Eruanneth_Luin
· 12 April 2005
· Chapter 14: The Nature of Hope
Ah, Legolas approaching the Sea. Now I begin to wonder what might happen if Aravir hears the gulls and hears the call, too. Aragorn could have his hands very full of unhappy Elves. Guess I will have to wait to find out.
It is nice to see Elves that have different strengths and weaknesses and even realize their limitations. In particular I like the transition from subordinate to ‘friend’; a rather difficult accomplishment after a lifetime of respect-for-royalty training.
Also you are right about the stallion and mare. She will be more than willing in time; I just hope it does not occur at an awkward situation.
The human family is wonderful, displaying the natural curiosity, yet also cautious with the unknown as would be the case living far from others.
Oh, how I agree with this noble horse! Animals can tell quickly when there is a problem with the ones they love.
The farmstead is going to get rather crowded with all the exalted company arriving. But then maybe the King’s attendants thought to provide a comfortable pavilion for their liege lord.
Author's reply
OOOHHH! Now I hadn't thought of Aravir's reaction to the sea...what a thought! Hmmmmmm...
Yes, Aravir found there was a huge difference between Aravir, Captain and Aravir, friend of Legolas. He's having to overcome centuries of training in order to lighten up a little. But it will be well worth it, and Legolas needs an elven friend (a permanent fixture in his life that he won't look at and wonder how much longer that friend will be around).
Ha! What a thought about the horses and awkward situations! ;-) I think the mare will continue to ignore Thalion a while longer. She was not impressed!
Arod and the mare are becoming more and more aware of the return of the disquiet and longing in Legolas. It upsets them greatly that he has made the decision to come so close to that which causes him so much pain.
Enter the King! Aragorn would have you know that he has been known to sleep under the stars...pavilions are not for rugged, manly Ranger-Kings! :-) It certainly is getting crowded, tho'...will have to work on the logistics some! Thank you for taking the time to review, Nancy (and beta, too!)
linda
daw the minstrel
· 12 April 2005
· Chapter 14: The Nature of Hope
Lovely ending in particular! Elessar arrives and that sends a thrill through me.
I hope you have good plans for these humans, Linda.
Author's reply
Hello daw! Elessar is that kind of guy, and he shows up when he's needed the most. He just couldn't bear the thought of being left behind.
Let's just say I have plans for the humans (not bad ones, just interesting!) LOL Thank you for taking the time to read and review! :-)
linda
Tinnuial
· 12 April 2005
· Chapter 14: The Nature of Hope
Here comes Aragorn to save the day!! :)
Thank you so much for the new chapter....makes studying for exams just a little more interesting...and provides me a wonderful means of procrastination hehehe...
I love Arador! Such an understanding fellow he is. I can just picture them listening to Legolas' beautiful voice at the edge of the wood. I shall have pleasant dreams tonight, of a forest by the lake and sweet elvensong drifting through the trees...
Author's reply
Yuck! Exams! You poor thing! I am so glad my little chapter helped you out with your studying (tho' I now give exams rather than take them...to third graders...you ought to hear them moan...) As for the dreaded "P" word, my dear, I am on VERY good terms with procrastination! LOL
Still, I'm glad you liked the chapter. And Arador is pretty cool...he's going to turn out even more understanding than you know, Tinnuial! As for your pleasant dreams, I am happy to have put the thought in your head...and in mine! Thank you for taking the time off from studying to review...good luck on those exams...don't get lost in the forest! :-)
linda
Dot
· 10 April 2005
· Chapter 12: In Search of the Sea
Wow there was a lot in this chapter! So many things about it that I loved…
Aravir’s confusion and turmoil came across so well. It would be easy to just look at him and say that he should have gone after Legolas immediately but you do a marvellous job in showing how unnatural that would be to him, how used he is to obeying orders unquestioningly.
And that flashback! My God! Poor brave, young Aravir. What an awful thing to happen. How generous of Thranduil and his wife to provide the orphaned children with a home, comfort, love and a future. The depth of Aravir’s loyalty to Thranduil and in turn Thranduil’s trust in him is so clear now. I just really like the idea that there’s such a connection between them. It’s also a wonderful insight into Thranduil, who is my all-time favourite elf ;-)
“What did Gimli once tell me? That if I would think of him as a friend, as indeed I do, then I must act as a friend.” You’ve just got to love that dwarf! He speaks from the heart and isn’t afraid to be blunt about things! I had a quiet cheer when Aravir turned back. I was actually kind of surprised that Arod hadn’t just turned and followed Legolas himself!
Oh look, and there’s Aragorn! I loved the moment between them when they each had to admit that they couldn’t let Legolas do this alone. I felt so bad for Aragorn, having to return to Minas Tirith but I’m glad he knows that Aravir will be there for Legolas. It’ll be so hard for him if he has to send Faramir in his stead, though. But Arwen will probably send him straight back out again if she can, I imagine.
“I do not think he voiced it exactly that way, my lord,” he said stiffly.” LOL!
I really enjoyed Legolas’ journey and seeing the reaction of those who encounter him. It’s lovely too to see him and his mare getting to know each other. It’s such a relief to see him so at ease; I’m almost afraid of what may be in store for him!
Hmm. And Pelargir won’t do him at all (bravo to the mare for allowing him to lead her through busy streets), he has to go further. Hmm. I know you can’t see me but I’m glaring at you right now!
I like Caldor! It’s just amazing that no matter where they travel, the members of the Fellowship seem to meet people who feel indebted to them and are honoured to be in their presence. It’s such a great way of showing the far-reaching effects of what they did.
