Linus · 17 October 2004 · Chapter 1: Me Again
It's true, it reminded my a bit of "Sixth sense". But then, I also quite like the idea of Boromir coming back to visit his brother as a young boy. I don't know, if this was your intention when you wrote this but that was what came to my mind. Although it is not a poem, I think it is rather poetic or is lyric the better word. Sorry,I'm not a native speaker and sometimes it's a bit difficult to explain. However, one expression certainly applies and cannot by misunderstood: wow !