Reflections from the Paradise of Elves by Bodkin

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Redheredh · 26 May 2005 · Chapter 63: Finding your Feet

Gosh, this series is good. What lovely sentiments about Estel and Arwen. I wonder about the precious creatures in our lives whose span in shorter than ours and how we may appear to them. I really liked Legolas' slight misinterpretation of a second childhood. But, he got his point across about acting like a child and being treated like one. Oh yes, "small and fiddly" buttons, of course. Every lady should have a basic, little button-up dress. Good for all occasions. A very nice episode of sad sighs and happy smiles.

Author's reply

I'm glad you like it! It's strange how everything shifts when you try looking from a different perspective. They sometimes try to show the world from an animal's viewpoint in wildlife programmes - it's strange. It must have been hard on Arwen to know that Aragorn would be around for such a short time - and to have to wait patiently for getting on for half his adult life to have her few moments of happiness with him. And odd for him - brought up among elves as one who would die and then to live among men with life spans half his. Small and fiddly buttons. Needing the long nimble fingers of an elf. I'm sure Legolas will be only too happy to help her! Aragorn may only have been around for a short time in their immortal lives, but he was quite key. Even without having married Arwen. I think they would remember him often. Although, by now, with love more than sadness probably.

Leaward · 26 May 2005 · Chapter 5: What if. . .?

I've finally got around to reading this, Bodkin, and what a treasure! I love the thought you've put into Arwen's being the lynchpin of the whole fight against Sauron. What a wonderfully insightful idea! And your twins and Legolas are portrayed so well, I'm quite enjoying this.

Author's reply

I'm glad you're enjoying it! It has been huge fun to write. No plots. No sustained action. Just three friends talking and teasing each other. The only thing is that it has become so long it's probably off-putting to those coming on it now who think it will take for ever to read. Each segment, though, is (by my rules) no more than two pages of Word and nobody but the twins and Legolas are allowed to speak. (Occasional sleeping elflings turn up.) I do feel there is a whole 'fate' element that means that Arwen was predestined to be Aragorn's emotional motivation for carrying on dauntlessly through the long years of trial. I hope you continue to enjoy them - and last long enough to get to some of my favourites!

elliska · 26 May 2005 · Chapter 63: Finding your Feet

I'm just staying so behind. Sorry. Poor Elladan. I remember the physical therapy after the broken leg. It is sooo ugly. I think he deserves to take a good, satifying revenge for Legolas and Elrohir giving him a hard time. The nemesis of an army of orcs cowering in dread before the elegant form of a single slight elleth. Smart mouth! :-) That line cracked me up. And it just went down hill from there--the elflings' pool! I like the thoughts of Estel that you throw in these every now and again, both the because it is noce to see them remembering him and because they usually entail an interesting discussion of the type I like. I think both Legolas and Elrohir are both likely right. Being a mortal amongst elves would be so strange, wouldn't it? Great job. I bet you love writing these. They are so cool.

Author's reply

They can say anything to each other - and not mind. I think that's one of the nicest and most sustaining parts of their relationship. And I'm sure Elladan will get his own back. And this is therapy, right? Elladan needs the warmer water. And it will be easier to get him to do the exercises properly if it's not too deep. Being a mortal among elves must be very hard on both sides, I reckon. And then I got to thinking about Aragorn's life span being about double all other men's - and that must be hard, too. Neither one thing nor the other. I do really enjoy writing these. And no answers are ever required to the questions they ask, so they can throw anything in! (The next one turned very philosophical. But then Elladan demanded that I put something else in next, so it's now next but one.)

Nilmandra · 26 May 2005 · Chapter 63: Finding your Feet

I must say that I know just how Elladan feels this morning...and am none the happier for it. Fortunately, my pets are unable to chastize me quite so well as Elrohir and Legolas.

Author's reply

You have my sympathy! Elladan sends his - and asks if you would like him to send round his helpers and give him a day off. He can't send the pool, but he says that Elrohir has got very good at massage and Legolas can pour a mean Dorwinion. Still - resting gives you plenty of opportunity to work on your history. Good to hear from you! Thanks.