“Namarie, Caldor. Extend my greetings to your father when next you see him.” Is it just me or has Caldor been talking about his father in the past tense? I get the impression that Legolas hasn’t realised that some mortals he encountered may have passed away by now. Or maybe I read it wrong and you didn’t mean that…
Ah, if you could see the image in my head when you said “marsh mallow plants”. I’ll have to look them up because I presume they have nothing to do with what you put on your hot chocolate ;-) I don’t even know Erelas and Raenor yet and I was still cringing, afraid of what was coming – that’s how well you write tension, missus!
Ack! A mud slide!! Are they hanging off a cliff??? Oh well, at least Legolas is on the way. And Aravir isn’t far behind. Methinks he might have to make his presence known to Legolas sooner than he thought…
What a place to leave it…;-)
Great chapter, Linda. I know it must have been particularly difficult to finish and bring it all together, but I found that it all flowed beautifully and had me totally engrossed from start to finish. With a bit of luck I’ll get on to the next one after work tomorrow. I didn’t let myself read it when you posted it so that it wouldn’t spoil things for me! Take care :-)
Author's reply
Hello Dot! I just love your reviews - you make such an effort to comment on different things in the chapter. Insightful, too! You caught something I went back and changed asap! :-) (More on that later!)
Aravir is that rather lovable, stiff, bound-to-his-duty elf that would no more disobey a direct order than chop down a tree! He is totally committed to Legolas and is finding it incredibly hard to reconcile this rather novel idea (for him) of friendship with the Prince. He loves Thranduil and through the King, he loves his son. This friendship is on a more personal level, I guess. Poor guy, he's having a time with it, but finally realizes that in this case, the order is dangerous, not only for his Prince, but his friend, too. I think Arod had just about reached the end of his rope (so to speak LOL) when Aravir stopped and decided to turn back. He probably wouldn't have lasted more than another mile or so.
I really wanted to show Aravir's connection to Thranduil and why he was so bent on serving Legolas. I love Thranduil, too, and have always seen him as a strong, but loving ruler (and father). I don't think those poor babies brought before him after the slaughter of their families would have been turned out of the palace. I can see him and his Queen taking them in and raising them to their coming of age and seeing them happily settled. It was a terrible time for Aravir - one that changed the course of his life, and set him on a warrior's path. Thranduil became that father-figure for him and he always remembers that.
Aragorn, bless his intuitive heart, was waiting to see if Aravir gave in and came after Legolas. That's why he was still outside the gates long after they had parted. He really wanted to go with Aravir, Dot...had to restrain him forcefully and remind him he was KING and had been gone awhile...needed to check on the kingdom and his wife and son before haring off again!!! LOL
Isn't Gimli the best? I love his down-to-earth philosophy about elves and things...although Aravir doesn't appreciate his phrasing sometimes! ;-)
I enjoyed writing the trip, what with everyone waving at Legolas and the mare and the campouts along the river. He is at peace right now...he's getting to know the mare and she him and he's really into the new Song right now. The sea-longing is quiet and he's feeling pretty good about everything. Yeah, being worried for him is not a bad idea! That calm before the storm and all....
Hey! Glaring at me? What did I do? *looks around for other guilty parties*
Caldor - that just kind of happened. All through this story I've wanted Legolas to see that what he's done and what he is has had far-reaching effects on many people. Also, these people have been placed in his path for a reason...which he will eventually come to understand. I hope! Stubborn elf!
:-)
As for Caldor's father, I went back and looked at the chapter and you are right, Caldor said "was" in reference to his father. Then in the next paragraph they speak of his father still living, owning a ship and delivering goods to Pelargir. So I went right in and corrected that "was" to "is" and I hope it makes better sense now! Thank you for noticing, Dot! :-)
Marsh mallow plants! Sounds pretty good, doesn't it? I had a grin when I typed that part, too! There really are marsh mallows, and common mallow plants that are used for treatment of respiratory illnesses (pneumonia, etc.). The marsh variety is the best for that purpose, which was why Erelas was so bent on gathering them. Winter coming and all, they had some rather big orders to fill for other healers. Yes, they were hanging on a few feet down the cliff by the roots of a rather frail little tree! I hope Aravir was watching...
It seemed the best place to stop...it being a cliff-hanger and all....(please ignore that terrible pun...couldn't resist it, mate! :-/)
I had this chapter 3/4 done before things really fell apart, but it was very hard to get back to it. Once I did, it was a great distraction, and in an odd way a comfort, too. I'm glad it wasn't too disjointed...I appreciate your kind words and encouragement so much, Dot! Thanks!
linda
SouthWind
· 7 April 2005
· Chapter 13: Finding Common Ground
This is just wonderful! I love your 'detours' - they are part of what make your story so special. I love how Aravir follows Legolas, due to his love/concern for him. And the whole accident/rescue of Erelas and Raenor is so nice - I suppose because, again, you have been able to showcase how love and care for others influences actions/emotions and words. It is just very - heartwarming - for want of a better word. And Arod is still there, supporting/loving and caring for his friend. Sigh -- again, although I want the whole story now, I also never want it to end! A BIG thank you for taking the time to share this story with us.
SouthWind PS - Even though I don't have time to post a review after each chapter I will NEVER let one slip past me - I am printing this whole story so I can read it again whenever I get the urge. Thanks again!
Author's reply
Hello, Southwind! I am so glad to hear that my 'detours' are not too distracting! It seems like lately they've taken on lives of their own! (Of course, when I try to edit, the elf whispers in my ear that HE knows I really want to print them...so...I do! LOL)Thank you for saying so as it looks like they plan to continue for at least one more chapter! LOL
I am so glad that the concern Aravir has for Legolas has come through - he's had a time of reconciling his 'duty' with the friendship he was developing for his Prince. I feel like he'll do an even better job now protecting Legolas, now that he's come to accept that they are friends (and of course, that is exactly what he promised his King - to take care of his son). Don't you love Arod? He's such a practical horse in such a loving way!
