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Silivren Tinu · 30 July 2006 · Chapter 9: Comes a New Day

Legolas trying to get all that food into him as quickly as possible must have been a sight to behold. *g* And it seems tempers are flaring again. I can understand how difficult it must be for Legolas to speak about that dream (especially in front of a disbelieving dwarf). Eolyn really has a lot of good sense, it's a good thing all of them ended up in her house. I simply love the interaction between Legolas and Eolyn, and I can only imagine how happy he must be to be able to bathe again. ;-) And it seems he even escaped with his modesty intact, lol. That is such a sweet scene, with Legolas sleeping against Aragorn's shoulder and Eolyn combing his hair! *huggles all* It seems things are finally getting back to normal again... *watches elf and dwarf happily exchanging insults* I was so looking forward to the moment when Legolas would finally see the mare! :) I'm really relieved now, for I moment I thought she would still decide to leave. The two of them must be such a beautiful sight! Legolas really deserves this joy. “You may tell us whenever you find those words, mellon nin, and know that we will believe you.” - I love that ex-ranger. :) "Both songs are part of the Great Song…I knew that, but did not realize that through my own song, I could bring them into harmony." - A wonderful idea, and absolutely perfect. The scene with Legolas and Aragorn sitting there and Legolas singing was incredibly beautiful. I think I'll probably sit here for a while and listen closely - perhaps I will hear the song. I'm glad Aragorn does not need to fear for his friend any longer. I wish I would be Laelith or Eolyn. *sigh* It must be nice to have a singing elf in your garden for a time... ;-) Hm, I think Eolyn and Laelith are really going to miss that elf... I wonder what trip Legolas has in mind? Another wonderful chapter, I especially love all the parts about Legolas' new song. That was quite breathtaking. *dreamy look* Tinu :)

Silivren Tinu · 30 July 2006 · Chapter 8: Safe Havens

You keep fascinating me and drawing me in with the way you depict nature, in this case, the storm. I know I repeat myself, but I love the way you do this. The mare and Arod together must be a sight to behold! Legolas really has made a lot of friends. *smiles fondly at Elfwine* And of course a nine-year-old cannot be called a boy any longer. *g* I love the atmosphere you conjure up in this stall, with the two horses and the boy and the storm... It seems the mare has truly made her decision now. You have a wonderful way to describe horses - you give them so much personality, but they never appear too human. I think I will expect each horse I meet to act like this from now on, it seems so natural. ;-) Arod has obviously a gift to comfort more people than just his master. Hehe, I can easily believe Eomer would have been frantic! These young ones never consider how much concern they cause with their actions. *g* Well, that woman is obviously not awestruck at the sight of an elf. *giggle* “All mothers are forces of nature, and not to be trifled with, my friend,” - LOL! *sigh* It's so nice how his three friends keep watch over him, and I like the idea to bring him into the garden, unconscious or not. Though I hope for Gimli's sake that Legolas wasn't able to hear that "wilted flower" remark. *g* Arod and Elfwine on a stealth mission, hm? ;-) Legolas really has wonderful friends, both four-legged and two-legged. “He loves you, too, Master Gimli.” - LOL! I bet Gimli didn't want to hear that comment, however true it undoubtedly is. Oh, you even give Olorin an appearance in the story! *huggles author and Olorin* And of course he knows already what's going to happen with LEgolas and Gimli. *g* "Waking up was like surfacing after a dive into a great container of his favorite pudding." - *imagines Legolas jumping into container with pudding and giggles* *happy sigh* That was the perfect ending for a perfect chapter! :) Tinu

Silivren Tinu · 30 July 2006 · Chapter 7: Out of Time and Mind

I am sorry to hear about the illness of your mother, I hope she has recovered completely by now. I know hos difficult such a situation can be - my own mother had an accident some months ago and was completely unable to move for more than a month. Situations like that can be very frightening and sometimes do not even leave the room to *think* about writing. Alright, back to the story. :) I think I'm going to need tissues if you go on like that. This is both sweet and heartbreaking. *sniff* "I will be with you every step of the way. I will not leave you." - *sigh* Friendship is something wonderful to write about, isn't it? I love it that the mare still refuses to leave. "Leaving the walkway, he approached the tree, his awestruck gaze tracing the trunk up and up, following the graceful branching of limbs draped in a gray-green robe of leaves and mist." - I love this description and Legolas' interaction with the tree! It seems we both have a liking for oak trees. ;-) Wow! You leave me slightly speechless here- what a wonderful idea to bring Nienna and the Valar into the story in such a way! I'm so glad they want to help Legolas, he really deserves it! "no one of importance" - *snorts and mutters something about stupid, stubborn elves* "As for your fears of eternal separation from them…you must, in the end, trust that He will reunite all of you someday.” - *sniff, sigh* Legolas is not the only one who feels comforted here... So that is why he suddenly started weeping before. *huggles soundly sleeping Elf* What a description of the sea, I feel as if I were right there standing on these shores now! This chapter was so incredibly beautiful! *sigh* For the moment I think words are a bit inadequate... Tinu *sigh*

