfast

Priceless!! Thanks for the laugh... You characterised them all so perfectly. Poor Legolas... what an experience!! ;)

daw the minstrel · 14 May 2004 · Chapter 1: First Second Breakfast

I am trying to imagine Legolas "waddling" without success, but I am amusing myself in the attempt. Hobbits certainly know how to enjoy life, you have to give them that! Nice glimpse of two contrasting bits of culture.

Bodkin · 14 May 2004 · Chapter 1: First Second Breakfast

Poor Legolas. The hobbits must be rather a shock to his genteel elven sensibilities. I love the amazement of elf / hobbit acquaintanceship.

Rhiannon · 14 May 2004 · Chapter 1: First Second Breakfast

Cute story. Poor Legolas, what chance did he have against 4 hungry hobbits???

Lindelea · 14 May 2004 · Chapter 1: First Second Breakfast

p.s. I can certainly understand the kitchen being thrown into *confusion* by the actions of four hobbits!

Lindelea · 14 May 2004 · Chapter 1: First Second Breakfast

A delightful little ramble through a hobbity morning. My only question: would the kitchen staff truly have been confused? After all, Bilbo had been living there for years. Other than that niggling little detail (sorry) I must admit I chuckled my way through the piece. Thanks!

shirebound · 14 May 2004 · Chapter 1: First Second Breakfast

Adorable! "All this was said quite bluntly as though anyone in their right mind would know such important facts as hobbit meal times." Just think of all the important things Legolas has yet to learn about hobbits!