As for this story never ending...be careful what you wish for, Southwind. When I started this, it originally only had seven chapters! :-) Lots and lots of detours...yesssss, preciousssss...we lovesss the rabbitessss trailssss... ;-) And you are so very welcome! It is encouraging to hear you're enjoying things. Thank you again for taking the time to review!
linda
P.S. Are you really printing it? *sigh* That makes my day...really it does! :-)
Dot
· 4 April 2005
· Chapter 11: The Long Road Home
sigh Linda, I’m so sorry that it’s taking me so long to review this wonderful story. Between RL stuff, lack of time, losing our pope… And I thought I was nearly finished and then you went and updated again!! I hope all is well with you. Please don’t worry about trying to respond to every review. I love hearing from you but I know it takes time and I certainly don’t want you to feel like you have to get it all done.
I’m glad you didn’t go deleting things to shorten this! What a really enjoyable chapter. You made me smile to see the high spirits of the group as they indulged in a horse race. Of course Legolas and the mare won!! It was so touching that Arod would try to reassure him so as not to dampen the joy his elf just felt. I’m still chuckling at the image of Legolas making them all wait on him :-)
LOL at the two elves getting completely carried away at the thought of the trees. They’re lucky the men are so indulgent!
I just loved their little sojourn at Oak Grove. I felt a little like I was in an Enid Blyton book there for a while, with this strange wood and interesting inhabitants ;-) Anna is just adorable. I really liked the suggestion that she had heard stories of the elves, knowing immediately what Legolas meant when he informed her of what he was. Legolas is pretty!! Just don’t tell him I said that!
I thought Brandel was such a great character too. He’s a wonderful mixture of a good father and husband, a simple man who was deeply affected by what he saw in Minas Tirith, and a genuinely honest person. He’s also perceptive enough to know how Aragorn wishes to be treated. I thought it was a lovely moment when he expresses his gratitude for all that Aragorn and the Fellowship did for people like him.
It was such fun to see Aragorn and Legolas tormenting each other. The image of Anna sleeping in Legolas’ arms was just so cute, and a beautiful moment of joy for him, and I had to laugh at her ensuring that two of her new friends behaved themselves and could get along!
You know, one of my favourite parts of this chapter was Aravir calling Legolas “elfling.” I grow fonder of Aravir with each chapter and it’s so great to see him really loosening up and feeling at ease with his friendship with his prince.
Ah. So Legolas finally told Aragorn about his experience. My heart went out to him because it seemed like a difficult thing for him to do. Aragorn’s compassion speaks volumes of how much he loves and understands Legolas. His happiness that Legolas has rediscovered some joy was so moving, as was the beautiful, rather poignant image of them sitting together under the stars, Legolas singing softly and Aragorn listening intently.
Legolas is going WHERE?? To do WHAT?? Ack. I don’t blame those who love him for fearing for him so much. But I’ll trust you… for now… :-)
Author's reply
Hello Dot! Do not apologize for taking a while to review - I totally understand. And I love responding to each review...it just kind of irks me when I can't do it in a timely manner. :-)
I'm glad you think it was ok to leave the chapter as is. I was finished - I thought - and sat down to proof it once more...found a couple of places that needed a little more explanation, and lo and behold, Oak Grove, Anna and her parents were waiting to find their place. Things just kept jumping in, and I kept thinking "this is so long", but in the end, I couldn't cut anything and be happy with it. So I'm glad to hear it turned out all right.
The race was fun to write...of course the mare would win over those big, overgrown war horses who think they are "all that"! *vbg* Legolas says to tell you he had a wonderful time bossing everyone around, especially Aragorn!
;-) Of course, the elves would be pining for trees after crossing the plains of Rohan. I think they were more than ready to leave the slow men behind!
Anna turned out to be one of my favorite parts of this...I can just see her inching up until she's leaning on Legolas' arm and telling him he's pretty! (Shhhh...I think so, too, Dot!) I wanted Aragorn to have some time with some of his loyal subjects without the trappings of court. I would think he wouldn't be able to do that often, and he was surprised when Brandel recognized him. Brandel, I think, recognized the King was traveling incognito, but he still wanted to do something to show his gratitude. I figured if I was 17 or so and saw the coronation and marriage of a King, I would definitely keep it as as one of my most vivid, fond memories, much as Brandel has. I liked giving Aragorn some time with his appreciative people!
As for Legolas and Aragorn tormenting each other, well, what are friends for? And Anna is a bossy little girl...her nana says no fighting, and that goes for these two new friends, too. So she sets them straight! LOL I had more fun with the water poured on Aragorn'a head...so did the elf!
I'm so glad you're liking Aravir! I like him, too. He's really developed beyond what I had planned, but Legolas needs a good friend beside him in Ithilien when Aragorn isn't there. Aravir is MUCH older than Legolas, so I thought the "elfling" was appropriate, especially since the elfling had just dumped a waterskin full over the head of the King of Gondor! :-)
Yes, Legolas had to tell Aragorn about his experience with Nienna and hope his friend would understand. He knows what he wants to do once they reach Minas Tirith, and going home to Ithilien is not in his immediate plans. So it's imperative that Aragorn be told. For all the good it did him!
To the sea. I know, I know...not the smartest thing the elf could do! Bear with him...there are some things he feels need resolving! Thank you for taking the time to write such a long, lovely review, Dot! I love reading them!
linda
Bodkin
· 2 April 2005
· Chapter 13: Finding Common Ground
I'm only glad Aravir arrived in the nick of time. It was very brave of Raen to sacrifice himself to give his father a chance - but not the world's most sensible action. If Legolas hadn't already grabbed him, chances are he would have thrown himself into the water in an attempt to save his son and they would both have drowned. Instead of which they are recovering in the care of a pair of relieved elves.
