Falling by Iawen Londea
Grey Wonderer · 2 November 2004 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two
So, maybe he didn't fall? Maybe Grima had a little something to do with all of this? Or maybe he knows something about it that he is holding back. I am very glad that Theodredplans to keep an eye on him just in case. Looking forward to more of this one.
Grey Wonderer · 2 November 2004 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
Wonderful beginning. I look forward to more of this one. I haven't seen one of your stories here in a while and I am very glad to have found this one. I wonder what he was up to when he fell, if he did fall.
daw the minstrel · 1 November 2004 · Chapter 2: Chapter Two
Ah, Grima. I thought that might be it. Poor Eomer. He's so young and so baffled by what's happening, despite his native strength.
eokat · 25 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
Hi Iawen, glad you have posted this here. Eokat.
Elwen · 25 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
A very interesting beginning. You've definately caught this reader's attention. I'm intrigued.
Annis · 24 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
A promising start! I can't wait for more! well done.
daw the minstrel · 24 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
What a great start to a story. I've never seen one in which Theoden's relationship to Eomer is shown as troubled like this. And I do wonder what happened to Eomer. Poor kid.
Jay of Lasgalen · 24 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
Hmm - intruiging. I don't often read Eomer or Eowyn stories, but I like this. So why *did* Eomer fall? I sense Grima somewhere ... Jay