Silivren Tinu · 30 July 2006 · Chapter 6: Lingering Shadow

Hm, the first sentence doesn't sound very reassuring. *starts worrying* After the last chapter I had already begun to fear that the sea-longing would affect Legolas again soon. If she doesn't want LEgolas, that horse must be crazy - or perhaps she values her freedom too much. *sigh* Poor elf, his heart has obviously already made the decision. I fear it will be very painful for him if he has to let her go. I really liked Arod feeling insulted on Legolas' behalf. *pats horse* The story about Legolas and the stallion is fascinating, I can understand that he wants the mare so much now. Uh-oh, that's not good. It seems Strider has said the wrong thing. I wish Legolas would come back, I have a bad feeling about this... The description of the conversation between Legolas and the mare was wonderful, I could nearly hear her voice in my mind - and it seems to me she has not yet decided whether she will leave or come back. I feel so sorry for Legolas, he is obviously convinced that all his hopes have been crushed once again. *sigh* I wish he would allow his friends to help him, instead of hiding away. Stubborn pointy-eared princeling. *grumbles* Wait a moment - what watcher? Oh no! Worrying for that wayward elf is going to kill me - will you STAY AWAY FROM THESE ORCS??? *tries to drag Legolas back to the camp and gets dragged through the trees instead* *sigh* Alright, apart from being worried I really like Legolas in warrior mode, and your battle scene is great. I knew it! NO! Legolas must not fall into the hands of orcs! I want to see an irate ranger and dwarf right now! How will Legolas be able to handle this on top of the sea-longing and everything else? I really didn't expect that turn of events - it seems you have found a wonderful new way to torture your characters and readers. ;-) I'm so glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter... Hurry up! Yes, go and look for him, and be quick about it, before the orcs hurt Legolas even more! "Ai, Legolas, could you not trust me?" - Indeed! *glares at stubborn unconscious elf* If they don't hurry up I'll have to hop in there and... well, do something. Good that they have Aravir with them who can communicate with the trees. "His voice broke. "They have Legolas." He felt a strong hand clasp his arm and tug him up to his feet with inexorable strength. "Not for long, lad," a gruff, implacable voice said and he looked down into the dark eyes of an enraged dwarf." - I loved that! *huggles man and dwarf* I also loved the mare coming back and leading them to Legolas. I'm so glad they found him! I love it how gentle and concerned they all are towards Legolas, I think he really needs some care now. I like rescue-and-comfort scenes. :) Poison, too? Oh dear, the poor elf. "Closing his eyes, he allowed the sweet song of healing he had learned at the side of the Lord of Imladris to sing through him and flow into the suffering body of his friend. We are here, Legolas. You are safe. I have not the skill of my Adar, but take my strength now and rest." - That was so beautiful! I loved the idea with the "song of healing". Well, this chapter leaves me very, very worried. Boy, I LOVE your writing! :) Tinu