And at least the crisis made Legolas more receptive to the arrival of Arod and Aravir than he might otherwise have been. And he is doing his best to insist that they are there through friendship rather than duty.
I like the lad - he has a good sense of humour, even when his head is hurting more than a little. Poor Calen, though. It's not easy sitting at home and waiting - I hope Legolas and Aravir bring him word soon that his father and brother are safe.
Author's reply
Hello, Bodkin! Aravir did arrive in the nick of time. Luckily he was following close enough behind Legolas to help with the rescue. Raenor beat his father to the punch by letting go - not the most sensible action, true. He's lucky Aravir saw him drop into the river.
Legolas was so relieved to have some help with things he couldn't really be angry...and Arod pointed out that he and Aravir had disobeyed out of love and concern for their friend. How do you stay angry at that?
Raen is a good boy - if still a little green! :-) And Calen is nervously awaiting his father's and brother's return. He is feeling very uneasy and is not certain why. Thank you for the review, Bodkin!
linda
Maid of Ithilien
· 1 April 2005
· Chapter 13: Finding Common Ground
Another wonderful chapter. I think you do such a good job with your original characters as well as the ones we know and love. They just come to life on the page (or screen). The addition at the end of the brother waiting anxiously at home was just right. Looking forward to the next update!
Author's reply
Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad the original characters are halfway enjoyable! They do seem to be popping up everywhere! LOL Calen is definitely anxious, and with good reason. I'll try to alleviate his nervousness by mid-week...I hope! Thanks again for taking the time to review.
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 31 March 2005
· Chapter 13: Finding Common Ground
For an awful moment I was certain the boy was going to drown! Thank goodness Aravir followed after all. Rescued by elves, a happy thought indeed.
I loved the acutely intense moment of confrontation between Prince and and his protector, the willingness of both to amend their relationship to one of friends, not mere ruler and ruled.
Strange though that the boy did not see in his rescuer the same elvish beauty he saw in Legolas, though the gold certainly would tend to catch the eye quicker. Mine at least.
Now all we need is for Aragorn-Strider to show up to make this adventure nor flavorful. Legolas may not be quite so pleased to find that both have disregarded his request.
Oh no, the next chapter is not yet posted! I shall await its appearance eagerly.
Author's reply
Of course, I could not let Raenor drown. Can you imagine the guilt of two elves if that had happened? It doesn't bear thinking about! LOL So rescue instead, a much happier circumstance, yes indeed.
Aravir is having to rething his position in Legolas' life and vice-versa. It's hard when you've spent centuries acting one way and never allowed the thought of friendship to enter into things. So he's having to adjust big time! :-)
I thing Raenor recognized the elven beauty of Aravir, but you're right - the gold stood out in his mind!
Aragorn, huh? We'll see! He did promise either he or Faramir would come.
Next chapter up hopefully by mid-week! (hopehopehope...) Thank you for all the wonderful reviews, eruanneth!
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 31 March 2005
· Chapter 12: In Search of the Sea
That dwarf having such a profound influence on an elf is encouraging. For all the long ages when they were unfriends at best, for an elf to be willing to learn from these children of Aulë is a nice touch.
Legolas heading to the sea! We can only hope he has the strength to return. So wonderful that his friends are following regardless of his words to the contrary. Though I feel Aravir may be chastised for his insubordination.
Learning a little of Aravir’s history helps us gain understanding of why he acts and feels as he does, not only as an elf, but as a member of the family.
What a delight to imagine the glorious vision of the golden elf on the swiftly running golden mare as seen from the wain of a slow moving caravan. Talk about stealing your breath! Logically the amiable Prince would win friends and a loyal following where ever he traveled.
Now on to find out if he has arrived in time to affect a rescue.
Author's reply
Gimli has played a large part in pointing out some home truths to Aravir, and the elf is finally starting to understand what he's been saying and finally, act on it! This of course leads Aravir and Arod to turn around and follow along behind Legolas without his knowledge. It's for his own good, you know! :-)
I wanted everyone to understand Aravir's utter loyalty to Thranduil...his history with the King goes back before Legolas was born. In many ways he looks upon the King as a father-figure, though, he would never presume to tell anyone that! He promised the King to keep Legolas safe...this business with the sea-longing has been out of his control for so long...but here he has something he CAN do, even if it means defying his Prince and sneaking along behind to keep an eye on things.
I like writing Legolas and the mare racing across wherever they happen to be! They are both speed freaks, you know!? LOL Any excuse for a good, fast gallop! Thank you for the encouraging review, eruanneth! :-)
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 31 March 2005
· Chapter 11: The Long Road Home
Chapter 11
Once again you paint such complete mind pictures of the mad race across the plains, the mysterious wood, and my favorite part, little Anna and her fascination with the elf. How I envied her the innocent encounter with the beautiful Legolas. (huge sigh)
Small wonder that Aragon is upset with his friend, but sometimes we must just let go those we love to follow their own paths, however much we wish to restrain them.
I am truly enjoying this story and hope there are many more chapters.
Author's reply
I must confess, Anna is my favorite here too. She's so sweet, inching up until she's leaning on Legolas' arm...staring at that ear and wondering what in the world? When he says "elf", she knows! She's heard the stories her mother and father have told her about the elves! And he is pretty...of course, that opens a whole can of worms with Aragorn, the tease! LOL
Yes, Aragorn is thoroughly upset with the idea of Legolas going off to the sea alone. Letting him go was very hard for him to do.
