Jay of Lasgalen · 28 October 2004 · Chapter 1: We Stand
The City stands with banners high, Proud against a darkening sky I reveiewed this at HASA (yes, it was me) and still like this - it's simple and effective. It's based on a favourite poem. Jay
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I really like that poem too (although I'm not quiet so sure on the last stanza), and I felt kind of guilty daring to copy it. So I'm glad it worked.