Ariel · 10 June 2004 · Chapter 1: When Size Lies
Yes, that works very well. Did you like the way it turned out? Simple tales are often the best and the straighforeward dialog of this tale has an understated elegance. Very nice job. Ariel
Author's reply
Thanks for reviewing, and for helping with it. Hmmm, hard to judge my own work; but I'd say it's decent, if not the greatest.