Stars and Sniffles by SlightlyTookish
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Lily
· 7 July 2006
· Chapter 4: A Wizard Would Know
“What would we do without him, Pippin?”
Pippin thought for a moment before shrugging. “Starve, I suppose.”
Oh my, that is SO Pippin.
I enjoyed this story a lot. Dear Frodo being so unaccustomed to caring for children and yet trying his best. And the stars, of course they were too much for him. I'm glad he came to believe in them in your late story.
Too bad Gandalf left so soon. That's the problem with him. He always does that. Little Frodo already had to make this experience as well in my German story.
Well done, dear!
Author's reply
Heehee. I'm glad you thought that was so Pippin...I thought he would say something like that!
Thanks again for reading this, my dear. I loved showing Frodo as the caregiver for a change, and showing how well he took care of Pippin. Of course he wasn't used to it but he really did his best. And I'm also glad he came to believe in the stars. I'm sure that after hearing how many other people saw them, he had no choice really :)
When I wrote this I was thinking about that time when Gandalf visited Frodo every now and again but hardly ever stayed for long (I guess he didn't need the giant bathtub, huh? ;) ). He stays just long enough to help but once he sees that Pippin is better he knows that Frodo should be the one to bring Pippin back to full health :)
Thank you SO much! :D
Lily
· 7 July 2006
· Chapter 3: Seeing Stars
“It’s still here, Gandalf, but it is always very difficult to get anything out of you. I was trying to decide what to ask first.”
Awww... dear Pippin.
I love your Gandalf and Pippin together. Gandalf reminds me so much of a grandfather looking after his grandson - much as he does in some of the Minas Tirith scenes. And yet he remains Gandalf... he will keep his secrets, even from a curious Took.
Author's reply
Thanks so much! I also envision their relationship as that of a grandfather and grandson, and I love it that way - and, as you say, Gandalf is still Gandalf, and keeps his secrets. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this. Thanks :D
Lily
· 7 July 2006
· Chapter 2: Keeping Watch
I couldn't resist, though I should long be sleeping.
I prefer my Tooks chatty, cheerful, and curious.
I love it!!! :D
Author's reply
Heehee! Sorry it kept you up! :)
I'm glad you liked that line! That's how I imagine the Tooks. :)
Periantari
· 17 April 2006
· Chapter 4: A Wizard Would Know
aww how cute--i especially love Sam's last line. :)
Author's reply
I thought it was the best way to end it. I'm glad you enjoyed it too! :D
Periantari
· 17 April 2006
· Chapter 3: Seeing Stars
See, i had to read *at least* this part to see where the stars came from (see how the other fic lead me here? ;) ...I love worried!Frodo in the previous chapter and i like how Pippin first talked about stars and liking them and Gandalf bringing them down fro him for just a little while. :)
So cool.
Author's reply
Heehee, I'm glad the other fic led you here! Thanks for reading this one too...it was my first "long" story and the first time I wrote Gandalf. And I'm glad you like the stars as well...they're fun to write :D
Thanks!
Pearl Took
· 27 March 2005
· Chapter 4: A Wizard Would Know
WONDERFUL!!!!!! I just loved this. Gandalf not really liking a "quiet Took", and giving Pippin this wonderous experience. Congratulations for this being a Marigold's Best Bet!!!! WONDERFUL!!!!
Author's reply
Thank you so much, Pearl, for your lovely review and congratulations! This story holds a very special place in my heart and I was so honored when Marigold chose it. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it - thanks again! :)
Mariposa
· 2 October 2004
· Chapter 4: A Wizard Would Know
This was completely charming. I enjoyed every word. :-)
Author's reply
Thank you so much - I'm glad you liked it! :)
shirebound
· 19 September 2004
· Chapter 4: A Wizard Would Know
What a super-sweet story! I love sniffly-but-hungry Pippin, and shy-but-friendly Sam. And sweet Frodo! And gentle Gandalf! Wonderful. I enjoyed every bit of this. (If you ever get an urge to write an epilogue, where this story is told on the Quest somewhere and the others listen in, I certainly wouldn't mind reading it!)
