My Brother's Keeper by daw the minstrel
Karri · 18 August 2004 · Chapter 4: Helping Out
Oi! I knew his concern was going to lead to trouble for Legolas...and I fear he will manage more, guard or no. I feel bad for Hiolith. His heart is in the right place, but he is clearly to torn up to think straight.
Author's reply
Good reading of Hiolith, Karri. That's how I see him too. Thranduil is reacting strongly to the possibility that Legolas might be in danger, and Legolas is too worried about Eilian to realize what might happen.
Jay of Lasgalen · 18 August 2004 · Chapter 4: Helping Out
Poor Legolas, he's trying so hard to protect everyone else from themselves he gets into trouble himself! I suspect that Eilian is not quite as badly affected by shadow as everyone thinks, and that some of the twitchiness is put on. Are he and Ithilden trying to expose a drug ring with the dangwath? No wonder Thranduil is still worried and doesn't want Legolas anywhere near. I think that if his son really was that ill, Thranduil would have him out of sight, not a subject for gossip. Jay
Author's reply
It does seem ironic that Legolas, who wouldn't touch that herb if he didn't have to, is the one who's in trouble over it. Poor kid. He's so reluctant to 'tell,' whether that be about who instigated an archery competition of where he got the herb. But I'm not sure that withholding information is the wisest course of action in this case. For someone who reacted to strongly to Legolas having the herb, Thranduil does seem to be leaving Eilian to his own devices, doesn't he?
Dot · 18 August 2004 · Chapter 4: Helping Out
And it just dawned on me. Hiolith has tons of the stuff - he can't have been taking anything from the infirmary. Oh, unless Eilian staged that so that Hiolith would be aware that there was someone in desperate need. Or maybe not... Alright, I'll shut up and go do some work...
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Clever Dot.
Dot · 18 August 2004 · Chapter 4: Helping Out
Oh God. Things are getting so complicated. Way too many people keeping way too many secrets. I suppose Eilian was bound to be the hot topic of conversation. I felt bad for Annael. He's clearly no better at deception than Legolas is. Siondel really was totally honest with him. You're right, of course, that he would try to get his son to feel compassion for a suffering warrior and to remember how brave he is. Thranduil and Eilian don't seem to have realised that might happen. Poor Legolas. He must indeed be worried sick if he walks out on weapons training. “Legolas is worried,” Turgon declared, “and your adar said we should help warriors like Eilian.” How does Turgon *always* manage to make it seem like they're doing the right thing?! I like the bit where Eilian thinks about the support of his family. He had a lot of problems after his mother died but it's good to know that when he looks back he can see how much strength he drew from his family. And undoubtedly they're there for him now. I don't think he's realised quite how supportive baby brother is, though... I wonder too why Hiolith didn't seem even to have the support of friends and neighbours or fellow warriors. I guess there's only so much they can do. I suspect there's a bit of a story about Hiolith and Maltanaur. Maltanaur doesn't strike me as someone who'd abandon a warrior in trouble even if he wasn't that close to him. How sad... a tiny cottage with everything built for one. I actually have to admit that I like Hiolith so far. It seems to me that he's genuinely trying to help Eilian because he's been there himself and knows what it's like. I wonder how no-one's ever spotted so much of the herb before. I'm thinking Eilian isn't the only one Hiolith might have told can help himself. It's definitely an interesting side to life in Mirkwood. I'm going to have to keep an open mind about all this and not get carried along too much by what I see - you've tricked me before, you know! The three friends seem a bit bewildered by their first encounter with the concept of abusing medicinal herbs. Turgon didn't seem to be able to understand why anyone would do that at first. Annael, of course is the one with the parents who sit him down and tell him the ways of the world so that he won't be tempted. I felt sorry for Legolas when he realises that this is just way beyond him and he honestly doesn't know what to do. Trust Turgon to be so completely unafraid about taking the dangwath. I can't believe Galeril found it! Waht a horrible position for Legolas to be in, not knowing what to say incase his brother ended up in even more trouble. I notice it never dawned on Galeril that Legolas could have just been doing some extra study for his herbology... I'd pay good money to know what Thranduil was thinking. Did he not think it was odd when Legolas answered “Not from Eilian"? I notice Turgon got a lot of blame from Thranduil, despite the fact that Legolas hasn't really implicated him. I suppose leaving the training wouldn't seem like something Legolas would do of his own accord and Thranduil probably figures that if Legolas is protecting anyone it's Turgon, not Eilian. And he's under guard? What's he going to do now?? Eilian must feel so bad when he sees Siondel's concern for him. In some ways I hope Siondel neve finds out the truth incase he feels like a fool. And he's just worried about his son! I wonder how much longer Eilian can go on. Apart from everyone trying to help him, he's obviously tiring himself out too and he's still unwell. But it looks like he's goin to tell Thranduil what he found. Yes? No? Darn cliffhangers. Not good for my blood pressure at all... :-)
