harrowcat
· 11 January 2007
· Chapter 21: The Birthday - Hobbiton
It is interesting when rereading the Book to try and spot the times when Sam drops the Mister! Habits of a lifetime are really hard to change in spite of the terms of address. *g* Two great chapter GF.
Author's reply
I've noticed that Sam is rather consistant with the hobbits, but with everyone else he tends to drop the 'Mr.' (or Master) when not speaking directly to them. I think there are only two times that he drops the Mr. when speaking to Frodo - when he finds him in the tower at Cirith Ungol and when Frodo puts on the Ring at Mt. Doom. IIRC, he doesn't use either title for Strider, except once early on when he is clearly being sarcastic. Habits are hard to break, but Sam will become accustomed to leaving off the Mr. given enough time.
Thanks for reading!
harrowcat
· 11 January 2007
· Chapter 20: The Birthday - Minas Tirith
Loved every inch of this GamgeeFest! Too much to highlight but enjoyed the suggested uses for stale bread! Only one question. How do you thread a knife with bread?
Author's reply
That's what I thought when I read the bread tips on... forget the name of the website. I sort of imagine it like a needle being threaded through fabric. Maybe it's something only hobbits can really understand. :P
I'm so happy you enjoyed this so much!!! *hugs*
Althea
· 9 January 2007
· Chapter 21: The Birthday - Hobbiton
It is wonderful to see Sam, Merry, and Pippin so relaxed and happy and with their families and friends gathered around them. You have given us such a charming peek into their lives. It's gratifying to know that they could heal and come to celebrate Frodo again instead of continuing to mourn his leaving. I especially enjoyed the conversation about how to get Sam to drop the Mister when speaking to Merry and Pippin. At least Sam appears to be considering the idea now.
Author's reply
I'm sure there was still a small moment of mourning - like when they disappeared into the study before breakfast. Knowing that Frodo would want them to celebrate the day, as he continued to do all those years after Bilbo left (true it was also Frodo's birthday, but Tolkien seems to indicate that Frodo held them in Bilbo's honor, so much to the point that the neighbors thought it odd) would have helped the lads to keep their grief short and their celebrating long.
Sam will mull over the great Mr. controversy and he will have to concede that Merry is indeed right. He's lost the battle - he just hasn't admitted it yet. :D
Althea
· 9 January 2007
· Chapter 20: The Birthday - Minas Tirith
I had such a wonderful time reading this chapter. The three letters were a perfect reflection of the personality of each writer. I loved Pippin's rambling paragraphs about the bread and Aragon's frippery. Merry's more sophisticated style of writing suited him perfectly. I especially liked how he included how Pippin and Sam were doing. Sam's letter was as homey as Sam himself. His inclusion of how to be rid of slugs was perfect as was the inculsion of Rose's desire to clean out some of the clutter of Bag End and his own wish for Aragorn to write the Gaffer in order to ease his mind about sending a family portrait to nonfamily. The choices of gifts that Pippin, Merry, and Sam sent seemed so right. I know that Aragorn will treasure each of them for all his days.
Author's reply
Pippin may find it harder to ramble in writing, but he manages it quite well. :P Merry knows that Pippin and Sam would write little of themselves, Pippin because he writes so little to begin with, at least usually, and Sam becuase he's more the type to mention everyone else but himself. Sam just couldn't help be a gardener and include those tips for the slugs, and he and Rose are going to be having some heated discussions over that mathom room, I think. :D I have an idea about the Gaffer's letter. *grins* The gifts, except maybe the stale bread, will be much treasured. ;)
Larner
· 9 January 2007
· Chapter 21: The Birthday - Hobbiton
And may they indeed know joy on this their shared birthday. Joy to the both of them, and all gathered to remember them with joy.
Author's reply
Bilbo and Frodo are celebrating in their own way, and possibly with those fireworks the others are missing. :D Each year the celebration will be more grand than the last.
Larner
· 9 January 2007
· Chapter 20: The Birthday - Minas Tirith
A proper anniversary celebration, even including a loaf of stale bread! Dear Pippin! Heh!
Author's reply
A loaf of stale bread - the precursor to the fruitcake. LOL Only Pippin would think the bread would last that long!
