iterile earrinde · 23 October 2004 · Chapter 1: At Long Last
did you have to make me cry? ):
At Long Last by Noldo
Reviews (3)
Elvenesse · 16 October 2004 · Chapter 1: At Long Last
The rhyme scheme works nicely, and I like the repetition at the beginning of each stanza.
Brenda G. · 16 October 2004 · Chapter 1: At Long Last
Lovely and sad. Very well done.