Author's reply
I love Siondel. I think the attitude he is trying to teach Annael is one that would be natural to Elves, at least to these wood elves. They seem to me to be connected to one another and to nature. So even when Siondel is undoubtedly ticked off at Eilian for unintentionally drawing Annael into danger, he reacts not by seeking vengeance, but by encouraging Eilian to get help. He genuinely respects him. That's not a put on. I don't know if you've read Meckinock's story "In the Hands of the Enemy" (great story), but she went to a writers conference last year and one of the exercises the fiction teacher used was to have them think of something their character would NEVER do and write that down. Then they were supposed to think of a situation in which the character is forced to do that. For Legolas, leaving training is close to that. But his love for Eilian is one of the basic facts of his life, and it came first. One thing I want this story to be about is community. What do we all owe to our friends and neighbors and one another in the larger community? I think Hiolith is lost and the community has failed him. Legolas is someone who thinks a lot about his obligations to others, including Turgon, unfortunately. I think that's a sign both of his status as the king's son and of his own personality. Fellowship Legolas in the making, if you will.
Bodkin · 18 August 2004 · Chapter 4: Helping Out
Well, that's one way to keep Legolas safe - the next best thing to putting him in the dungeons. But I cannot see it working for too long. Has Thranduil not thought of actually trying to talk about things? I know he is stressed, authoritarian and thinks of Legolas as a baby, but still - if he is old enough to ask the questions, he is old enough to hear the answers. Hiolith seems a bit more like a back-country, damaged, war veteran now - needing the stuff for himself but not a dealer. After all, with his own personal field of the happiness plant, he hardly needs to pinch it from the infirmary. So typical of Turgon to take some leaves - and I have little doubt but that he will be back at that little supply quite soon in his desire to know what it is like. Siondel - what a good guy. A good parent, a concerned warrior, a supportive friend. What a shame he died young! There certainly seems to be a communication problem here in the house of Oropher. Great chapter. Keep at the keyboard.
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Thranduil is worried about both Eilian and Legolas right now, so I suspect he's decided that he's not fooling around with Legolas. My beta is a pharmacist and she's explained a number of things about addiction to me, some of which I may still be screwing up. But she says that Hiolith is a person who takes this drug to "stay even." He's not trying to get high, just to survive his physical addiction. And he sees Eilian as someone like himself, someone in need. Thranduil must want to give Turgon's family free tickets on a boat west. And I love Siondel. I can only imagine the conversation he must have had with Annael about why the kid missed training.
lwarren · 17 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
Well, do I feel silly...and Eilian has proven very tricksy and resourceful! I still think he's suffering a little more than he would have anyone know...but now the he's Eilian Bond, 00elf, I will try to rein in my *ahem* maternal concerns about his health! ;-) This was a chapter full of surprises...always keep 'em guessing, huh? Thranduil gets surprised by an enterprising elfling, Ithilden gets surprised by hot tea (poor guy...all those concerned, helpful females!), and the mystery elf is gonna get a surprise eventually from Eilian and Maltanaur (who, BTW, I am glad to see sticking close to Eilian!) Great chapter! linda
Author's reply
Thank you, Linda. Don't feel silly! I hope you thought exactly what I intended you to think. Deception is fun. ;-) Eilian is still suffering from shadow sickness, and he's struggling a little. Poor guy. But he's determined to do something dangerous anyway, much to Maltanaur's dismay. The scene with Ithilden was fun to write. I have to admit I laughed when I wrote it, especially the part about Alfirin mopping him up and her mother offering to 'take a look.' Could a mother possibly say anything more embarrassing? LOL
meckinock · 17 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
Oy, Undercover Elf! Oh no! And poor Legolas is going blunder right into the middle of a "Cops" episode, isn't he? But better that than the oh-so-awkward In-Law Encounter... poor Ithilden and Alfirin. OK, I'm caught up now. Whew.