Lindelea · 25 May 2005 · Chapter 63: Finding your Feet

Ah, delightful! Helpful Legolas! Legolas imitating Elrond? Is nothing sacred? Elladan entering his second childhood... well, sort of, if insults were to come to rest, that is. But somehow you also hit me in the pit of the stomach. I was just reading of Elessar's parting from Arwen again last night, you see. Wish we had a warm pool in our backyard. Or even a cool one.

Author's reply

Legolas can do a pretty good Thranduil impression, too. Although I seem to recall E2 comparing it to a fluffy chick imitating an eagle. You wouldn't want to stop them having the fun of insulting each other, would you? They're like cheesecake (sort of) - fluffy on the surface, but with rich depths. I think the juxtaposition of triumph and tragedy, love and loss, selfishness and sacrifice is what makes LOTR so interesting - and such fun to play with. Poor Arwen. Poor Elrond. Poor Elessar. No neat and tidy endings and promises of eternal happiness. It's like putting the Scouring of the Shire there at the end, just when you think you've got to the peaceful return home. Up to yesterday a hot water bottle would have been better than a pool here. But apparently it's going to be warm for three whole days and then get colder over the three day weekend. Of course.

daw the minstrel · 25 May 2005 · Chapter 63: Finding your Feet

Those two are putting Elladan on about calling Miriwen. If she has any sense at all, she'll let them deal with him while he's being so difficult. Interesting speculation about what Aragorn's aging process might have made him feel. Some odd moments must have happened when Elves, Dwarves, and Men lived alongside one another with such different life spans.

Author's reply

She might be quite kind to Elladan actually. She knows he's been suffering. But, on the other hand, she would not be pleased with Elrohir and Legolas! They'll have fun once they're in the water. They can dive for shiny things and splash all they want and Elladan's leg will benefit from the exercise. Bad enough with the different species living alongside each other with hugely different life spans - but the differences among the men are fairly huge, too. Aragorn might not have noticed much before he became king - too much of a wanderer - but after that, all his closest friends among men would have aged and died while he was still hale. He must have turned to the elves with relief. (And gained a better understanding of how they felt in relation to mortals, perhaps.)

lwarren · 25 May 2005 · Chapter 63: Finding your Feet

This must be the Reflection you were talking about, Bodkin. I agree with Elrohir that the elves in Aragorn's life would be a constant he could always rely on - unchanging (for the most part) and steadfast in their loyalty and love for him. When he (Aragorn) was destined to outlive the other adult males in his life (except for Gimli), that must have been a comfort to hold on to. Once again, I love the interaction between E2L - poor Elladan is having a time reconciling his weak leg and recovery with what he wants to do. And to have to do his exercises in the elfling pool...how humbling is that for a proud son of Elrond! Of course, Elrohir and Legolas have little patience with his procrastinating - using the threat of Miriwen was priceless! LOL She certainly wouldn't want to leave Ellanthir to take care of another big baby, that's for sure! :-) A wonderful addition to the whole set of reflections you are so aptly penning! linda (only one more day, Bodkin...I don't know...I heard where the Houston Zoo needs some new squirrels and I think mine just might fit right in! Thinking about giving them a call...) :-)

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It was! It was! Aragorn might well not have noticed others among men growing old so quickly before he became king, because he was never in one place long enough for the passage of years to make a difference, but I'm sure he found the company of elves a relief as the years passed. And he might have gained a perception of what it was like for the elves, maybe. I'm sure the proud son of Elrond (good phrase) will soon be joined in the water by the other proud son of Elrond and a rather proud prince. They might tease Elladan, but they wouldn't let anyone else do so. Elladan might even make sure that they join him with their clothes on, too! Miriwen is good at managing her husband - and he knows it. It would only take a look. (And he knows better than to bother her just now.) (Freedom! Freedom looms! Days free from the incessant chittering of little squirrel voices. I think the killer squirrels would make an excellent zoo exhibit - after all, they're a very rare species.)