Silivren Tinu · 30 July 2006 · Chapter 5: Mithril and Gold

I love seeing Arod and Legolas so happy together, though I have a feeling that the poor elf has no chance against a playful Arod. *g* "that braid is not removable" - *giggle* Something tells me that Legolas might look a bit disheveled this morning. I really like the idea that Arod will stay with Legolas, a separation would have been so hard for both of them - I was curious whether Arod would really be willing to leave Legolas and go back to the herds, it seems I have my answer. ;-) I can't believe Eomer told Legolas about Aragorn's "trees and rope and singing" remark, lol! It seems Legolas does not have much trust in his friend's talents as a singer. *giggle* Did I already mention somewhere that I love your sense of humour?! I'm really curious now what kind of new horse you have in mind for Legolas. It is wonderful to see Legolas well and happy again, and I am glad that he is so well-loved and worried over. If his friends would not care about him so much, that stubborn elf would probably succeed in killing himself while trying to suffer through his problems alone one day. *shakes head* I love your descriptions of Rohan and nature - I always enjoy it when the beauty of nature shines through in a story, and your images are so peaceful and beautiful. I'm glad Legolas did not choose the black horse - somehow I can't see him riding a black horse, the contrast would be so strong. Well, I would probably have gotten used to it, but I'm already looking forward to the search, and this would have spoilt it. ;-) "When sleep claimed him, his dreams led him down the shady paths of Eryn Lasgalen, his father’s strong hand resting on his shoulder and his beautiful voice blending in song with his son’s." - I really liked that! :) This mare sounds truly beautiful, though poor Legolas will obviously be teased relentlessly because of his choice. *g* It sounds like just the right horse for an elven prince. I wonder if Arod will approve. I loved the descriptions, the horses and the humour in this chapter! :) Tinu

Silivren Tinu · 29 July 2006 · Chapter 4: What Price Friendship?

Arod is such a sweetheart! Oh, my poor elf, this is so sad. *sigh* It is unfair that the sea-longing causes him to lose the joy in all the things he has loved before. It is mean that he should suffer so for being such a good friend. Did I mention how sweet Arod is? ;-) I like their conversations. And I like it that Legolas longs for Aragorn to be there and provide comfort - I have a feeling that wish will be granted (hurry up, Aragorn!). I really like Arod's protectiveness, and that he lets only Aragorn pass. :) What a rude way of waking poor Legolas (*g*), but I guess he was so glad to see his friend that he did not mind. *sniff* To see Legolas like this is heartbreaking. I liked the idea of Legolas talking Gimli through the Paths of the Dead pretending that he was only speaking to Arod. Just what the elf would do, I am glad Gimli saw through it! The part about the creation of the world is what I like best about the Silmarillion, I loved how you integrated it here! "When you are ripped from that perfect dream and thrust back into the real world, having seen and experienced perfection, the world now holds nothing but pain…and longing.” - That's exactly how I see the sea-longing - it is terrible because of its beauty and perfection. Who could be called to a world without pain and sorrow and death, and resist such a call? The sad thing about it is, that the sea-longing could be a blessing, if one follows the call, just the thing Legolas can't do. I like the idea that there is a way to cope with the call, and that Legolas simply has to find it. The ending and Aragorn's plea were so beautiful! *sigh* I only hope Eru is listening, but it seems he is... This chapter was just wonderful, but also heartbreaking. *huggles poor sleeping elf* Tinu :)

Silivren Tinu · 29 July 2006 · Chapter 3: In Dealing With Stubborn Elves

Here I am again! *happy sigh* This story always gives me something to look forward to, though it is really difficult to leave the poor elf behind in the state he is in, just to go working and do various Real Life things. ;-) I'm so glad you won't kill Arod off - when I read that his leg was injured I feared the worst (you never know what an author is up to ;-). Btw, I tend to reread my stories too, when I get new reviews - it can be sometimes fun and sometimes embarrassing. *g* Well, back to the chapter. It is really a relief that Aragorn knows about Legolas' situation now, if anyone can find a way to help Legolas, it is him. I loved how you integrated the history of the elves in this chapter, and I really liked what Arwen said about how Legolas acts around water - it instantly reminded me of him at the Nimrodel when the Fellowship was on its way to Lothlorien. I liked Aragorn's concern for his friend, and his anger on his behalf. :) "Urging him to go will only add to his pain.” - That was a very wise thing to say. I always thought Arwen would be able to understand Legolas very well, after all she had made a similar choice for the same reasons. Aragorn of course can't easily see it that way, as he feels guilty because of his friend's choice. Stubborn human. ;-) Ai, it is sad to learn that Legolas has been so alone all the time, except for Arod, of course. Well, it's largely the fault of his own stubborness and his over-protectiveness towards his friends, but I still feel so sorry for him, suffering alone and in silence, and all out of love for his friends. *sigh* I'm really glad about Aragorn's urgency, and I like it that he goes as Strider. Somehow it would not be fitting to try and comfort Legolas as the King of Gondor. :P Men! *shakes head* I liked their bantering. ;-) "I am here now and there will be no more of this “suffering in silence all alone” business." - *grins* It's obvious he knows his friend very well! “Well, in dealing with stubborn elves, I have found that binding them to a tree and singing to them can usually bring them around to my way of thinking!” - I'd like to see that happen! *eg* I have a feeling Aragorn would end up hanging from that tree upside down, in no mood for singing. *g* I knew something was missing! *huggles Gimli before the dwarf has a chance to escape* Another wonderful chapter, I'm looking forward to the reunion of the friends! :) Tinu P.S. Nimue I Am's story can be found on ff.net, I have no idea whether it is allowed to include links here, otherwise I would. I have to look up Teanna's story, I do not know it. Well, I'm certainly far from a computer-expert, but I can do my best to bury you under heaps of well-meant, confusing advice. LOL!