Author's reply
You think Eilian is trying to fool you? ;-) Poor Alfirin. Could a mother utter a more embarrassing sentence than "Shall I take a look?" after Ithilden spills tea in his lap. I laughed when I wrote it and I'm still laughing.
meckinock · 17 August 2004 · Chapter 2: Summer Solstice
Legolas is such an observant little guy - you get the feeling that he's just absorbing everything around him through his pores. His comment about Ithilden always getting what he wants was great - although it's endearing of Ithilden to not quite share the same confidence. It was also funny when he pondered how Turgon always seemed to make sense until after everyone was already in trouble...he'll have to work on that one for a while, I think. Even at such a young age, Turgon was an expert button-pusher. Royal life sure is lived in a fishbowl - Ithilden can't carry on a courtship without an audience, and it looks as though Eilian can't have a meltdown without one, either.
Author's reply
Legolas is curious and open to experiences, which also stands him well later in life! I like the fact that he's now old enough to tease Ithilden a little. And I think it's hard enough for anyone to try to figure out if the person you're attracted to is attracted back, and if everyone is watching, you're in a bad spot. Especially since I think that Alfirin is reserved too. Ah Turgon. Thranduil's nightmare of a friend for Legolas!
meckinock · 17 August 2004 · Chapter 1: Lessons
Daw, I asked Karen to distract you for a few hours so I can try to get caught up, at least with the current story, before another chapter alert drops into my mailbox. Hope she's doing a good job! Loved seeing the sociology of adolescent boys at work. Their IQ drops by a factor of 2 with each additional member, doesn't it? Legolas KNOWS this unauthorized archery competition is s bad idea, but he not only does nothing to stop it, he's loyal to the bitter end when it breaks bad. Well, that trait will serve him well later, I suppose. Eilian goes Goth! What a picture that must make. Actually, maybe I've seen it somewhere recently....on your shiny new LJ icon, perhaps? And poor Legolas wtih his sweet teenage self-absorbtion again, first imagining that he was the topic of his father and brother's private dialogue and then crushed when Eilian gives him the brush-off. Poor little guy....
Author's reply
My memory of my son and his friends at 14 is that they were good kids with no brains. How that happened, I don't know. And I think Legolas is very loyal and, as you say, that shows up later. I think that is Eilian in the icon. In my imagination, anyway. I've always liked writing about the relationship between Eilian and Legolas, and here poor Legolas is missing his brother and worrying about him. Nobody tells him anything!
tigerlily713 · 17 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
Oh! Intrigue! Great interactions between characters! I love Legolas's quick manipulation of the situation with Thranduil and the gathering. I can't wait for more!
Author's reply
Legolas certainly jumped on his chance to be allowed out. And there does seem to be intrigue here. At least I hope so! The next chapter is close to done, so you shouldn't have to wait too long, Lily.
erunyauve · 16 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
Nice contrast between playing with his porridge and the very serious adult question. 'They all stared at Ithilden as if waiting for him to speak.' Poor Ithilden! I'm sure this is *not* one of those times that he wants to be commander and king's son. But trust a cat to be entirely unimpressed by his status. 'He halted his steps for a moment to listen to a song that blended particularly well with the music the river made as it rushed by on his left. The sound of the river spoke of home to him, and his heart eased a little. “The Valar bless you, my lord,” called a voice from among the trees' Lovely. I'm a little surprised that Maltanaur is so calm about this, though I suppose he figures he has no choice - better to have Eilian's trust so that he can protect him as much as he can under the circumstance.
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Ithilden is certainly having a bumpy courtship, and for the self-possessed, confident Ithilden, that's got to be almost unbelievable! He probably goes home and wonders what in the world happened. In my world, Thranduil's sons have grown up along the river. I think they would miss it, as people do miss bodies of water or mountains or trees or open prairie if they're used to it. I'm from a woodsy part of the US and moved to the prairie a few years ago. I find the absence of trees is really disturbing, but one of my students recently described a trip to where I'm from and said "The trees came right down to the road. It was spooky." Maltanaur is indeed trying to watch Eilian's back, as usual.