Larner
· 9 January 2007
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
Ah, dear. so THAT'S how Tolman ended up being born in Gondor, eh? The anniversary gift for the leaving of Rivendell? And SO realistic!
Author's reply
That's the version that makes most sense to me. If Rose knew without doubt she was pregnant before setting out, I don't know if she still would have gone. I'm glad you liked the idea that Tom was the anniversary gift for the Fellowship leaving Rivendell. The thought struck me as I was writing and it instantly caught my imagination. It's been 11 years since I've lived with a colicky baby - it's not something you ever forget!
Tigger
· 8 January 2007
· Chapter 20: The Birthday - Minas Tirith
*groan* I was afraid the bread recipe would have yeast in it. I kill yeast and no matter how many times I try, even w/my Mom watching me, I still manage to do something wrong and my bread always ended up hard and flat. And this from the daughter of a woman whose bread and rolls are renowed. Maddening isn't the word for it.
Anyway...What a lovely and poignant little story. Poor Merry, but then again, only Pippin would make wood dye in a tin labeled "Biscuits". :oD I loved all of the gifts and letters. I can so understand Aragorn's emotions at the portait of Frodo and his family. Seeing Frodo as he was before losing his parents and before the Ring and Quest seared him, would have been very bittersweet indeed.
I loved this. Thanks for sharing it w/us.
Author's reply
Hello Tigger! My bread always comes out perfect - right from the store-bought bag and onto my plate. ;) I'm not much of a baker, myself. I would have thought all bread would have yeast in it, so I learned something new today. :D
Pippin, while vastly matured, still has many childlike qualities. And to be fair, he did warn Merry, though that was most likely after Merry's hand was already halfway into the tin! LOL
That drawing of Frodo will be much treasured by all of Middle-earth once it is placed in the museum at Gondor. If there is a portrait of Frodo as he was after the Quest, people will be shocked at the difference. Bittersweet, but I think the sweet outweighs the bitterness by a tad.
Thank you for reading!!
Queen Galadriel
· 8 January 2007
· Chapter 21: The Birthday - Hobbiton
Aw, sweet! I love the children! Little Frodo is too adorable and funny. Give 'em an inch and they'll take a mile! LOL! And I'll bet there aren't many children Elanor's age who know what "devious" means. :) Bell and Lilyana were so funny, too. That Bell...:)
The gifts were great!
I can imagine people talking, though what a horrible thing to say, that the madness came from Bag End! Oh well, they'll see when Samwise Gamgee of Bag End becomes mayor. :)
And I love the talk about what's "proper" (LOL) and what Sam said about needing two documents instead of one really cracked me up. So sweet how you ended with the toast. Love it!
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
Elanor needs to give her brother a lesson in pouting! LOL Elanor, I'm sure, has heard the word devious many times in her short life, what with Pippin coming to visit so often. ;) And then there's Bell - she can be devious in her own way when she puts her mind to it. LOL
People know what a sensible lad Sam is - until he took off with Frodo to parts unknown. And now that Sam's living in Bag End and showing a certain amount of queerness himself, they have to wonder if it was the Bagginses or Bag End itself. A perfectly natural and hobbity reaction to such a strange mystery. ;) I wonder, in some odd way, if such thoughts actually helped Sam to become mayore. Tolkien tells us in the prologue that strong (aka queer) characters are the most likely hobbits to become leaders and people tolerated their oddities because they knew that they could get the job done.
Sam knows his Gaffer better than anyone! He knows what his Gaffer would think about signing such a document. I mean, look at his reaction when asked to pose for a family portrait that wasn't going to a family member! LOL
Both fics had to end with the toast. It just seemed the right place to end them.
Queen Galadriel
· 8 January 2007
· Chapter 20: The Birthday - Minas Tirith
This made me laugh and want to cry. It has the kind of gentle warmth and poignance that I find hard to describe. The letters are so characteristic of all of them. :) Yes, it's good to see them whole and happy, though different from the innocent ones who left the Shire seven years before. Now I must go and read the next one!