Thank you,eruanneth - more chapters!? This was originally only supposed to have seven - a tale that has grown in the telling! *grin*
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 31 March 2005
· Chapter 10: What the Heart Perceives
Chapter 10
Okay, yes I cried at the departure from the settlement and the sorrow of Eolyn and Laelith. The Eldar have that effect on some of us mortals. That Legolas felt bereavement as well was equally moving .
Everyone is picking on the elf! No wonder he likes to go off alone.
Every time the song comes in, I am astonished at your depth of insight in describing the indescribable.
Namarië almost seems like a foul word when used to mean ‘we may never meet again’, and in the case of elves with mortals it may well be fact. It is good to know that Elfwine will see Legolas again; he has a true friend-hearted feeling for the tall elf.
Author's reply
This whole chapter seemed to be a series of goodbyes for Legolas and he was getting heartily sick of the word, as well as finding it terribly sad. He said to Aragorn that nothing was certain where mortals were concerned (Aragorn had said he'd see Eolyn and daughter again), and that is very true. By the time he would see them again so much might change for them, while he would stay relatively the same. I'm glad the song is still coming through - and you're right, I feel totally incapable of describing the indescribable (but I'll keep trying.)
Elfwine is determined to see Legolas and sleep in that flet! He'll make sure that it happens! LOL Thank you for another great review!
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 31 March 2005
· Chapter 9: Comes a New Day
Chapter 9
Hobbit-sized appetite, what a thing to say to a fastidious elf! Trust a dwarf to start things boiling.
Tender mothering by human females and the gruff, practical Eolyn assisting with the bath were priceless. Aragorn’s amazement at the encounter with Nienna is certainly justified.
Ah, the golden mare and the golden elf together. I also had tears of joy at that pairing, though she may be long in coming to the bold trust of Arod.
It is good to know that Legolas will not be further tormented by the sea-song. Again the song of Creation and Arda Marred was woven into the theme artfully. Always elves loved song and to find that he could blend those songs with his own brought a yearning to do the same.
Thank you for this touching tale.
Author's reply
I appreciate the review, Eruanneth, and apologize for not replying sooner.
I thought a ravenous elf licking a spoon and thinking about scraping the bowl with his finger would be a rather amusing sight! LOL Of course, Gimli commenting on it was the match to the fuse! An explosive situation, indeed!
Eolyn helping Legolas clean up just about embarrassed him to death! But he was a lot more weak and shaky than even he realized! Aragorn will hear the full story of Nienna eventually...but yes, he is totally flabbergasted by it all!
The mare is still skittish and will be for awhile. Trust takes time, but she loves Legolas and has decided he is worthy of her trust. I'm glad things finally worked out where he could see that she had stayed.
The song Legolas is hearing now is much more complete than what he heard before. Blending his own part with both brings him a measure of peace, tho' the sea will still call him until he sails.
Thank you again for this wonderful review!
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 31 March 2005
· Chapter 8: Safe Havens
Chapter 8
Glad tidings! Legolas awakens at last. I truly enjoyed the visit to the stable to check on Arod and the surprise of the mare with him. Being outdoors and finding Arod first at his return was so fitting. Did the mare stay or has she departed I wonder?
Elfwine is a delight, so typical of the honestly of a child. That he sincerely loves Legolas speaks to me that elves also have also a way with the young whom they love dearly regardless of race.
Gimli, grumpy, growling or gleeful is a real treat.
Author's reply
Yes, and just in time, too! I think Aragorn and Co. were well on the way to having nervous twitches, thanks to their friend. I thought outside (the air, the sense of freedom, the odor of the wide open spaces, the song of the world) might get Legolas' attention, hence the outing! And of course, Arod should absolutely be there!:-) As for the mare, she's quite taken with the elf...tho' very skittish and afraid. Elfwine has been fun to write - an loving, impulsive child. And writing Legolas interacting with children has been even more fun! All I can say about our grumpy dwarf.............you go, Gimli!!
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 31 March 2005
· Chapter 7: Out of Time and Mind
Chapter 7
Bad enough to be taken by orcs, now he must, with the help of dear friends, fight not only the effects of the poison, but the sea-longing. Ah, a great tree for comfort and now Nienna. Facing the sea alone is perhaps his most severe test yet.
Tears shared are often the best expression of love and caring. How wonderful that the Vala, Nienna, would aid a ‘lone Sinda’ in his struggles. They always seemed so distant and aloof of the troubles of Middle Earth, though they did in fact care greatly.
Another splendid chapter.
Author's reply
I suppose having one of the Valar intervene was stretching things a little, but Legolas' reasons for staying were selfless and noble (IMHO) and sometimes when we least expect it, mercy will come in unexpected forms. Yes, Nienna weeping WITH Legolas helped more than millions of words would have. I am glad you liked this chapter, Eruanneth.
linda
Manderly
· 30 March 2005
· Chapter 13: Finding Common Ground
Ah, elves to the rescue. Raen and Erelas cannot be in better hands.
I'm glad Legolas and Aravir have come to an understanding - far better to be friends than a lord and his servant. I suppose it will probably take some getting used to for Aravir, but I'm glad that Legolas will not be alone when he confronts his sea-longing demons. I really like the way you portrayed their friendship - so subtle but leaving no doubts as to its strength.
Looking forward to more!
Author's reply
Yep, it makes me want to go hang on a cliff or some such nonsense! Hi, Manderly! Thank you for reviewing...can you tell it's really early in the morning? LOL
I'm really pleased that Aravir is finally coming to his senses and acknowledging his friendship for Legolas. Of all the elves needing to be treated like royalty, Legolas is NOT one! Aravir is kind of whining right now - he's not used to being so casual with the son of his King, but he'll get the hang of it soon. I'm glad the new friendship is coming across! Thanks again for taking the time to review! :-)
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 30 March 2005
· Chapter 6: Lingering Shadow
Ah, Legolas freeing the horse he desires to meet her needs before his. One spirit freed, the other bound by his sworn word.