French Pony · 16 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
Well, here I am in Grad School Town! It's lovely, but rather damp tonight. Here we have a rather interesting situation for the House of Oropher. It seems that the older members are acting really stupid, and the younger ones are showing at least a little sense. Would that all drug users had Eilian's presence of mind to keep a sober friend around to take care of them. It looks like he's using the dangwath in the same way that people use marijuana for medical purposes, though it seems that dangwath is slightly stronger than pot (and probably wouldn't taste as good when baked into brownies). I'd be really worried for him if he didn't have Maltanaur around, but Maltanaur has a good head on his shoulders and really seems to care about Eilian above and beyond the requirements of his job. He's the perfect nurse if Eilian is going to try self-medicating. Good ol' Ithilden. . . “I hope I am not imposing.” Did he mean that as a verb or as an adjective? Cause if he meant it as an adjective, then he really ought to know better. Of course, the one who really ought to know better is Thranduil. It's kind of hard to believe that such a wise old Ada could do something as monumentally stupid as try to separate Eilian and Legolas and then compound it by not leveling with Legolas, but that's parents for you, I guess. They always want to shield the younger siblings. I know that, when I had problems, my mom would occasionally try to keep it from my sister, but she figured out how dumb that was and stopped. I think Eilian needs Legolas and that unconditional adoration he gets from li'l bro, and if he had it, it would reduce his need for drugs by about half. And Thranduil ought to know that Legolas is much too old to be fobbed off. All kids know when they're being lied to, and Legolas is quite old enough to know what's going on with someone so close to him. And really, Thranduil demands such honesty from his sons, the least he could do would be to be honest in return. I'm sure that, by the end of this, Thranduil will wish he'd just leveled with Legolas from the start. Dumb, Thranduil. Real dumb.
Author's reply
Glad your move is completed enough that you have an internet connection. First things first, after all! Maltanaur is really devoted to Eilian, and one of the things he's tried to do is keep matters between himself and Eilian if they're not part of his charge to protect him as a warrior. I didn't even think about 'imposing' as an adjective! That's funny. He is kind of imposing, I think. You are so right that Eilian thrives on Legolas's unconditional love. And he would never want to be the cause of harm to Legolas, so I can see his dilemma. I hope all goes well with you as classes start, FP.
Jebb · 16 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
Well I have never been so glad to be proved wrong before, so Eilian is up to something but if Maltanaur is with him and knows what he is doing it cannot be so bad can it? Ithilden takes tea what a scene that was and so funny for everyone except poor Ithilden he really doesn't come over as the self assured leader we all know he is when he is around Atfirin which is a good sign I think And Legolas sweet talking Thranduil to allow him out at night Thranduil was very fair and he was right his youngest son deserves to be trusted if only the same could be said about Turgon
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Maltanaur is taking good care of Eilian, to the extent that Eilian will let him anyway. Thank goodness for Maltanaur. Thranduil chose well there. Poor Ithilden indeed! Nothing like having hot tea in your lap, have the girl of your dream try to mop it up, and have her mother offer to 'take a look.' No wonder he went home! Thranduil did very well with Legolas. He sees Legolas's good points and, as you say, he tries to be fair. But he does worry. They live in a dangerous place and there is always Turgon.
emjo · 16 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
I am starting to get into this story although I have no idea what you have in store for our favorite elves. I love seeing Ithilden and Alfirin's realationship starting to bloom! Poor Ithilden spilling tea on himself in front of the whole family! Great chapter. Please update soon!
Author's reply
Thank you, emjo. It looks like Ithilden and Alfirin's romance didn't run smoothly from day one. He can speak to her coherently now, but the tea in the lap thing had to have put a damper on things! Poor Alfirin. She realizes she mopping tea from his crotch and her mother offers to 'take a look.' Could she BE more embarrassed?
The Karenator · 15 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
Okay, forget everything I've said in the two previous reviews. And here I was contemplating what the shadow was doing to Poor! Eilian. Poor! Eilian, indeed. But I will give him this: As the president of the Middle-earth Academy of Arts and Acting Elves, I will nominate him for the Best Actor Award. What a sucker I've been...off chasing a lame goose. Know how I know...not that I'm a sucker, that Eilian is acting? Thranduil and Ithilden know about what he is up to and if Eilian were involved in substance abuse, he'd be on the locked ward of the Mirkwood Rehab Cavern. Thranduil is the original 'intervention elf'. Eilian would be chained to a wall if that's what it took. So this is my take: The dang! dangwath has been disappearing for some time. The feast disappearance of the herb was a setup so that people would connect it to Eilian. Ithilden has recruited Eilian due to his recent brush with shadow sickness to be the bait for the guys trafficking the dang! dangwath. Maltanaur is watching Eilian's back as usual. (I won't even go into what Maltanaur would do to Eilian after Thranduil finished with him if Eilian had been joyriding on this weed.) Thranduil ain't happy about using his son as bait, but it's one of those necessary evils. He wants Legolas to be as far away from this drug sting as possible when it goes down, so he's asked Eilian to stay