:)
Author's reply
Shirebound strikes again, springing plotbunnies on unsuspecting writers! That is such a good idea - thanks! - and thank you also for your very sweet comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
pipspebble
· 18 September 2004
· Chapter 3: Seeing Stars
I love this idea of Gandalf pulling the stars from the sky for sick Pippin, and especially the way that Pippin thanked them for visiting as he let them go. Lovely chapter. :-)
Author's reply
I'm very glad you liked it! Thank you for your kind words :)
shirebound
· 16 September 2004
· Chapter 3: Seeing Stars
Is there anything sweeter than a good-hearted, trusting hobbit lad being looked after by a good-hearted wizard who wants to give the lad a special gift? I love how Pippin is as gentle with the stars as Gandalf is with him. *happy sigh*
Author's reply
Thanks, Shirebound! This whole story came about because I love Pippin and Gandalf's friendship - that underneath all the sternness, Gandalf truly cares for Pippin - so I'm really glad you like it :)
Auntiemeesh
· 26 August 2004
· Chapter 2: Keeping Watch
Hm, that last sentence has left me with an almost Tookish curiousity of my own. I wonder what Gandalf is thinking.
This was a delightful chapter. I love that Pippin, even young and sick, is aware of how much Frodo is doing for him. I'm looking forward to more of this. :)
Author's reply
Tookish curiosity claims another! :)
Thank you for such lovely comments!
EllyBaggins
· 26 August 2004
· Chapter 2: Keeping Watch
oooooooohhhhhh, very good so far! hmm, what does gandalf wonder?
keep the updates comin!
Author's reply
"hmm, what does gandalf wonder?"
You will see! Thanks for stopping by to read and comment :)
shirebound
· 25 August 2004
· Chapter 2: Keeping Watch
What a sweet story! I love this especially:
"I’m not accustomed to a quiet Took,” Gandalf said finally, “and I hope I never come across another.”
At this Pippin lifted his head and met the wizard’s gaze. “Do you mean all Tooks, or just the quiet ones?” he whispered faintly.
:)
Author's reply
Aww...Thank you very much! :)
Auntiemeesh
· 20 August 2004
· Chapter 1: Gandalf's Arrival
I do so like seeing Frodo as a caregiver. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this. :)
Author's reply
Thank you very much! I'm so glad you liked it, and more is on its way :)
melilot hill
· 20 August 2004
· Chapter 1: Gandalf's Arrival
Great chapter. This looks very promising! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's reply
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by :)
Grey Wonderer
· 19 August 2004
· Chapter 1: Gandalf's Arrival
I am enjoying your Gandlaf very much. Very wixard-like in his silences and his quiet concern. I look forward to more of this one.
Author's reply
Thank you - this means a lot to me, because I've never written Gandalf before and I was a bit concerned about it! :)
Breon Briarwood
· 19 August 2004
· Chapter 1: Gandalf's Arrival
Oh, nice start! Not that I want to see poor little Pip sick, but it's nice that Frodo gets to be the caretaker. Awaiting chapter 2. :D
Author's reply
Don't worry - a healthy Pippin is on his way! Thanks for stopping by :)
shirebound
· 19 August 2004
· Chapter 1: Gandalf's Arrival
This looks to be a wonderful story! I'm already eagerly awaiting chapter 2.
Author's reply
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it :)
esamen
· 19 August 2004
· Chapter 1: Gandalf's Arrival
Oh, how wonderful! I just love this story! And it seems like you're covering some new territory here, in the way you've got Gandalf visiting. Please add your next chapter soon!
Author's reply
Thank you so much! I personally love stories with Pippin and Gandalf, and I wanted to try my hand at it as well. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Elendiari22
· 19 August 2004
· Chapter 1: Gandalf's Arrival
Do I sense some Pippin angst coming on?This is a great begining, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's reply
Well, a bit of Pippin angst and lots of Pippin comfort! Thanks for stopping by to read and comment :)