Orcs in the woods! Outnumbered, but valiant against his foes of old, that he passed unscathed through greater perils to be brought down by a much-reduced band of enemies in the wake of his tenuous hold on reality seems dreadfully unjust, but such is the way of violent times.
On to the next chapter. This is a tense time.
Author's reply
"One spirit freed, the other bound by his sworn word." You are quite poetic, did you know that? He had promised not to hold her against her will and it just about did him in to let her walk out of that corral. She was so tied up with important memories of the past in his mind, and he really wanted this second chance with a golden horse.
Orcs...yeah, they've been lurking about! I liked how you noted he had made it through greater dangers and battles only to be brought down by a remnant of an old enemy. Unjust...you said it!
If you're feeling a little tense, then maybe this chapter came across better than I hoped! Thank you for reviewing! :-)
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 30 March 2005
· Chapter 5: Mithril and Gold
What fun to see Legolas and Arod playing together. 'You roll nicely' had me laughing again. You are adept at that talent. "Ropes, trees and songs". Again a treat to imagine the horror of such treatment, in particular the singing of Aragorn.
Gimili lecturing an elf! Never heedful of his tongue and often a much needed voice to clear the air.
Now will you reveal the 'nature' of those rowdy elven songs? My curiousity is peaked.
I love your color descriptions and would also have falling for the golden mare or dare I say it, a golden elf. (sigh)
Author's reply
This was a fun chapter to write after all the serious stuff of the previous one! Can't you just see Arod nosing Legolas all over that field! Of course, Legolas was not amused, but I thought it was very funny! LOL And the way to "persuade" a stubborn elf would, of necessity, involve ropes and torturous singing by humans! ;-)
Gimli has now planted some seeds in Aravir's mind about the nature of friendship which will take some time, but eventually bear fruit. Aravir is so duty-oriented he has trouble seeing the obvious, poor elf! :-)
Ah yes, rowdy Mirkwood songs...weeellllll, I will consider it! :-0
As for my color descriptions, all things considered, I would certainly fall for a golden elf! You and I are most definitely in agreement here, Eruanneth! :-)*sigh* *sigh* *sigh* Thank you for reviewing!!!!!
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 30 March 2005
· Chapter 4: What Price Friendship?
Never did I think of the sea-longing in quite these terms. Beautifully described!
Arod as defender of his chosen master is something that we do sometimes see in animals, though occasionally to their detriment if they keep all aid from reaching him. It was a nice touch that Aragorn rather than Aravir was the first permitted to his side.
Again your reference to the difference between the very process of thinking that separates the two peoples reminds us of the wide gulf between humans and elves and even dwarves.
Thank you most sincerely for bringing the Ainulindalie and the recounting of the Valar into this tale. Tears filled my eyes in rememberance of my first reading of the Silmarillion and the impact of 'in the beginning'.
Legolas describing the sea-longing is exquisite and makes one wish for a glimpse of that enchanted vision.
Author's reply
The sea-longing...I find the whole concept just fascinating and so terribly sad in Legolas' case. It would ultimately take the JOY out of him, as Galadriel warned, and those things which made his life on Middle-earth complete would be dead to him, drowned out by the call of his true home. I figured it would become an extremely painful, wrenching experience which at times would just take over (kind of like the flashbacks of post-traumatic stress syndrome, I guess).
Arod is very protective of his elf, especially when a crowd of rambunctious humans (plus one dwarf) comes stomping around! Arod knows Aravir - he is the captain of the guard at Ithilien and has been since the beginning...but he also knows that Aragorn is the one Legolas was wishing was there to help him...so Aragorn gets to pass first!
Yes, the gulf between different peoples is wide - and Legolas is not so sure he has the words to bridge that gap...but he tries.
I am so very glad that you liked the references to the Ainulindalie and the Valar. I just loved the idea that music played such a big part in creation - that Ulmo, the lord of waters received his instruction in music from Eru Himself and for that reason Ulmo's thought, which became water, would hold special significance for the Firstborn (and Secondborn, too). Thank you for mentioning it - I love the SILMARILLION, too!
Thank you again for such a thoughtful, kind review, Eruanneth_Luin.
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 30 March 2005
· Chapter 3: In Dealing With Stubborn Elves
Arwen explaining to Aragorn about the reasons for Legolas to feel so strong a sea-calling was excellent. It would help those who have not read The Silmarillion to grasp the significance of the longing in the hearts of the elves.
Such a 'Legolas' thing to do; just what we mortals would think about the peculiarities of elves. Arwen telling Aragorn he thinks like a mortal, his imaptience at the lenght of the jouney, being denied entrance to Edoras yet again, then the entrance of the pugnacious Gimli; much needed light-hearted moments in the midst of concern for a friend.
Author's reply
When I started the story about Arod and Legolas, I realized this would be taking place in the time when the sea-longing would be a factor in Legolas' life. So....I reread the SILMARILLION (especially the beginning, about the Ainulindalie) and made some interesting connections between the Teleri (from which the Sindar came) and water and music and water and the Valar and Eru...it was absolutely fascinating. I tried hard to have Arwen explain clearly...I hoped my assumptions were at least intelligent, I wasn't sure I worded everything right. Still, if you can call it "excellent" I am so pleased!!!!
Aragorn, I think, forgets sometimes that his good friend is an elf, with all the thought processes and pecularities that that encompasses. Arwen is just the one to set him straight, too! :-) And impatient is an excellent word to describe the King...he wants to get there (Edoras) right away and to have everything ok again with his friend.