away from him. And for once, Eilian agrees with his father. Of course, Legolas--the last Elf in all of Mirkwood to ever know what's going on--will manage to get right in the middle of this drug operation. That's what happens when you don't know what's going on, ya know. You go off chasing a lame goose and feel sorry for your brother. I sympathize. My work here is done...until the next chapter. I might have to revise a little. :>) Now...to our competent commander. I was laughing out loud. What a visit. He sat there like a wooden bench...until he adorned his tunic and leggings with tea. And Alfirin was just trying to be helpful. You go, girl...er, elleth. I'd like to think that he would have invited her to go walking or something and didn't come to just stare at her. A pinch of dang! dangwath in his tea might help loosen him up a bit. Yeah, he'll be back. Tonduil might not survive this courtship though. What a hoot! Well, Thranduil backed himself into a corner with the going-out-after-dark thing. At least, on this occasion, Legolas went home when promised. I can't vouch for him any further. I see trouble on the horizon. Your minstelship, you have woven a fine tale here, indeed. You're leading us on merry chase. I have to say that I'm a little disappointed that we won't get to see 'intervention adar', but I have a feeling that I might be just tickled pink with whatever you have up your sleeve. It looks like an exciting ride. The tone is still a little darker than usual, but I like that. I love a good peek into the shadows of our favorite Elves. Ah, the unusual, the rare, the never-seen-before underbelly of the immortal. See the Elves as you've never seen them before. Staring Eilian Thranduilion in a role sure to bring him recognition as one the finest actors in all Arda. Co-staring: Thranduil Oropherion, Ithilden Thranduilion, and in a special appearance, Alfirin, as the healer's daughter. Yes, the Academy is well pleased. Karen
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I liked what you said in the previous two reviews! It was very insightful about the shadow and the effect it might have on people. And Eilian really does have shadow sickness. What else he might *really* be doing is another question. You argue very well about that. :-) Poor Ithilden. If he'd been spared from utter humiliation for long enough, he probably would have asked her to go for a walk. As it is, he's probably walking funny. I have to admit I still laugh when I think of her mother asking if she should "take a look" to see if Ithilden is burned. Legolas is being a very good boy for now. He wants to go out again. What might happen on further night adventures is another good question!
Tapetum Lucidum · 15 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
I was right! I knew you and Ithilden were up to something! Now Eilian is working as one of Thranduil's spies. I thought it was very OOC for Eilian to get sucked into something like the dangwath. I am glad he is working for his brother. Legolas was very smooth on that one. Thranduil walked right into it. I tend to agree with the king. It wasn't really a set up - it was taking advantage of a good opportunity to get what he wanted. I was surprised that Thranduil had asked Eilian to stay away from his brother. Once I figured out what he was up to then it made a lot more sense. Ithilden's little visit to Alfirin's was very amusing! It is good comic relief against the other serious story line. Can you even imagine a prince showing up at your door unannounced? Tonduil definitely has some hero worship going on. Nothing like having hot tea dumped in your lap to squelch your romantic aspirations. I am sure Alfirin's mother is correct - Lord Ithilden will be back. It must have been hard for Eilian to face this particular "weakness." Especially if he had been relatively immune to it in the past. Maltanaur will keep him on the straight and narrow. You did well having him announce his presence to all those along the riverbank. Anyone would know where to find him. Annael's mom is the best. No wonder Legolas loves her so much. She is very thoughtful and she and Siondel have realistic expectations for an elfling Annael's age. Thranduil would do well to take some hints from her. I liked how Legolas had the nerve to speak up in Penntalion's defense. Not every kid would tell their friend that some of the blame was their own. I would have followed my sibling too. Even if he was healthy and well - it is natural - much less with him not acting himself. I should have known that Maltanaur would be involved. He would not leave Eilian vulnerable. You did a good job with Hiolith's background. He is obviously not a bad elf - he has just been dealt a bad hand. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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I think I'm not going to comment on sneaky suspicionsess. I ALWAYS give away plot points because I love chatting about my characters. :-) I wrote the Ithilden part of this chapter last and laughed all the way through it, especially when Alfirin's mother offered to 'take a look' to see if he was burned. If that was my mother, I think I would pull up a floor board and crawl under it. Eilian was really shaken by the shadow sickness. I think he's feeling surprised by his own vulnerability and it's scaring him. He's normally cheerful but I also think he has these dark spots in his life. He's not living a normal life for a wood elf and he knows that his father does not always understand or approve of him, but he's helpless to change. It's good that Maltanaur is there. Maltanaur and Legolas both support Eilian in different ways. Maltanaur offers loving criticism and an occasional smack; Legolas loved Eilian uncritically at this point in his life, although he may be getting to the age when that will change. Annael's mom sends cider and seed cakes for all three of them. Isn't that great? I love her too. I'm interested in Elves like Hiolith who do some things that are outside the accepted actions. How do elves react? I'm going to show that, I hope.
