Liz · 16 June 2018 · Chapter 26: Chapter 26
well written and interesting. Ending was rushed and wrapped up too fast, like author became bored. After the careful details of the preceding chapters this was disappointing.
Chain Reaction by Estelle
Reviews (46)
pipinheart · 16 July 2005 · Chapter 26: Chapter 26
This is great...Please continue...I am wondering what is wrong with Ehrohir,and can his father help heal the evil that is still present....This is good please continue...Great work to all....
Author's reply
Actually, this is the end of the story :) We are working on another one but it's taking us forever! LOL!! Hopefully we'll eventually finish it. :P
Kateydidnt · 26 April 2005 · Chapter 26: Chapter 26
What would be interesting if in later years, Lord Elessar King of Gondor brought the fisherman from Belfalas and his brother in to answer some...questions
Author's reply
Hmm... I wonder if the fishermen will live that long... LOL!! Good thought though :)
Silma · 4 March 2005 · Chapter 26: Chapter 26
And of the line... and they lived happely ever after... =) I have had so much fun reading this story. Our heros were never more invinsible and immortal, even with severe injuries..; *wait, well, elves are immortal, so...* :D and Arwen saves the day! Yeah :) LOL now I just imagine a conversation between three brothers and their friend, some weeks after they are all recovered and safely home again. "I'm bored" "Me too" "Estel, what do we do? " "MMM... Go fishing?" "Maybe Adar will come with us." "You mean, before or after he kills us for making such a suggestion?" "Life can be interesting, is it not?" "It sure is". Nice work. I love good adventures. And I love my elves and my heir of Isildur even more :D looking foreward to the next one!!!
Author's reply
LOL!!!!! Those four will drive Elrond crazy! I have no doubt that Elrond will kill them all before he lets them go fishing. Who knows what would happen. Perhaps they will catch themselves a great white shark and then get bitten into pieces. LMAO!!! Murphy's Law always applies to them :P
DAYNA · 23 February 2005 · Chapter 25: Chapter 25
OMG... do you know how hard it is to read this between phone calls I answer all day long??? Gah! LOL. I'm more hooked than ever! Now Arewen's here... God help us if anything happens to HER... between her dad, lover and 2 brothers... eeep!
Author's reply
We are evil... but we are not THAT evil *eg* Nothing will happen to Arwen... promise... Hehehe.
Faith · 23 February 2005 · Chapter 25: Chapter 25
YAY!!!!! WOO HOO! GO ARWEN GO ARWEN GO ARWEN! Its your birthday...wait..no its not....but WOO HOO! anyway...yessssssss! *grabs arwen and does the happy dance...*grabs estel and....wait...nevermind....*grabs leggy and....wait...*grabs arwen and does the happy dance....woo hoo!:D Faith, the slightly obsssessed fangirl
Author's reply
LMAO!!!!! You are SOOOO funny! :D Love your reviews. Hahaha!!! Keep them coming!! :)
Faith · 16 February 2005 · Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Oh please please please be okay....please please....must let the elvesese live....we likes elveses....speically legolas(drools like homer) hehehe update soon preciousssssssssssssss....we likes updates yes we do.............yes we do..............:D Faith, the slightly obssessed fangirl
Anonymous · 16 February 2005 · Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Are you goint to save Elladan from serious injuries again? it seems he's quite the lucky one so far.
Elven Queen of Gondor · 15 February 2005 · Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Wow, what a turn! First Elrond's enemy is not dead, and then the captain betrays them! Yet the recovery of Legolas seems quite forced (and I don't think he could make it). I wonder if Elrond can save the day and slay the bad captain as well as he bested Moririme. Just a nice cliffe!
Author's reply
To keep you on the edge of the cilff :D
Elven Queen of Gondor · 15 February 2005 · Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Don't get me wrong, but the conditon of the heroes (especially Legolas)- as it was plainly pointed out over the last chapters - simply doesn't work with humour. It might be true that it's a "man's thing" to cope with serious situations by laughing at them, but it seems kind of odd to find it right after the rescue (or interim solution since there are more perils ahead). Though I have to admit that Legolas' sentence 'if they will ever be out on a trip without getting into serious danger' sums up the story poignantly.
Elven Queen of Gondor · 15 February 2005 · Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I have followed this story with joy, and I appreciate your attempt to write on one plot with different authors. Yet in this chapter I began to worry what the heroes can take without simply breaking down! Being injured and maltreated for such a long time and with grievious wounds, it is quite hard to imagine them moving at all. And wasn't Legolas shackled before, or did I overread the part in which he was freed? Anyway you girls do a marvellous job!
Author's reply
Legolas was freed in Chapter 15. You must have missed it. :D
Timmy2222 · 15 February 2005 · Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Wow, this was a griping chapter! What twists and turns! Kept me on the edge of my seat. Looking forward to more! - T.
Author's reply
Do you need a seatbelt? *eg* Or perhaps a pillow for you to fall on? LOL! Glad you liked it! :D :D :D
Galimeril · 5 February 2005 · Chapter 23: Chapter 23
NO NO NO NO! You EVIL person! You and your EVIL cliffies! How can you live with yourself torturing me like this! *sniff* Please update soon, this is a great story!