Yay, Gimli! I love him...he's so straightforward and blunt. You ALWAYS know where you stand with him! And the others need "light-hearted" at this time. Thank you for such a nice review...I'm having fun watching your comments pop up on my email...I'm at school and my kids are testing, so I walk by from time to time to see what's new that I can look at more closely when we break for PE.
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 30 March 2005
· Chapter 2: That Which Is Held Dear
So true about the ageless understanding the aging process. To me one of the great griefs of the Eldar is that all around them grows old and dies, and they live on with naught but memories. Acceptance of the inevitable loss is a harsh reality and not easily admitted.
The errant elf! You defined him so well.
His loyalty to mortals, be they people, horses or trees is so much a part of Legolas. An open heart and generous spirit combined with the willingness to give himself for others; a noble elf is every sense of he word.
Thank you.
Author's reply
Yes, and Legolas is having a particularly difficult time here. When he and Ranalf are discussing Arod's age, he comments that it is "not so old" and Ranalf has to correct him "It is, for him..." So sad...the blink of an eye for Legolas is a lifetime for his mortal friends. A "harsh reality" indeed!
I think Eomer is at a loss here as to how and help Legolas, so he tries a little humor. But Legolas is so miserable at the thought of losing Arod he cannot appreciate his friend's effort...and the sea's call is slowly eating away at him. Double trouble!
I'm glad you see Legolas the same way I do. We're not told too much about him in the books, but I like to think that by the hints and clues we are given, he is an open-hearted, generous, self-less and noble elf! Thank you for taking the time to write such a thoughtful review.
linda
Eruanneth_Luin
· 30 March 2005
· Chapter 1: Arod, Mellon Nin
How lovely to see the special relationship betweeen elf and horse. When we have inadvertantly allowed harm to come to one we love how bitter the pain.
Eomer claiming the entire realm in an uproar over the wayward elf was wonderful, too. Such a human response to concern over a missing friend.
Thank you for a nicely detailed story.
Author's reply
Thank YOU for such a kind review! I love the thought that not only could the elves talk to their trees, but also their horses. In TTT, Tolkien tells about Legolas being given a restive, fiery horse that accepted him immediately! I liked that! So through the years Arod and Legolas have become the best of friends and you are so right (and observant) about the bitterness and guilt Legolas feels concerning Arod's injury.
I figure the King of the Mark and the elf would probably have lots of chances to visit each other and become friends over the years (through the connection with Eowyn and Ithilien). Legolas was very late...he missed the party!:-) and everyone was ready to find out why - especially since Legolas was investigating the rumors of orcs in the mountains on the way to Edoras. Thank you again for taking the time to review. I hope you keep enjoying the story!
linda
The Karenator
· 30 March 2005
· Chapter 13: Finding Common Ground
Iwarren,
I didn't realize you had a story in progress until I saw your name pop up on the opening page. When I started to read it, I also realized that your story is one that a friend mentioned recently as being a good story and one that explores Legolas choosing a new horse. It's absolutely delightful. I started reading last night and finally had to stop to go to bed, but I kept thinking just one more chapter until I couldn't keep my eyes open. I finished the remaining three this morning.
You have captured the relationship between elf and horse so well. I love how the elves communicate with the horses. Legolas's relationship with Arod is as strong as any loyal friendship of two-legged creatures. And the introduction of the mare was wonderful. As difficult as it was, Legolas was willing to allow her to go. Seeing her return to save his life when he was attacked and taken by the orcs was thrilling. She still seems a little cautious, but her devotion to Legolas is emerging as is his to her. I sympathize with him when he almost feels like his closeness to her is an act of betrayal to Arod. Fortunately, as hard as it is for Arod to see 'his elf' with another horse, he's a realist! He can no longer carry Legolas as he once did and loves Legolas so much that he only wants for best for him.
The 'dream' of the Blessed Realm was lovely. Legolas was able to glimpse the bigger picture and find his place in Arda's song. He's still working on placing everything in order, but he's getting there. I was glad to see that Aravir 'disobeyed'. He's also a loyal friend...and one who would NOT want to tell Thranduil that he had failed in his duty. Can't blame him for that!
I've love the whole story, especially seeing Aragorn and Gimil drop in to see the stubborn elf taken care of. The bout of the poison from the orc blade was very well done. Legolas seemed to be fading further and further from his friends, and I could feel the distress as they scrambled to save his life and then as they watched, looking for signs that Legolas would recover. I like the farm folk and town folk you've sprinkled throughout the story. Good people.
The river incident was exciting! Hard for Legolas to be angry when Aravir's presence turned out so well. And I love how their relationship is also going through changes. Kind of rattles Aravir's cage, but I think his love and respect for his lord has only grown.
I'm so pleased that I found this story. What a wonderful read. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. I couldn't believe it when I ran out of chapters!
Thank you for continuing this story. My thoughts are with you.
Karen
Author's reply
Hello, Karen! I was so excited to see this review - and it covers everything! I'm glad you found the story "delightful"...music to my ears! :-) And it kept you up, too - ah, well, Daeron and friends have been having the same effect on me lately!!! LOL
I'm glad you like the horsey aspect of this story...I just love Arod! He's such a loyal, practical horse! And he loves his elf! He wants to know that Legolas has a suitably loving replacement now that he can't carry him any more. The mare has a lot to learn, but she showed her character early on when she pulled her "Lassie-to-the-rescue" stunt!
Gimli and Aragorn were really put out with Legolas for not letting them know he was having trouble (Aravir's letter spilled the beans, as it were!). They would move mountains to get to him, I think, if they thought he was in danger ( which he was, sort of!) The "dream" of the Blessed Realm was hard to put into words, but if you think it was ok, then I guess it made sense after all! And I wanted music to play a big part, not only in the sea longing itself, but as a big part of the means to helping Legolas cope as the years go on. Aravir is learning about being friends with a member of the royal family - old habits are hard to break, but he's trying. He and Arod were not about to let Legolas go gallivanting off to the sea without someone along to catch him if another attack struck!