Dot · 15 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
Oh! Oh! The plot well and truly thickens. You are just too darn clever. I owe Eilian SUCH a big apology. See, it’s really hard now to go back to the start of the chapter when Thranduil and Ithilden are trying to reassure Legolas about Eilian after reading the end of the chapter… “Legolas, if you want to help Eilian, the best thing you can do right now is leave him in peace.” Yeah. I feel like such a dimwit. I had totally thought that they were trying to protect him from the reality of shadow sickness and how badly Eilian was affected. But I guess they were doing that too. I feel bad for Legolas. He adores Eilian and must be shaken by his recent behaviour. Even the way that he asks “Was he drunk last evening?” has a sense of disappointment to it. Or maybe he knows that’s something that his father would disapprove of. How could Thranduil give Legolas an opening like that??! I’m glad Thranduil had enough sense to see that there’s no way Legolas would pretend to be concerned for his brother just to get something he wants. Anyway, I think it’s perfectly reasonable to allow him to do the same as Annael. I know, Turgon is there too… But not allowing Legolas out at night isn’t exactly going to prevent him getting into any mischief Turgon can concoct. I like the little discussion about when Legolas’ brothers were allowed out at night. Interesting how the child of the Peace is the most troubled. It was probably harder too to impose boundaries when there was no real reason whereas now at least when everyone knows that there is danger, certain restrictions make sense. I hope young Ithilden had friends with whom he desperately wanted to be out at night but I rather think it wasn’t such a big deal for him. Hmmn. Thranduil reinforcing the notion that Legolas will be seen as his son at all times could quite possibly make him rather more aware of his brothers’ behaviour in public too… That whole scene with Alfirin and Ithilden was priceless. Did he just turn up out of the blue, have a cup of tea and go away again?! Brilliant. I guess he’s made up his mind to pursue her then. He seems to have made a rather imposing figure on the doorstep. And WHEN will ‘mistress’ and ‘my lord’ become just ‘Alfirin’ and ‘Ithilden’?! I love Alfirin’s amused father, bustling mother and awe-struck brother. “The tea is very good.” Well, I suppose that was a commendable sentence under pressure. And he spilled his tea! *cringe* It’s just one of those moments that seem to happen in slow motion, yet you end up somehow powerless to stop it. Even funnier than Alfirin dabbing at his leggings was her mother “Are you burnt, my lord? Let me take a look.” LOL! Poor Tonduil is horrified. And Ithilden could be walking funny for days. That’s right up there with the vomiting, I think. Poor guy. And yet I laugh… Eilian seems to be pretty much on the edge of society at the moment. Thank heavens for Maltanaur dragging him home, though or who knows what would have happened. In some ways it’s a good thing in that he needs to know that he’s not as invincible as he thinks, but I hate to see him realise that at the same time. I admire his determination to conquer this. He’s obviously pulled himself out of the grips of despair. I like his new-found awareness in the way he looks at others and realises that there could be more to them too than he thought. Gee, that is surprising how Eilian and Thranduil both seem to have behaved rather typically. Am I to take it that if there was a Middle-earth equivalent of the Oscars, they might get one for best ensemble cast…? I love how delighted – and astonished – Annael and Turgon are that Legolas was allowed to join them. Hang on a tick. Didn’t Turgon have some plan about what Legolas was to tell Thranduil? I hope the story about Annael was true. I had to laugh at Legolas getting totally prepared for a serious discussion about the importance of consistent form. He’s such a little archer already. I wonder if Siondel did tell his family something about Eilian. That’s a tough one. I know he speaks more openly than Thranduil does but it’s awkward when his son is best friends with Eilian’s brother. I can’t believe they witnessed that. No doubt no-one will think to explain to Legolas what’s going on, he’ll jump to his own conclusions and with Turgon in the mix, good intentions are bound to end up in trouble. Hiolith’s story sounds scarily similar to Eilian’s own. The south seems to have a way of attracting back some of her warriors. I can only have faith that Eilian has more strength than he did. I’m betting Maltanaur will be keeping a VERY close watch on his charge. Especially as Eilian isn’t completely himself yet. *sigh* What a great twist. Or maybe I’m just an idiot. I mean, the clues were there! I KNEW Ithilden and Thranduil were strangely comfortable with allowing Eilian deal with his illness by himself, I KNEW it was odd that Ithilden let a well-known gossip hang out with a very shaky Eilian, OF COURSE Ithilden would have known there was an archery contest on when he sent Eilian off to the practice fields. Then there’s the whole “you must trust him” conversation, frowning poor Calith into silence when he would presumably have realised that news of Eilian’s condition would be wide-spread in a matter of hours and… and… probably more that I can’t think of at the moment! Plus Eilian, who may be a little wild at times, has some sense and so his very public behaviour on both the field and at the feast was a tad surprising, yet still not out of character enough for me to be suspicious that it was more than the shadow’s effects. I could kick myself. This is fantastic, daw. I’m beginning to wonder what else I missed, though. Darnit, at least I didn’t think Hobbit was really a Dwarf-child!! :-)