Jay of Lasgalen · 25 May 2005 · Chapter 63: Finding your Feet

Poor Elladan! My sympathies are mostly with him in this chapter - how annoying it must be to have Elrohir and Legolas telling him that 'it will take time'! Swimming is no doubt the best therapy for him at the moment - and in a adult pool, the others would be able to join him - far better than the elfling's pool. The thoughts of Aragorn are sad, as usual - but I really liked Elrohir's observation: ' In many ways I think he found our changelessness to be a relief – at least he had no fear that we would decay into old age and death and leave him bereft.’ I'd never thought of it like that before!

Author's reply

Nothing is more infuriating than a slow recovery from injury - except having people hover over you while you have a slow recovery from injury. The adult pools are further away. And quite a lot colder. And I have no doubt at all that Elrohir and Legolas will be joining him in the elflings' pool. Possibly fully clothed, too! It occurred to me that if you were a man who lived about twice as long as everyone around you, it must be rather distressing to have lose your friends while you were still hale. A bit like being an elf (although less long term). It must be a relief to look at your elven friends and know that, barring accidents, they will be there for you always. I wonder if Aragorn gained a better understanding of the emotional difficulties of elf/mortal friendship once he was no longer a wanderer and he had to watch his friends age and die?

Redheredh · 19 May 2005 · Chapter 62: Brothers

Just got done reading this chapter and am still giggling. :D You never fail to entertain and to make a point. Or a least make me think about your character in depth and elvishness in general. More offspring for Elrond and Celebrian? I like your reasoning much better than Tolkien's simply saying that childbearing/rearing happens and then ends. That they turn their minds to other things. Coordinated outfits! Hehe! They'd look like a deck of cards when all together! Always looking forward to the next. Thanks for posting them so often.

Author's reply

Good! I'm glad to have provided entertainment! I can see - sort of - that elves probably would have years when they wanted to produce offspring and then they would choose not to. Otherwise they'd be like mosquitos, with kazillions of the little blighters. But I do think that reunion after long parting would probably make even long-established couples more - shall we say - active again. And might well result in a rash of baby-boom babies. And I wonder what the effect of rebirth might be on the 'we're-really-too-old-for-all-that' elf. They might find that the whole surge of joy, energy, freshness, whatever, might bring them into 'season' again. Well - if you have to choose and organise what your husband is wearing, you're not going to have him clash with your beautiful outfit, are you? You'd want him in the elven equivalent of a penguin suit so he could set off your general stunningness. There will be more. Count on it! Thank you. Author Reply: I just can't get the deck of cards image out of my head! Legolas and Elerrina as the King and Queen of Hearts, I think. Elladan and Miriwen as the Spades and Elrohir and Sirithiel as the Clubs. (I have some pictures I have associated with these characters - and Sirithiel is a painting by Prinsep called the Queen of Hearts - (who made some tarts). But the Elrondionnath would make better dark cards, I think.) Maybe Thranduil and Laerwen could make up the set as the Diamonds?

daw the minstrel · 19 May 2005 · Chapter 62: Brothers

I don't know how you manage all your characters. And with backstory, too. Must be talent. And organisation. And madness! Don't forget madness!

Author's reply

The thing is, you just get to love all the extra people just as much as the originals. I am very fond of Elrin and Elrohir's twins and the rest - they've become part of the family as far as I'm concerned. And I'm just as interested in the ins and outs of Sinnarn's relationship with Emmelin as I am Legolas's - and equally intrigued by Annael's ancestry and Beliond's wife and son. They're all real. So maybe madness helps. I'll make a note.

daw the minstrel · 19 May 2005 · Chapter 62: Brothers

Oh my goodness! I missed this entirely. How could I have done that? I just didn't see it at all. LOL at Elladan having to cope with an infant whose needs he simply cannot meet and then being wet on for his pains. Are you hinting that more babies are on the way here, Bodkin? How can you manage such a large cast???