The poisoned wound was another place I kind of felt my way through. I'm glad it seemed to work. His friends were frantic, especially when Aragorn figured he would awaken, and he did not. I'm also glad the extra characters are working out...they have just kind of appeared (and taken on lives of their own) and insisted on a part in the story!!!
The river incident needed more of something...but I got frustrated after changing it several thousand times, so I just said "to heck with it" and posted anyway!! Legolas is ecstatic that Arod and Aravir decided to ignore his orders - he said he only had one pair of hands and couldn't do everything! Poor elf! And his and Aravir's friendship is shaping up - finally!!!! Stubborn elves! *sigh* Thank you, Karen, for taking the time to write such a wonderful review. (Oh,tell Daeron I need some humor lessons...I'll be watching for them! :-))
linda
daw the minstrel
· 29 March 2005
· Chapter 13: Finding Common Ground
I was really struck by Arod's plea that Legolas not be angry over what love led them to do. I liked that. It put things in proportion.
Author's reply
Arod looks at things very simply...Aravir and he came south (against orders) because they love and care about Legolas. End of discussion. How can you argue with that reasoning? Legolas could not, and he's grateful actually for the help! Thanks for the review, daw!
linda
Dot
· 28 March 2005
· Chapter 10: What the Heart Perceives
This was a rather sad chapter :-( Wonderfully written as always, though.
I love the thought that so many gathered to bid farewell to the group. They obviously took an injured elf into their hearts as well as homes. I really felt for him when he had say good-bye to Eolyn and Laelith. And for them too. No matter what she says, Eolyn probably doesn’t really believe that she’ll see this elven prince again. I love the fact that even here she was the one trying to provide the comfort.
I actually felt so afraid for a moment when Aragorn sees the despair set in again in Legolas’ eyes. But he certainly knew how to draw him out of his misery!! It seems childish taunts of “I know something you don’t know” still work!! It is a good idea to have Eolyn and her daughter come and work for Eomer and Lothiriel. They might not want to, of course, but it sounds perfect for them and I’d be interested to know if they ever do.
I really loved the moment between Legolas and Arod where the horse reassures Legolas of their lasting bond. I’m glad that Arod obviously only wants the best for his elf, and feels happy at the developing relationship between him and the mare rather than feeling left out.
Legolas’ humility in learning of the Great Song is wonderful to see too. I love that he’s so open to learning and acknowledges that he has a long way to go before he achieves wisdom.
I don’t know if I said it before, but I really like your Lothiriel. She really seems to care for Legolas and I love how perceptive she is of his emotions and how her own elvish blood means that she senses that more has taken place than what she’s been told.
The part about Legolas training the mare ( I wish she had a name, btw!) was fascinating. I know absolutely nothing about horses so it was really interesting. They seem to be making great progress. I was really moved by the almost throwaway remark that he wouldn’t teach her to fight in battle. It seems so wrong for such a creature to have to do anything like that, doesn’t it?
Poor Elfwine! I felt so sorry for him when I saw his disappointment that Legolas would be leaving.
My favourite part of this chapter has to be the farewell between Legolas and Gimli. I love that they are able to keep up their usual banter but can still be honest with each other. Gimli’s concern for his friend and perception of his mood was really touching.
At least Legolas and Elfwine are friends again and Elfwine has been cheered up with by the prospect of visiting all his friends.
I’m sad to be leaving Rohan behind, but I can’t wait to see where you lead us next! :-)
Author's reply
Dot! I'm sorry I'm taking so long to reply to your great reviews. Please bear with me and know I appreciate them so much...and did you notice I'm working backwards? *sigh*
This chapter was a long series of goodbyes for Legolas and he did not like it one bit...starting with Eolyn and Lalith. It upset him more than he ever imagined possible, and Aragorn was afraid he might slip back into the despair of previous days. Yes, teasing taunts of "I know something you don't" still work...boys will be boys, and Kings and Princes are no different, I guess. Besides, Aragorn knows exactly how to tick Legolas off completely! :-)
Arod is so understanding...he seems to realize more than Legolas somehow of how different things will be when they get home. He wants to be sure that the bond between Legolas and the mare will develop, which means he'll need to reassure the elf that everything's ok, you're not hurting my feelings, this is the way things have to be...
Legolas is learning a great deal about the Song...he didn't realize before how much he had missed. Now that he's really listening, he's hearing all manner of new music!
Lothiriel is an understanding person, I think. It seems to me, with her background, that she would be sensitive to things others might miss. I'm glad you like the way I see her.
Dot! The mare WILL get a name (actually, she was supposed to several chapters ago but it looks like it's going to take a little longer. Patience, precioussss...the lovely mare will get a name when her pretty elf finds one he likessssss! :-)
So you noticed that Legolas will not teach the mare combat tactics...you're very perceptive. He doesn't want to have to be the one teach her about war. I can't say that I blame him.
Elfwine was really disappointed that Legolas was leaving and our elf had no clue how to deal with him! Poor elf! Disappointed 9-year-olds are no fun! But he finds a way to get back in Elfwine's good graces...and Lothiriel lends an motherly helping hand, so all's well that ends well! :-)
Gimli and Legolas - you can gauge their caring for each other by the level of insults they throw back and forth! I love them both and the way they worry about the other...heaven forbid they should actually come right out and say it!
Elfwine will see Legolas again and sleep in that flet...Eomer had better watch out or he'll be up a tree, too! Now we start for home! Maybe! Thank you for such entertaining, thoughtful reviews, Dot!
linda