Silivren Tinu · 27 July 2006 · Chapter 2: That Which Is Held Dear

*sniff* Poor Legolas and poor Arod. I only hope that Arod will recover at all, I don't know how Legolas will be able to cope with any other result - as it is, he seems barely be able to bear having to part from Arod at all, even if it is not death that parts them. I like it how sympathetic and understanding the people around him are, or try to be. Eomer has a wonderful family, and of course Lothiriel must be able to understand Legolas best, given her ancestry. Ranulf is a very good man, too. I can understand Legolas so well. Spending time with Arod and riding him might very well be the only refuge he has from his duties and fears. To be able and allowed to just be oneself can be something very precious, and Arod's love is unconditional. *sigh* I'm glad that Eomer and Lothiriel are aware of the situation and have decided to call for Aragorn if Legolas gets any worse. I simply love your descriptions, especially of Legolas and Arod, but also of Rohan. The "small yellow flowers called daystars" are just the ones Legolas reminds Arod of, aren't they? I liked it that Eomer had to think of these flowers, too (if I got it right ;-). A wonderful chapter, and I think I'll better keep a heap of tissues close. :) Tinu

Silivren Tinu · 27 July 2006 · Chapter 1: Arod, Mellon Nin

Of course I had to stick my nose into this story as soon as possible - elf-angst and horses, how could I ever resist such a lure? ;-) I love horses, and I already enjoyed the way you described Arod and his relationship to Legolas in "Le Abdollen". I liked how you described the communication between elf and horse in this first chapter, though I have a bad feeling about this injury - it might have something to do with the fact that you mentioned "first loss" in the author's notes. ;-) I think I'd better get me some tissues, just in case... I loved your description of their galopp together, Arod's playfulness, and how gentle and affectionate they are with each other. I was quite relieved when Eomer and his men showed up. "Lothiriel is beside herself, Elfwine has threatened to run away to look for you, and my own men had been packed for days before we left, they were that ready to find you! You have the entire realm in an uproar!" - I really liked that, lol! Legolas is obviously well-liked in Rohan. ;-) I loved this beginning, though I'm very worried about Arod now, and I fear I have every reason to be. :( P.S. Concerning the One Ring influencing members of the fellowship and especially Legolas and Gimli: have you read "Unrevelling the Tale" by Nimue I Am? In her story the Ring stirs up the enmity between L & G, and only turns to Boromir after they have become friends and are able to resist its influence. I just reread the story, and after reading your review reply I was wondering whether you know it, too. :) P.P.S. I don't know much about computers, too, but I'm quite used to posting on ff.net and Nan, so feel free to ask if you ever need to know something or need help with anything. :)

Eruanneth_Luin · 5 June 2006 · Chapter 18: Fields of Gold

Oh, such a sad truth; the memory of elves indeed vanished for millennia, until a certain young man from England heard the call from the distant past. Pristine elves! Now there is an image to delight the eyes. Though I think that in the midst of battle, they may become a bit sullied now and again. Almost I am severely envious of Raen; riding double with an elf! Would this include hanging on to said elf tightly to avoid losing one’s seat? Be still, silly woman! How lovely, the care of elves and boys for the beauty that surrounded them. Perhaps our world would be a better place for all if we took time to appreciate the splendor around us. Such a fitting name for a faithful companion.