God bless,
Galadriel
P.S. The recipe for bread is so Hobbity! :) Esp. the cook's notes. :)
Author's reply
Thank you QG! The letters were a lot of fun to write, and seeing Aragorn's reactions to them was interesting. I was uncertain if I was making this a tad too angsty at the end, but I think there's enough fluff and comfort in the rest of it that it's not too overwhelming. Sounds like I struck just the right note. :)
I can take no credit for the bread recipe, or the cook's notes. That's all Llinos! :D
Queen Galadriel
· 30 November 2006
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
*grins* I love this! I love it! Oh, I'd give a lot to see the tall men of Gondor walking back and forth and singing and cooing to hush a tiny little Hobbit baby!
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
I would dearly love to see it also! Those guards never fathomed they'd be guarding such a tiny treasure some day. How luck little Tolman - and Rose and Sam! - is to have had them around. :D
Queen Galadriel
· 30 November 2006
· Chapter 18: Reflections
I was thinking about you today, and I remembered I'd missed some of these.
This is oh! so sad! Beautiful and poignant imagery, and how well you show what Frodo must have felt. I think he must have had his moments of rare joy for a time after the Ring was destroyed, but as you said in replies to other reviews, the feelings of detachment, of not recognising himself, would increase. I kept expecting someon to come in, Sam or one of his cousins, and I guess I hoped they could comfort him. But what can anyone say?
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
I think at first his moments of joy would have outweighed him moments of detachment, but over time that would have flipped. While they were in Minas Tirith he could at least pretend to ignore the changes in himself. Once they returned to the Shire though and he was again surrounded by everything familiar and comfortable, he would have been immediately accosted by how alien and disquieting it now was, not only because of the Scouring but because he felt scoured within himself. The Shire was able to heal and prosper again but Frodo could not. He sees a glimpse of that in Minas Tirith, he's wise enough to understand what it means.
When I intially wrote this, I wasn't sure where to place it, and I was still debating the matter when I posted it here. Now, I think I would place it concurrent with "A Humble Gift" so that this would take the place the same afternoon that Pippin gets his horn. In this way, Frodo can enjoy a little bit of healing, or at least comfort, when Pippin returns that night and blows the horn for them.
mews1945
· 14 November 2006
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
What a lovely, happy story. The thought of all those big, strong guardsmen walking the baby while they're on guard is just charming. And I was so delighted by the thought that ARwen was able to give Sam a glimpse of Frodo in Valinor.
Author's reply
Thank you Mews! Eomer is right - no one is a better teacher in patience than a baby that won't stop crying. Those guards are going to be much better off for their time spent baby-sitting. :D Arwen's gift was truly a surprise, but very appropriate and touching. Sam couldn't have asked for a better.
Grey Wonderer
· 11 November 2006
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
Brilliant! Young Tom on gard duty. Maybe later on his early training will cause him to become a bounder or a Shirriff. I loved every word as always.
Author's reply
Tolman would have made an excellent guard - his wailing alone would scare off most predators and would warn against any movement in the nearby area. :D I do think that of all the Gamgee children, Tom would be the one most likely to journey to Gondor again. He would want to see the place where he was born and had heard so much about during his youth. :)
Antane
· 11 November 2006
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
I love the part of fitting the wee one into boots and the idea of these hard warriors being babysitters, but most of all I love Arwen's great, loving gift to Sam - to know his oldest treasure is well and happy.
Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Tom in boots would be quite adorable. :D But I don't think Rose would have appreciated it very much, lol! Nothing can bring out the inner softie in every guard as well as a baby can, especially a hobbit baby, which wouldn't be much bigger than a kitten or small cat. They just couldn't get enough of Baby Tolman.
Sam will always treasure Arwen's gift. To know once and for all, beyond doubt and hopeful wishes, that Frodo is healed is a big ease off his mind and really all he ever wanted.
Thanks for reading!
Antane
· 11 November 2006
· Chapter 18: Reflections
Yes, indeed, this must have been what it was like. :( You bring up a lot of things I hadn't considered before in this light before, like the mirror that reflects nothing and the shard removed from near his heart, but then that other deadly thing placed right over it. He was chosen and no one else could have borne it, but what pain to be ground into dust and not have enough of himself left to return to at the end. No wonder he had to leave.
Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Frodo may have survived the Quest but not by much. That he remained so long in Middle Earth after the Quest really shows his inner strength, even while his physical strength was diminished. He is feeling detached right now, which is only natural. Unfortunately, those feelings of detachment will continue to linger until he leaves for the Undying Lands. What he says when he returns to the Shire is so telling, that he sees everything around him as happening in a dream. To find the Shire scoured would only compound that feeling. He could never be at home there again.
RenaissanceGrrl
· 8 November 2006
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
If you think I’m going to be traveling through Arda during the high heat of summer while I’m pregnant, you’ve got another thing coming to you Samwise Gamgee.
XD Smart cookie, that she is. Traveling pregnant in summer is a pretty sucky experience to this day, from what I understand. ^_^
My God, how small WOULD a Hobbit baby be? I never thought of it before.
rag dolls soft and limp for the baby to chew on or big and hard for the baby to sleep with
*blink* Shouldn't that be the other way around? Couldn't a hard doll hurt a sleeping baby if it rolled onto it or something?
“You want another one, you can have it yourself."
Smart and snarky! ^_^ I <3 Rose.
Athelas? Nice. (If I recall correctly it only lists some of Merry and Pip's kids on the family trees, right?)
Aww. How sweet. ^_^ WaFF again!
Author's reply
Being pregnant during the summer is a miserable experience. I don't blame Rose for not wanting to travel, even on ponyback, if she can avoid it.
I figure a baby hobbit would be about the size of a kitten at 6-8 weeks. Plenty small enough to fit in a boot, if not the little baby boots that the Big Folk were sending to them. :D
Keeping in mind that the dolls are bigger than a hobbit would make them, the harder dolls would serve as pillows or cushions - to keep baby from rolling off the couches or onto his tummy. It's a very handy trick.
Only Faramir is named and given a birth year on the family trees. We know Merry had a son only because Merry hands his goods and offices over to his son when he leaves the Shire. Any other kids beyond that is up to the author. :D Athelas seemed an appropriate name for Pippin's daughter, especially since she proves to be the cure for colic. lol
Andrea
· 8 November 2006
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
Great story, GamgeeFest!
I can imagine that those guards and all the Big People were fascinated with little Tolman, the tiniest bairn they had ever seen.
And "Athelas"! Well, the virtue of that particular herb is known to all of us, of course. How appropriate that Pippin's little girl was given that name.
When I read the last lines of this story, I thought it would be wonderful if Tolman and Athelas would come to love each other and marry :)
Dreamflower had the same idea, it seems. What's your opinion?
Author's reply
I can just see the looks of fascination on the faces of the Big Folk when they saw little Tom. A hobbit baby has to be the tiniest little thing ever, far smaller than they imagined a baby could be.
Athelas was very appropriately named! How suiting that she's the only 'cure' to Tom's colic. ;) I think Tom just needed another baby to talk to. lol The muses do seem to be leaning toward a Tolman/Athelas union. I'm rather fond of the idea myself. They're certainly off to a favorable start. :D
Thanks for reading!
Bodkin
· 8 November 2006
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
Tiny Tolman doesn't seem to have been the best travelling companion - but I just loved the way the guards made him part of their beating of the bounds. He's definitely got his own bunch of baby hobbit-worshippers!
I expect Rose was glad to get him home - even if it meant gathering together the other dozen. (Thirteen children! It's remarkable that she didn't release Sam to go and join Frodo rather earlier than she did!)
Delightful.
Author's reply
Tom sure does have all the Big Folk wrapped around his tiny little fingers, doesn't he? For being so small, he makes quite a fuss. I feel for those poor merchants but I'm sure the guards didn't mind having to baby sit for a couple of hours. They at least had more entertainment than the guards who had to watch the perimeters. :D
13 children is quite a lot. I'm sure by the time she had Hamfast, she was saying that each new baby was the last one! I can hear her blaming Sam for all these babies during each delivery. LOL
Baggins Babe
· 7 November 2006
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
"But Lady Rose,” the guard started.
