Everlight · 7 March 2014 · Chapter 0
Hmmm... I never thought about how a passing shadow might effect them. Their reactions, thoughts and emotions were realistically depicted. Good job.
The Winged Shadow by Pervinca
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Willow · 9 July 2004 · Chapter 0
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! That was really good! I think it was really good how you managed to convey the emotions felt by all the characters emotions. Very good, I really enjoyed it.