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Legolas does adore Eilian, and I think he's willing to accept quite a lot from him without criticizing him. But I can see why Thranduil thinks Legolas is better off away from his brother right now. Eilian is doing something dangerous on several levels, and Legolas is not good at being deceptive. I think that Eilian probably had more freedom than either of his brothers when he was young because of the Peace and I'll bet that when restrictions were finally set (and he would have been the equivalent of a human 16 year old), he took them very badly. I find it hard to imagine Ithilden at this age, actually. Surely he was kid like too? Pathetic as it is, I laughed out loud when writing about Ithilden and Alfirin and am still laughing as I read your review. "Shall I take a look?" Could a mother utter a more embarrassing sentence??? I think that Eilian is actually a little hurt that people are unsurprised at his behavior (he accepts your apology :-)). His shadow sickness was real enough and scared the wits out of him. He does tend to believe he's invulnerable and he's learning a hard lesson. I thought that Siondel would probably tell Annael what he thought was wrong with Eilian. I pictured him speaking seriously and urging compassion for a brave warrior. And btw, while Turgon did coach Legolas about how to be allowed out, Legolas just told the truth and took advantage of the opening Thranduil gave him. Dot, you're surely not suggesting that there's been some deception here? :-)
Karri · 15 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
I love Legolas's concern for Eilian. He such a good kid. I liked that he was quick enough to take advantage of the opening left by his ada, all the same. Ithilden's encounter with Alfirin's family was humourous, but a little painful as the nervousness and embarrasment was so palpable. I really liked Alfirin. She is a good match for Ithildin. (Still don't like Celuwen, though. *sigh*) Eilian is in a bad way. It think Maltanaur must be very frustrated. It is his job to protect the elfling, not judge him, and I think he must be feeling rather helpless at the moment. Thranduil and Ithilden need to step in and do more than whatever they are doing to knock some sense back into Eilian and get him cleaned up. I worry that Legolas is going to end up emotional hurt in the least and in physical danger trying to help Eilian at the worst if something isn't done soon. Great chapter!
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Legolas is loving but he's not a fool and if his father is going to offer him an opening like that, he's going to drive right through it! Someday, he'll be a good tactician as a warrior. :-) Ithilden's encounter with Alfirin's family was painful for more reasons than nervousness! Tea in his lap must have killed any romantic notions for a while! Your observation about Maltanaur is really good. It is his job to protect Eilian, not judge him, and the keepers have all tried to refrain from carrying tales partly because their charges would then not trust them and partly because they are genuinely fond of them.
Duchess · 15 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
Sneaky Legolas, pouncing on that golden opportunity like that. *g* Poor Ithilden! His first visit to see Alfrin was a complete DISASTER, wasn't it? But you have to admit, it WAS very funny. LOL Oh I was sooooo worried that Eilian was hooked on that drug, but now it looks like he's investigating someone who is basically a drug pusher, looking for new marks. Please tell me I read it right and Eilian isn't actually addicted to that stuff? Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease? *not wanting to think that of Eilian at all* I'm also glad Legolas and Annael didn't let Turgon talk them into staying out later! *sighing with relief*
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Legolas was very alert for what would help him convince Thranduil to let him go out and Thranduil just gave him the perfect opening! I have to admit that I laughed out loud when writing about poor Ithilden having the tea land in his lap. And then Alfirin tries to mop it up and her mother offers to "take a look." He must have been mortified! You'll have to draw your own conclusions about Eilian, Duchess.
sofia · 15 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
I think Alfirin’s parents know that she and Ithilden like each other. That whole situation must of been embarrassing and funny. more soon please. -sofia
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Oh, I think you're right about Alfirin's parents, Sofia. After all, they've been in love themselves and they know their daughter. And when Ithilden shows up on their doorstep unexpectedly, there aren't a lot of other reasons they can think of. But how awful that the tea lands in his lap! And her healer mother offers to "take a look." Poor Alfirin.