“I am his mother, young man, and I have eleven more of these at home,” Rose intoned in her no-nonsense voice that not even the King himself would defy. “Don’t tell me I can’t keep a watch. I’ve sat up more sleepless nights than you can even count, and got through the whole next day without a wink of sleep besides.”
“Yes, Lady,” the guard agreed, bowing apologetically.
I could quote any number of lines from this wonderful story but that is my favourite. Rose won't take any nonsense, even from strapping Gondorian guards!
Loved the images - guards pacing up and down with a very noisy hobbit baby and all those Big Folk making goo-goo noises and silly faces at little Tolman!
Author's reply
Rose grew up with 4 brothers and has raised 12 children (13 now), plus she's been the Mayor's wife for about 15 years now - she's not about to be told no! She knows how to assert herself when she needs to. ;)
There's something about babies that make grown ups act like silly infants themselves. I figure that effect would be doubled for a hobbit baby, especially since the Big Folk would never have seen one before this. They just can't get over the fact how tiny Tom is. :D
Thanks for reading!
speckled_llama
· 7 November 2006
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
I just love the idea of a hobbit baby fitting into shoes! Its so adorable...
Author's reply
Hello, speckled_llama! Let's face it - hobbits are small enough. A hobbit baby would be about the size of a kitten or even smaller. Tom would fit, literally, in the palms of their hands - and in their boots, as one soldier clearly discovered. I can just see them sticking Tom in the boot and laughing with him as he squeals with delight, while another guard keeps watch for Rose to return! lol Thanks for reading!
Elemmírë
· 7 November 2006
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
This was utterly fantastic, GamgeeFest!!
From Tolman's birth, to the journey, Arwen's parting gift to Sam, the babysitting guards, Sam's storytelling to the children ... I enjoyed it all!!
And how very cool to have Pippin's new lass named Athelas. It's keeping in the hobbit tradition of a flower or gem name, after all. (and much prettier souding than Kingsfoil) LOL! I'm surprised no one's thought of that before!
~Elemmírë~
Author's reply
Thank you Elemmire! This story was a lot of fun to write, though I imagine Sam and Rose didn't have much fun in it. ;) Traveling with a baby in modern days is hard enough. To do so in Middle Earth really would take all the King's soldiers to help!
Athelas makes a pretty hobbit name, even if it's not technically hobbity. But since Pippin named his son Faramir, people are probably used to odd names from this particular Thain. The muses gifted me with the name for Pippin's daughter, and it's very suiting that a lass with such a name would be the cure for a constantly crying baby. ;)
harrowcat
· 7 November 2006
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
Oh, *sneezes as she wields the fluff-buster over the keyboard,* what a lovely tale. I love the babysitting guards. My Nephew was exactly like that but I don't think his babysitters were anywhere near as patient!
Author's reply
It's fun to roll around in fluff every once in awhile, and there's nothing fluffier that little Baby Tom surrounded by soldiers making goo-goo sounds. :D
There are strong similarities to Tom and my niece when she was a baby. I can sympathize with those merchants, and the poor soldiers who were on baby duty. At least they only had to watch Tom in two-hour shifts. :D
Thanks for reading!
Althea
· 6 November 2006
· Chapter 18: Reflections
The last lines emhasize beautifully how much of himself Frodo has lost.
Author's reply
It's not surprising, after everything he experienced and his lack of memory about the last days of the Quest, that Frodo would have feelings of detachment. He is removed from everything around him, including himself, and he has difficulty connecting with his friends and the strange City of Men he now finds himself in because of it. By the time he returns to the Shire, he is so lost in his disillusionments that he still cannot reenter the life he had left behind.
cookiefleck
· 6 November 2006
· Chapter 19: Tolman Gamgee's First Adventure
I loved this story. Always glad to read anything with Sam in it, and I enjoyed reading about his happy (if noisy) home life. I particularly liked the gifts... the 13 gems, and then the glimpse of Frodo. Very touching. Thank you!
Author's reply
Sam's home life is never boring, that much can be safely assumed! 13 kids is a lot of work, but he and Rose are up to the challenge, even with a colicky baby thrown into the mix. Rose will save her gift for special ocassions, such as Yule, and Sam will carry that image of Frodo with him for the rest of his life.
Thanks for reading!