Author's reply

Poor Elladan. But at least his leg is healing. Slowly. And he forgives Ellanthir - he knows that the kid can't help it. I don't know about more babies. It does all get rather complicated as they grow up. (Alfirin could do with one, though!) Actually, the hardest people to keep track of are those minor walk-ons who just get mentioned in passing. I'm having to make a list of names, so I can reuse them rather than just inventing another. It's all getting too complex just to remember it now. (I don't know how you manage all your characters. And with backstory, too. Must be talent. And organisation.)

elliska · 19 May 2005 · Chapter 62: Brothers

I saw this notification first thing in the morning yesterday and couldn't sit down to read it until now. Good thing I didn't try to read it at work because I was howling. I'm with Elladan--poor fellow! It's just pure meaness to sit an invalid down with an infant in his lap and no one within hearing range. That was funny--the description was great. And Legolas's "I do not sulk" crack me up too. Along with their discussion about clothing and complimenting their wives. You have to feel sorry for males...wait, no you don't. :-) I can actually hear my husband saying something like that only it couldn't be further from true--I don't choose his clothes so he compliments mine. I chose his clothes because I don't want him showing up for evening events in jeans and a T-shirt. But I loved the discussion of more elflings--my your cast grow larger! I would love to Thranduil and Laerwen with an elfling. And Legolas and Elerrina with another. And I really liked the end. Indeed Elrond and Celebrian would not have more until they knew the fates of the ones they had. I loved this one! Great job. PS. I almost forgot--last weekend I was at an encampment set in 1597 but the date wasn't of particular historic importance nor was the event. We were there only to train in a different fighting style (in longswords) and the treatise the training was based on came from the year 1597 so we chose to set the encampment in that year. So nothing too interesting unless your are into getting bruised training with padded weapons. I guess I'm crazy. :-)

Author's reply

Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it! Perhaps they didn't mean to abandon poor Elladan with the baby - it just happened as everyone was rushing around getting ready. Perhaps. And if the males in your life are happy to give up the responsibility for choosing their clothes, what sensible wife wouldn't dress them to her advantage? And they know better than to argue! Elflings are fine in infancy - but they take up a lot of space as they get older - note I am only dealing with it by showing them in smaller groups! Too many people together is just too complicated. I'm not sure if elfling production for the more mature elf is likely. (Part of me would love to present G and C with one.) But then what is the situation for the reborn? Are they more likely to have babies or less? What a decision. You fight with longswords? Goodness. Does it help with battle scenes? I'm most impressed.

The Karenator · 18 May 2005 · Chapter 62: Brothers

long fingers gently smoothed the fluff of black hair adorning the baby’s head and caressed the soft cheek. The wobbly head wavered in the direction of the hand. I love this image. Little baby fuzz and a Nana-seeking missile. As always the banter is fun and funny. I got a chuckle out of the matching outfits and Legolas as an arm ornament. He's apparently good for a few things. So is the House of Oropher thinking of increasing? The conversation at the end between E2 was very well done about why they didn't think their parents had considered having more children. I always enjoy how you construct these chapters. You give us lighthearted fun, but you always manage to slip in some very interesting deep thoughts. Another delightful chapter. What's next?

Author's reply

I love the expression Nana-seeking missile. So clever and so apt. Do you think Legolas would make good arm-candy? Many males, I suspect, look on one of the plus points of having a wife as never having to think about what to wear ever again. (I don't think Miriwen will worry too much. She has a well developed sense of humour and will probably enjoy the incident!) In some ways it would be rather fun if Legolas developed a baby sibling, wouldn't it! But I'm not sure it will happen. (Candidly, there are enough people around now - it can get really difficult fitting them all in. Not so much here, as only E2L ever appear - so a throwaway mention here or there is all that is needed. But Elflings is developing a cast of thousands.) It would have seemed a betrayal, I think, for Elrond and Celebrian to have more children. Makes them seem more like a commodity than an irreplaceable part of your life - you cannot substitute a new child for one you have lost. After all, if you could, Galadriel might well have turned up to find that Earwen and Finarfin had produced another half dozen - or Elrond arrived to find that Earendil and Elwing had given him three or four siblings. That might be even more difficult to deal with than getting to know your parents after several thousand years of separation. Earendil's probably next. Although he's getting into charted territory now, which is easier in some ways, but trickier in others. And then, Elladan needs to get back on his feet. And I think I promised E2L some time in the woods. And Arwen is tapping her foot. Galadriel and Celeborn don't mind being left on their own for a bit, though. When shall I fit in the work I have to do?