Bodkin · 24 May 2006 · Chapter 20: There Shall Your Heart Dwell Also

What a lovely Thranduil. Power and sensitivity! His concern for Aravir was delightful - Aravir is clearly far more to him than simply his son's captain of the guard. More a member of his family. In a rather regal way. '“They will wait for you to soften me up.” ' Very clever of the sister and cousin! Aravir cannot walk away from his king - or tell him to mind his own business. He can even be parental enough to tell him '“Eat, or there will be no sweet for you later…"' The dream conversations with Nienna and Legolas learning his new part in the song - very elven - and I'm glad that he was able to let his adar see the change. (I just hope he can pass the understanding on to Aravir.) It makes sense that the Valar would have reasons to support Legolas in his need to stay - and that there would be a reason (which will, I hope make it into another story if not this one). “Lord Legolas sends you both his regards and requests that you stop discussing him and join him for the remaining festivities!” What a gorgeous line that is!! Don't know that I would have wanted to be the one to pass it on to Thranduil, though. I love the imagery in your writing. I can see the forest you describe just as clearly as I could picture the sea - and Henneth Annun. And that, of course, was a cleverly sneaky move from Thranduil. The song - Legolas's words are lovely. Hearing that his son had been numb to the treesong must have hurt - but I suppose that only makes it better that he can hear it now. I thoroughly enjoyed this - and what is more, it's even better on the second reading!

Fire · 23 May 2006 · Chapter 20: There Shall Your Heart Dwell Also

Such lovely pictures you paint with your words. The beauty of the forest makes me want to be able to go there. I had to laugh out loud at Eloriels toughts about Thranduil and Legolas, she just would love to give both of them a big piece of her mind doesn't she ;) The part about Legolas' palace (he hates the word I know) was so nice. A plague on stiff-necked elves :D now that sounds familiar, but Aragorn, Arwen and Faramir know very well how to handle him. And Gimli sure knows his friends wishes. As I can see it all elves are suckers for a pretty vieuw and a good picknick, Henneth Annun must be just perfect for them. Not being able to leave "the window of the sunset" without seeing the sunset was great. " I told you so" :D I love it

thechevin · 23 May 2006 · Chapter 20: There Shall Your Heart Dwell Also

Hi, I know this is late but after I read your other one shot story Le abdollen, I went back and looked for more of your work and found this, I had a whole evening to myself, just me and the laptop and I so much enjoyed what I read, I love Legolas's communication with Arod and his despair at the thought of losing him I noticed that you commented to another reviewer about Legolas interacting with 'normal' mortals and I loved the character Eolyn, she was a real treasure Also Arador's family who were so perceptive and knowing Aravir is another character I have taken to my heart while reading this story, the way the two elves mind speak with their horses and the horses with them makes me smile and cry in equal measure and then the icing on the cake, they go home and Thranduil is waiting such a lovely chapter and 'Ada punishment' this made me long to know more of Legolas and Aravir's life in the Greenwood So in short to stop me rambling, I really enjoyed the whole thing, and if I came late to the party it hasn't stopped me throughly enjoying the whole thing, thank you so much for sharing this

Manderly · 23 May 2006 · Chapter 20: There Shall Your Heart Dwell Also

So wonderful to see another chapter from you, Linda, and a wonderful chapter it was too! It was heartwarming to read the interaction between Legolas and Thranduil (and also between Thranduil and Aravir). A little fatherly cuddling, so to speak, is exactly what they both needed after what they went through. I love your Thranduil - charmingly opinionated and stubborn, but so full of affection and understanding for those dear to him. I can see a lot of him in Legolas (no surprise!). The sceneries that you painted in this chapter were beautiful. I felt I was there watching the sunset with those elves. Thank you for another chapter in this wonderful tale!

daw the minstrel · 22 May 2006 · Chapter 20: There Shall Your Heart Dwell Also

Ah, Thranduil! I love the guy. And this is a great look at him reacting to what's happened to his son. He's simultaeously supportive and cranky, no one you'd fool with, but someone you'd want on your side.

Wantanelf · 9 April 2006 · Chapter 19: Where Your Treasure Is…

As always your chapters are worth the wait. I don't care how slow you write them just so long you keep writing them. I really enjoy this story and am always so happy to see an update. I'm looking forward to the interaction between Legolas and his father. I think a visit from Thranduil is just what Legolas needs right now. Thanks for another great chapter.

Manderly · 8 April 2006 · Chapter 19: Where Your Treasure Is…

Simply wonderful! There were so many sigh-worthy things in this chapter that they all merged into one big sigh at the end of it. The parting from the humans was rather sad, but lightened by the promise of a visit in the spring. That family really has done so much to bring Legolas back from the brink. And what a wonderful surprise awaited Legolas at Ithilien! There is really nothing like coming home and having one's parent's waiting arms to welcome you. I hope to see more of this reunion in the coming chapter. Thanks for the update!

daw the minstrel · 8 April 2006 · Chapter 19: Where Your Treasure Is…

Ah, yes. I thought it would be Thranduil. How nice! Aragorn is a lucky man. His welcome home was warmer still. You did a nice job of sketching in Eldarion in very few words too.