Author's reply
Of course I can live with myself. I didn't write that chapter. I only post it. *cackles evilly*
Faith · 5 February 2005 · Chapter 23: Chapter 23
NOOOOOO!!!!! not again!!!??? sheesh..you cantkeep doing this to me...this this is is is is...just...so of the wrongness...the supsense is killing me....update soon! sooner than soon!:) Faith, the slightly obssesesed fangirl
Author's reply
Will update after the 14th. I'm on holiday now. Lalalala *eg*
Faith · 28 January 2005 · Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Oh no! shes back! oh of all the things...oh no another cliffie!? update soon! sooner than soon! sooner than sooner than soon! LOL hehehe keep it up..this fic is awesome! write more...cant stand cliffies..all that supsense is going to drive me crazy....but i cant wait find out what happens...more please!:) Faith the slightly obssesed fangirl
Faith · 21 January 2005 · Chapter 21: Chapter 21
oh no! poor elrond...:( please please please tell me theres a nice happy ending...cant take more of this...supsense....you better update soon! sooner than soon! sooner than sooner than soon! sooner than sooner than sooner than sooner than soon! I MEAN NOW!!!!! NOW! NOW! NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW!! LOL.... Faith, the slightly obsssessed Fangirl
Author's reply
Ok, I'll tell you that there's a nice happy ending :D But update now? No, not now. Maybe tomorrow... or the day after tomorrow... or two days after tomorrow... or... LOL! But don't worry, it'll be updated eventually. :D
Lyn · 3 January 2005 · Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Excellent writing...however, I cannot stress it enough when I say that one should NEVER give liquids to an unconscious person, because the liquid goes into the lungs, not the stomach. There is no "reflex swallowing" that many writers seem to think exist. The tiny flap of tissue that temporarily separates the esophagus (food pipe) from the trachea (air pipe) is controlled voluntarily by someone who is awake. When a person is nconscious, this piece of tissue is relaxed and thus any liquid entering the mouth enters the trachea (breathing tube) and goes directly into the lungs. In effect, giving liquids to an unconscious person allows one to murder them by drowning them, depending on the amount of liquid administered. If not drowned immediately, they will suffer pneumonia. So---please do not have anyone give unconscious characters liquids (or solids either). This is the reason people in comas died from dehydration. It was only until the advent of sterile vein infusions that unconscious people could be kept alive.
Author's reply
Ahh, okies. Will keep that in mind. Thank you for pointing it out for us! :)
elf-girl · 3 January 2005 · Chapter 19: Chapter 19
WWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! Please make Legolas die! Kill him! Kill him! KILL HIM! (I know I will later regret this but just do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
Author's reply
Killing Legolas is a very bad idea. We value our lives too much to attempt that :P Sorry to disappoint you. Hehehe. *eg*
Dayna · 24 December 2004 · Chapter 18: Chapter 18
This just keeps getting better and better! I squeal in delight every time I see it near the top of the "Recent" list! You guys are just AWESOME!! MORE MORE MORE!! :)
Author's reply
*squeals in delight too* Glad you enjoy the story as much as we enjoy writing it :D :D :D
Timmy2222 · 17 December 2004 · Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I stil enjoy reading this story, and I marvel at the strength the protagonists display with every chapter. I would have loved to have a look at how the two injured Elves were placed into the boat... Take care, - T.
Author's reply
They will be placed into the boat very carefully. LOL!! Glad you're enjoying this story :D
Dayna · 6 December 2004 · Chapter 16: Chapter 16
If I didn't know there was more than one writer, I'd never know it at all! This is the best group effort I've ever seen! WOW! I have had a hand at doing something like this before, and it is SO much fun! Keep it up ladies (and gents? :D )!! This is just wonderful. Kudos to you all! :)
Author's reply
:D Thank you! No gents, all ladies. Hehehe. Unless there's someone in disguise amongst us... LOL!
Gud Daedheloth · 19 November 2004 · Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Ooh, wonder where this is leading to! Looks like all four heroes will sail away into even more peril! The wrath and power of the bad Elf should not be underestimated, I assume... It's a pity the chapters are so short.
Author's reply
Never underestimate a female. *g*
Galimeril · 18 November 2004 · Chapter 14: Chapter 14
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Don't stop here! MORE!
Author's reply
Hahaha!! I'm glad that got your attention *eg*
Silvren Ithildin · 7 November 2004 · Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Wow, this is a great story... i read it in about 15 minutes and cannot wait for your next chapter. If i could make a recommendation though... you could possibly make the chapters a bit longer, so as to make more reading time. i will be looking foward to your next chapter. good luck!
Author's reply
Ahh... sorry about the length. As different authors write different parts, it's a little hard to control the length. Hehehe. Hopefully that will change in our next story as we are trying to adapt another writing style. Thanks for reading :D
Anonymous · 6 November 2004 · Chapter 11: Chapter 11
woot!The slavers have been stomped-right?
Author's reply
Yep! Stomped! LOL! But for how long? *eg*