The Livery Saga by Elendiari22

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Galathil · 7 April 2021 · Chapter 1: Accursed Livery

Hi Elendiari22 you have to finish this wonderful story, I have come across. Do not know how I missed it. I know you have not written in some time on this site. I am hoping that you will get this and finish your story. I am now of to go and read some of your other stories. I do feel for Aragorn and Faramir. Galathil

Hai Took · 21 August 2004 · Chapter 3: The Brilliance of Tooks

That was great! Now Pippin has the tower guard wanting new uniforms! Great that you put in the kilts and Aragorn remembering the first time his fellow Dundain saw the Tooks wearing them! I think I would laugh as well! Thank you for the fun and I am looking forward to more!

Marigold · 21 August 2004 · Chapter 3: The Brilliance of Tooks

Ah, dear, you made me laugh at a time I really needed to! Thanks! I can so see Pippin going home leaving behind a special squad of the King's Guard wearing the Took plaid kilt so that Aragorn would never forget him, lol. Have you noticed in RoTK that Pippin is wearing Billeh's proper family plaid at the Grey Havens? A nice touch I think! : )

Author's reply

Thanks! I'm glad that I gave you a laugh! I think Pippin's going to do more than just be a bad influence. He might actually succeed! I had noticed the Boyd tartan at the end of ROTK-that's partially what made me decide to include hobbit tartan. If Pippin was wearing it in the film, they must have had it im ME. :)

SlightlyTookish · 21 August 2004 · Chapter 3: The Brilliance of Tooks

I just discovered these stories this morning - what fun to read first thing in the morning! I'm looking forward to more :)

Bodkin · 21 August 2004 · Chapter 3: The Brilliance of Tooks

I have great difficulty picturing the Tooks in Highland livery. It seems so unhobbity. Pippin, on the other hand, I can imagine in almost anything. Except pink tulle. I feel for Aragorn. And Faramir is learning. This is fun.

Auntiemeesh · 20 August 2004 · Chapter 3: The Brilliance of Tooks

They are called kilts. Oh, you twisted woman, what an image you have put in my mind! “Do you think that anyone would notice if Merry and Pippin were to disappear? I have the strange desire to send them home tied up in a sack.” Poor Aragorn, it's his own fault for making the hobbits wait around for his wedding. If he'd been thinking ahead, he would have sent Merry and Pippin off on some spurious scouting mission or something, just to get them out of his hair for a while, lol.

Grey Wonderer · 20 August 2004 · Chapter 3: The Brilliance of Tooks

This gets better and better. I like the idea of Aragorn and Faramir in kilts. I vote with Pippin on this one.

Hai Took · 6 August 2004 · Chapter 2: Lost Livery

That was too funny! I laughed from the time Legolas proclaimed "It's not my fault" to the last line about forgetting things when hobbits were involved! There were so many little lines that I loved and added the right spirit to the whole thing! Aragorn only warning them because he knew that hobbits would only retaliate if he were to punish them! I can't wait to read more about this livery that is giving Pippin such problems! Thank you for the laughs!

Bodkin · 6 August 2004 · Chapter 2: Lost Livery

'So, the King and the Elf were both afraid of the hobbits.' Well, they had had a lot of experience of the level of chaos that a few small hobbits could create. Fear is a wise reaction. If Faramir had greater knowledge, he would have shared it. 'Once again, he was absurdly tangled up, but had managed to get both his tunic and his trousers…off.' Drunken, semi-naked hobbit. I do hope Aragorn et al retrieved the clothing from the light fitting - (although I would have feared that Minas Tirith light fitting + clothing would = fire).

Author's reply

Thanks! And fear is a *very* wise reaction where hobbits are concerned. :) *I would have feared that Minas Tirith light fitting + clothing would = fire* I had kind of pictured the lighting fixture to be like a chandelier, therefore enabling hte clothes to be away from the candles. I just couldn't find the right words to describe it!

Auntiemeesh · 5 August 2004 · Chapter 1: Accursed Livery

LOL Very fun. I can just see Pippin, furious over the ridiculousness of his uniform, and then changing moods with lightning speed once the crisis is past. :P Is there going to be more?

Author's reply

Thanks! And yes, there is more! I have just updated!

Grey Wonderer · 4 August 2004 · Chapter 1: Accursed Livery

Loved this one! I thought Faramir was just perfect and I enjoyed his reaction to Aragorn helping Pippin very much. A great way to show how different Aragorn will be as a King!

Author's reply

Thanks! I like the idea that Aragorn is a good king, but utterly different from what everyone is used to.

Hai Took · 4 August 2004 · Chapter 1: Accursed Livery

lol! What a sight Pippin must have made! At least Faramir understand how annoying the armor can be as he had to wear it as well at one point or another. Pippin saying that since the Enemy was destroyed he would stand guard naked! Faramir's respect and love being heightened in watching the king tend his smallest knight was wonderful! I'm looking forward to more!

Author's reply

Thanks! There *is* actually more coming, though I have no idea how long it will last. Look for an update the day after tomorrow, or check out my Livejournal, where I published hte sequel today. You can find the link on my author's page. :)