Bodkin · 8 April 2006 · Chapter 19: Where Your Treasure Is…

I don't like goodbyes any more than Erelas's family does! At least they have the promise of coming to Minas Tirith in the spring and being the guest of the King and meeting Legolas and Aravir again. They are such a lovely family - all the way down to Brethilas and Lissiriel. (They would make good lords of that neck of the woods where they live. Landowners and guardians of the land.) Nice easy journey home - a bit of Aragorn tormenting, but that's good! Proves they feel well. And Arwen would send them straight off to the wood, would she? Someone very good with trees waiting for them? I like their thought that everyone is hiding from them, waiting to jump out and shout 'surprise!' Which, of course, they are. And have the party of the year afterward. But I'm looking forward to the reunion that is about to take place. On the other hand, I'm not looking forward to the end of this story!

Tinnuial · 8 April 2006 · Chapter 19: Where Your Treasure Is…

Thank you so much for persevering with this beautiful story...it really was a light in the dark this night. I felt tears coming to my own eyes at the reunion of father and son.... Can't wait for the next update!!! (But take your time ;) :)

Envinyatar · 9 February 2006 · Chapter 18: Fields of Gold

I read the first couple of chapters of this a long time ago, and then lost it. I've just read up to date and I have to congratulate you on a beautiful story. The way you have dealt with Legolas's sea-longing is original and convincing, and both canon and original characters ring true. Above all, I think you capture spirituality in the way Tolkien intended. A number of authors introduce religion in a way that I find jarring, as Tolkien was careful to omit any overt reference to Christianity. Your version is very uplifting and moving while being, to me, utterly true to the books. I am also captivated by your horses! Thanks for this story and my sympathy for your loss. Cheers, Envinyatar

Bodkin · 9 February 2006 · Chapter 18: Fields of Gold

I love Calen and Raen - two young men (very young men) who give you hope for the next generation. And their grandfather is adorable. I just love seeing him - the third youngest (and lowest-ranking) there - being paternal and supportive to all. He has great wisdom and self-confidence. Aravir's wavering as to whether to spray Legolas with sand was a delight - as was Legolas's hope that he would do it! They both need that kind of friend. Loved them taking the boys with them to the field of golden bells. What a glorious moment for them to store. And Arod - what a horse! Knows when to support and when to stand back. Alfirin is a lovely name for the golden mare - and she and Legolas have definitely bonded. Arod can relax now! Aragorn is being very patient but he must be relieved. Both Legolas and Aravir are dealing with this quite well - and he must be fairly confident that he is going to be able to get them back in one piece. I love the byplay between him and Legolas. Food fight, indeed! I wonder what the guards think of that! The whole atmosphere of this chapter is like a seaside holiday - just lovely.

daw the minstrel · 7 February 2006 · Chapter 18: Fields of Gold

You do such a nice job showing the ties between elves and the natural world, be it horses or the sea or flowers or the wind. And I like seeing the boys be so reverent toward the same things. They're not elves, but they're not thoughtless clods either. It's a nice balance.

WindSinger · 23 November 2005 · Chapter 17: The Gift of the Sea

My goodness! What a nice, well done chapter! I just love how you have brought Legolas through levels of understanding and coping with his sea longing. And how beautifully you have incorporated the concept that we never really lose anyone; they are still part of us -- in our thoughts -- in our soul -- in the on going song that binds all into one glorious, never ending symphony. And I just love the elves and horses playing! I have a friend who is working with an abused horse and she is teaching him how to play. What a wonderful, joyous way to bond with such magnificant creatures! And introducing the smitten elves to the microcosm found in a tide pool was yet another brilliant stroke! What a wonderful way to help explain/show the interconnectedness of all life. I also love that the elves are/were the 'magic in the world'. Wonderful stuff! Thank you for this wonderful, almost joyous, chapter. WindSinger

Angelelf · 14 November 2005 · Chapter 17: The Gift of the Sea

I had a beautiful day yesterday after reading your story from start to finish. I've been keeping up with your chapter updates but since I had extra time I decided to reread it and I can't tell you how much I enjoyed it again. I love how you have captured all of the characters as they help Legolas with his sea longing. I adore all the new characters that you have introduced along his journey, especially the children. Great story. Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us.