Maeglin's Sonnets by Nerdanel
Alassiel · 4 July 2004 · Chapter 4: Death
Yes, this is indeed a kind of death, even before his execution, for he has given way to hate and self-pity. And now he suffers the consequences of his treachery, tormented in many ways. These sonnets did capture Maeglin's character very well.
Alassiel · 4 July 2004 · Chapter 3: Darkness
Well, he has certainly begun to show his true colors--from love to vengefulness. The evil in him is no longer just a seed.
Alassiel · 4 July 2004 · Chapter 2: Hope
I see that the title is somewhat ironic. He begins by declaring his love and ends by threatening her, blaming her for rejecting him. A good depiction of his point of view.
Alassiel · 4 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Light
Aiya Nerdanel, This was like reading a synopsis of Maeglin's life--until the last line, which gave me a chill. I am not a poet (though I appreciate poetry), so I won't comment on the form, but it flowed very well.