Alice · 15 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
And the plot thickens. Eilian is in over his head. Drug use is different for elves. A human family would probably be horrified and I doubt someone would be enabling him. But then addiction is rare for elves and they don't have deaths, people in prison, and many nasty things that happen because of drugs. This story is actually kind of scary. It's easy to see that Eilian's in trouble and know we find out that people don't seem to realize just how much. I think this story's headed for some angst. On the lighter side of things though is Ithilden's courtship of Alfirin. (Snickers). Oh the poor, poor boy. And poor Alfirin too. And Tonduil. His hero comes and visits and his family spills tea on him. Oh the mortification. Ah well. We know Ithilden hangs in there. Which is good because apparently this whole courtship thing is not going as planned. Oh my poor commander of troops. It's a lot of fun reading about their courtship. Their both so shy and awkward that they're unbearabley cute. Poor Legolas. He is not going to be happy when he finds out that he's not supposed to see Eilian. I wouldn't be either at that age. Of course, I'd be really upset if my friend knew more about what was happening in my own family than I did. Thranduil's just a might overprotective of his baby. As witnessed by his willingness to allow Eilian, the problem child, to do more things at Legolas's age. Thranduil is going to have some choice words to say to Eilian about letting that one slip. Ithilden chose the better part of valor by leaving that discussion. I'm really enjoying this story. I really like the title by the way. Though Prodigal Sons is my favorite title. I look forward to the next chapter.
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I didn't think there would be a big culture of drug use in Middle-earth. Life was too hard, and people struggled just to survive. Being strung out would get you killed. But addiction of warriors who had been treated with a drug struck me as possible, particularly among Men. I have to admit that I laughed when I was writing the Ithilden part of this. Alfirin dabs away at Ithilden's crotch and her mother offers to take a look. How embarrassing! It would make a good story to tell Sinnarn some day but I doubt if either of these two would tell it. Maybe Uncle Tonduil would! Ithilden was indeed smart to stay out of the discussion of whether Legolas should be allowed out. Legolas went home when he was supposed to and stayed in the area he was supposed to, so Thranduil will probably be reassured, but Legolas is very worried about Eilian.
nessie · 15 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
I have a bad feeling about Eilian...But anyways! I loved, loved, loved Ithilden's part in here! Oh, how embarrassing it probably was for him! I giggled rather loudly and I think my mom is wondering what the heck is going on. And about those three rascals...Curiousity killed the cat, kiddies. But I'm glad Legolas had enough sense to return. That Turgon, oy, I feel sorry for Thranduil sometimes. But this was another great chapter as always and update asap! ~nessie~
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The part about Ithilden made me laugh while I was writing it too. Can you imagine how embarrassed Alfirin was when she realized where she was dabbing and then her mother offered to "take a look"? LOL The boys did very well in going home in time for their curfew, despite Turgon's urging that they stay a little longer. Legolas did not want to blow his chances to get out again. Glad you liked it.
naneth · 15 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
I knew we were being set up. Poor Legolas- to be out of the "loop" and worried so. A good mystery is always a good read!
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Legolas is really worried about Eilian, and with what looks like good reason. You think you're being set up, naneth? You have a suspicious mind.
Jay of Lasgalen · 15 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
Oh, Lord, I was afraid that Eilian was going to get involved with dangwath. I hope he won't become addicted - he seems to be badly affected by shadow sickness this time. I loved the tale of poor Ithilden and the tea - Alfirin trying to dab it off, and her mother offering to take a look! And poor Tonduil didn't understand what was so funny. I love this new tale! Jay
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Eilian's shadow sickness is really painful and distressing to him. Maltanaur was genuinely worried about him and still is. I have to admit that I still laugh when I think about Alfirin's mother offering to take a look. No wonder her daughter wanted to crawl into a hole. Can you imagine that? And Tonduil is just appalled. LOL
Manderly · 15 August 2004 · Chapter 3: Along the River
Hmm, so have I been wrong to be so worried about Eilian and his 'possible addiction'? Sounds like some kind of sting operation going on here, or am I totally off course? I was really anticipating the worst until Maltanaur showed up and then I felt this ridiculous relief. You really do get us involved with your characters. The scene at Alfirin's cottage was hilarius - an elvish take on Meet the Inlaws, no less. How will Ithilden live it down? But I suppose love conquers all. And Legolas outsmarting Thranduil - took much sadistic delight from that.
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I'm glad you were relieved when Maltanaur turned up. I like it that you respond to my characters this way. The whole scene with Alfirin's family made me laugh as I wrote it, particularly when her mother asked if he was burned and offered to "take a look." Shoot. I'm laughing now. Legolas is a clever kid and Thranduil left himself wide open.