How Hard Could it Be? by swg12
Laereth/GodsLittleFlower · 2 January 2005 · Chapter 1: Goodbyes and Tears
Very good... It kept my interest up... What's next?????? Post next part soon or I shall go crazy!!!! Very good!!!! ;) God bless, Laereth
Author's reply
Hey, I guess that link in my signature worked out well ;) lol Thanks so much for the review! I will be trying to update posthaste - twill be harder cuz sadly *sob* Christmas break is over. (say it isn't so!) Thanks again! Christ's Love ~ swg ~
Forever_Frodo22 · 26 November 2004 · Chapter 1: Goodbyes and Tears
Hey! It's me! ur Frodo! I luv this story, it has a wonderful plot... please don't stop writing it! I can't wait for more. It's very charming!
Author's reply
Hey!! Guess you got ur account working, huh? Great! Aw, thankies Frodie ... I dunno, I may have written myself into a corner (lol) but I'll work on it - for you. Just so long as you promise to post some of YOUR stories, kk? :P ~ swg ~
Entwashed · 16 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Goodbyes and Tears
Excellent content and style and a very interesting story! Keep it up! I enjoyed reading it very much and look forward to more. Only two comments: 1. When Merry and Pip go to the neighbor's house it should be "Goodbody's", singular posessive form of the name; 2. 3rd paragraph of Pg 1: Sam got up and walked over to the chair where Rosie sat, envelope now in her hand.
Author's reply
Thanks, glad u enjoyed it! Also, thanks for the corrections! I will take care of that A.S.A.P, ~ swg ~
Tialys · 14 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Goodbyes and Tears
What a neat idea! It really made me laugh, as my house is currently in the same situation (my Mom also being gone right now and Dad always asking 'Well, what does *she* do?'). I noticed your italics got messed up a bit near the end, but I can understand that - I've had trouble with formatting lately. I liked the end of the chapter especially - with Elanor and Sam. Someone should write a fic about his reaction to when she starts dating. Interesting start! Keep writing! ...Tialys
Author's reply
Thankie, Tialys!!!!! hmm, the italics got messed up at the end? Thanks for telling me - I'll check it out!!! ~ swg ~
Bodkin · 14 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Goodbyes and Tears
Now, now, Rosie - you are underestimating Pippin and Merry. I'm sure they could tell the difference between children and chowder - after all, you can eat chowder! Poor Sam. This is only the beginning.
Author's reply
Yeah, but I couldn't think of anything else that really sounded good besides chowder... Thanks again! The next chapters will be up soon! ~ swg ~
Bodkin · 14 July 2004 · Chapter 0: A letter from Buckland
'How hard can it possibly be?' Hysterical laughter from all mothers and experienced child-care workers. Comes in the category of famous last words. Why do I suspect that he is just about to find out how hard it can be? Ha ha ha (dying laughter).
Author's reply
You are absolutly correct.... poor sam! *grin* Thanks for reviewing ! Check it out - Chapter One is UP! ~ swg ~