Jay of Lasgalen · 18 May 2005 · Chapter 62: Brothers

Phew! Elladan's more-or-less mobile again. That must be a relief for everyone - not just that Elrohir is no longer worried sick, but he doesn't have to endure any more bad jokes. Nice to see Elladan with his new son. I like these little glimpses of E2L with their offspring, and the besotted tenderness they all display. And the baby wets on Elladan. Ha! I particularly liked Elladan's insight at the end. It's true, if Elrond and Celebrian had had another child when they were first reunited, it would be an admission that they never expected to see the twins again. And E2 are not replaceable! (That came out as 'not irreplaceable' at first. Whoops!) Jay

Author's reply

The leg is taking its time - Elrohir was right that it was a very nasty injury - but it is recovering. I think Elladan will carry on with the bad jokes, though. Although the contrast between badly damaged brother and bad jokes will be less. Elves have so short a time with little children. They would be either totally inept or besotted, I think. And, for all the bold warrior on the surface, E2L are the besotted type. Ahh, for the days of changing baby boys, when this sudden fountain would spray everywhere! And the look little babies have on their faces at the time! Yes, I don't think they could have brought themselves to have another child - even if it were possible (I'm not quite sure whether elves can just have them at will at any stage in their lives.) I did have Elrond and Celebrian have a baby in one story, but I'm quietly ignoring that now, because I think they would have looked on it as an abandonment of hope. And E2 did come! In their own good time, but they did come.

The Karenator · 12 May 2005 · Chapter 61: Fallen

Oh my! That was quite a spill. I loved how you gave us the sense of Elladan being groggy and sort of out of it from the fall. This had Elrohir worried. ‘The fall cannot have done him any good.’ Yes, well, thank you Dr. Understatement. I don't know why, but I always find the understated or obvious humor the funniest. Rather warped possibly. But I sure get a kick out of it. Elladan has some wonderful one-liners. He was off in la-la land, cracking jokes and 'cooperating'! I don't blame Elrohir for wanting to get him home to Dr. Dad as quickly as possible. I really enjoyed this look at how the poor father-to-be got laid up with a bum leg. As always, it was just a delight to read. The whole idea of these snippets in time is just great. Such fun to read and you tell us so much in so few words. Looking forward to the next installment. Karen

Author's reply

Poor Elladan. He'd probably tell you that he was a bit uncomfortable, but he'd be all right in a minute. He and Elrohir are close enough that they know exactly when they need to be worried about each other - and this was a so worried that we've got to get him out of here and to Adar as quickly as elvenly possible. I had to stick the poor elf with a bad injury if I wanted him still to be incapacitated by the time the infant was born. Elven healing can be darned inconveniently quick at times! Thank you. Earendil next. Then probably an update on the state of the nation leg. (How's Daeron? And his adorable family?)

Viresse · 12 May 2005 · Chapter 61: Fallen

After all these years being twins, if Elladan's reaction would frighten Elrohir, I think Elladan's wound was really serious...and may really have other injuries that Elrohir could not find out due to the nasty rain and mud. Hope you'll post your next update soon.

Author's reply

Elrohir is enough of a healer himself - and close enough to his twin - that he knows serious when he sees it. Elladan is lucky that most of his body didn't end up under the horse, and that the mud slide was pretty fluid, without much in the way of rocks. He's going to be mending by the next one. In case you were concerned about him! He says not to worry - his Adar can fix pretty well anything he or Elrohir can throw at him. He's had plenty of practice. (Although Elrond raised his eyebrows and told him not to count on it.)

lwarren · 11 May 2005 · Chapter 61: Fallen

Now this was a serious moment! I am assuming this happens right before the last entry to Elflings...when Elladan couldn't walk with Miriwen as she gave birth to their new little one. It was funny-scary that Elrohir saw the lack of complaints, as well as the poor jokes, as a measure for the severity of his brother's injury. Loved the new 'travois'...that was very clever, Legolas! And I presume we'll hear via Elrohir or Legolas what Elrond's prognosis is for Elladan's recovery. Even in the midst of difficulty, these friends work together like finely tuned cogs! Very effective, and the humor still shines through, Bodkin. :-):-) linda

