Intruder by Budgielover

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Lyta Padfoot · 15 February 2004 · Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love how you have Merry putting the pieces together, he's the most logical of the hobbits and good at piecing things together, something too often omitted in stories.

Lyta Padfoot · 15 February 2004 · Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So its Saruman. Very clever that belt, authors and wizards are tricky.

Lyta Padfoot · 15 February 2004 · Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmm... wonder who killed the badie and who sent him. I especially enjoyed the debate on what to do with/to the intruder. Very well reasoned and presented.

Lyta Padfoot · 15 February 2004 · Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Almost feel sorry for the intruder, set upon by three furious hobbits.

Ailsa Joy · 5 August 2003 · Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Eep! Poor Frodo doesn't get a moment's peace sometimes! Lovely story- great plot and wonderful dialogue. You solved the mystery very well, there by giving us insight into the murderer's employer. Ooh, chills... Really enjoyed this. :-D A.J x Author Reply: Hi Alisa Joy. Thank you for the review. I thought it would be fun to set a murder-mystery in the LotRs universe. I appreciate your kind words, and you're letting me know how much you enjoyed the story.