Author's reply

It wasn't originally part of the set - being a bit too serious for a Reflection. Yes, it is what had Elladan splinted and on crutches when Ellanthir was born. It had to be a serious injury, so that elven healing didn't have him bounding around again too quickly. Elrohir understands Elladan's reactions very well - and knows when the injury is serious. I expect Elrond was impressed by the whole body splint - he will probably introduce it into healer training. The next Reflection jumps forward a bit. But I think the outcome will be OK. E2L are skilled and experienced to the point where they don't need to waste time in discussion - which is very helpful. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

lwarren · 11 May 2005 · Chapter 60: Rain

Yes, indeed, I would definitely send the trouble-making AIL (adar-in-law) to Galadriel and Celeborn. He wouldn't dare act presumptious around them (or perhaps he would! LOL) The deluge of rain sounds alot like some of the spring-early summers we've had here in the past - the kind where the area ends up 24 inches above the average MONTHLY rainfall! Lots of grins and giggles to Elerrina's mother's face when faced with climbing a tree...to Miriwen giving birth in a pond...to finding trees big enough that would cooperate with letting the Noldor build their own flets...to Legolas paddling home asap to avoid futher ILC (in-law contact)! And I dearly love the way the twins are able to bring out the sunshine in that small wet part of the wood, i.e. Legolas' smile! More great moments, Bodkin! linda

Author's reply

And the socially aware Linevende would certainly not wish to offend Galadriel. (Celeborn, of course, is a Sinda - not quite one of us!) At least elves don't mind the cold. And to Legolas even the rain is a pleasure when in a peaceful AIL and NIL free world. This was fun to write. (They all are, really. But some just flow.) I'm glad you liked it.

lwarren · 11 May 2005 · Chapter 59: Frustration

Ah yes, Bodkin! *strokes chin knowledgeab - knowledgab - heck, like a know-it-all!) One of those golden-crested, bare-chested woodpeckers! :-) *sigh* (if we can't have them swimming, let's have them chopping wood in a snit, all gleaming, bare-chested indignation! Tis the plight of all spouses to have to endure the dreaded "in-law" invasion...but poor Legolas seems to have it worse than usual. I love his complaining about his adar-in-law's complaining...'the water's too wet, the sun shines brighter in Tirion' - typical father-in-law fodder, I suppose, when a beloved daughter is concerned. Loved the battle ax and the twins coming to the rescue in their typically humorous fashion. Great! linda

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I shall have to apply my mind to other desirable situations in which to place scantily-clad elves. Legolas has always known his in-laws weren't exactly keen on him - they didn't jump for joy at the wedding. They sort of became reconciled to the idea of them living in a civilised situation - but a forest! What an idea! The twins know how to deal with stressed out Wood Elf princes - Legolas will be much better able to deal with the in-laws when he gets back. Thank you.

Redheredh · 11 May 2005 · Chapter 61: Fallen

Whoa, that was a scary accident... But, glad you told of it. And 'whinge', goodie-goodie! a new word! - at least for me. :)

Author's reply

It was a very nasty accident. (It had to be, really, to have Elladan still hobbling around only partly healed when the new baby arrived. He was lucky that Elrond was near enough to bring all his skills to bear.) Whingeing is a good word. Often associated by Australians with the word pom, in order to insult us Brits.

elliska · 11 May 2005 · Chapter 61: Fallen

Me again--sorry, I couldn't resist. So Elrond won't say he'll be OK. But he will. (Elrond can't be in a Reflection. He's barred. It's E2L only.) Ahhh, that's true! Too bad. I still say this is a cliffhanger then. :) But as you said, we know what happens since we saw him, frustrated as he could be (but still whole)in Elflings. It was clear to me that this was the incident that left him laid up for his son's birth but I did forget that you never let anyone else speak in Reflections though. That is fun. Must be fun to write.

Author's reply

It is fun. The other qualification is that it must never go over two pages of Word. The word count varies from about 750 to 950, depending on the amount of conversation. (The more conversation, the smaller the number of words.) But it is the only thing I write where I have to keep going over it and pruning bits to make it stay within a certain length. But the only time other people are actually there, they tend to be asleep or else E2L are observing from a distance. This was a bit more dramatic than most Reflections. It's a good thing that they can whip him back to Elrond quickly - he needs a super-healer to piece this leg together. (It had to be badly broken, otherwise elven healing + Elrond would get him back on his feet too quickly, and he's still hobbling for a while. I think he will end up with a weather ache.)

Nilmandra · 11 May 2005 · Chapter 61: Fallen

I am so glad to know that these three can still find trouble in Elvenhome. And I await Lord Elrond as well!

Author's reply

Sorry. A certain elf lord will not be appearing. Lord Elrond is barred from Reflections! It's an E2L only zone. However, this actually happens before the latest Elflings, in response to Jay's wish to know how Elladan got injured. So he survives and is soon joking again. Elrond is next due to feature with his adar.

daw the minstrel · 11 May 2005 · Chapter 61: Fallen

Good heavens, Bodkin. I think that might count as a cliff hanger! It's hard to realize that even in Valinor Elves can be injured and die, but obviously they can (Finwe, for example).

Author's reply

I think there must have been elves other than Finwe who died from injury. I mean - if you fall off a cliff, or your boat sinks way off shore, or a horse lands on your head, even elves must be too badly injured to live. Although it must be a terrific shock to those around them. It's actually quite difficult to imagine a bunch of millennia-old adults who have never experienced death - but Valinor probably contains lots. It's only a cliff hanger in a way, since this happens after E2L come back from taking the in-laws to Galadriel, but before they get home - so before Ellanthir is born. It would be a bit cruel to give him another broken leg just after recovering from that one!

elliska · 11 May 2005 · Chapter 61: Fallen

Oh my goodness, the twins are having a very bad time of it, aren't they. I feel for poor Elladan. I broke my leg like that playing with an Earth Ball (it's a three or four foot ball painted like a globe and kids try to roll on top of it and be 'king of the world' but you're not supposed to do it on a hill--I learned that lesson firmly.) It is a very unpleasant experience. It was 30 years ago and I distinctly remember the doctor setting it. Poor Elladan. And poor Elrohir. I can see where the lack of smart-cracks would be a sign of serious trouble. :) Although Elladan did get in a good one with his first line. :) I don't think Aman is going to look like Paradise for him for a while. Don't leave this one too long to post the next chapter. I too want to hear Elrond say he'll be ok. :)

Author's reply

That sounds nasty. Elladan does tend to respond to crises with attempts at humour. (Though some would say he fails.) For him to feel bad enough to take - willingly - a nasty potion, he must be feeling BAD. You know he recovers though. This chapter actually comes in time scale between the return in the rain (last Reflection) and Elflings 7 - when he is unable to walk with Miriwen. I wasn't going to put this one in and just leave the accident to the imagination, but Jay wanted to know how Elladan managed to damage himself. So Elrond won't say he'll be OK. But he will. (Elrond can't be in a Reflection. He's barred. It's E2L only.)

Jay of Lasgalen · 11 May 2005 · Chapter 61: Fallen

Thank you for adding this to your collection, Bodkin! Poor Elladan - the fall, and his broken leg, sounds very bad. Poor Elrohir, too - I can imagine what he must have thought when Elladan and the horse went sliding off down that slope! I like the way he's most concerned about Elladan's lack of complaining. And I'm glad the horse is all right - eating contentedly. Typical! Jay

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When mentioned, it seemed, of course, a natural addition! And the ground gets very unstable when it has been raining that hard! Lack of complaint is a serious worry with injured males. Although, with elves, you wouldn't have to worry about them making a terrible fuss about a cold. It is a very bad break - but you know that he recovers! Typical horse. Animals and elflings: they are good at landing on their feet. Tulog (I think that's what I called him) has bad bruising and shallow cuts on his side, but he's not even limping.