Groth Môr by Chris
MlleGigi · 13 September 2011 · Chapter 1: Groth Môr
Very clever plot twist...the sign of a talented writer. Until the last two paragraphs, I was thinking exactly what you intended me to think -- that the mother and child were Elves of Mirkwood -- but they're not.
Lamiel · 2 November 2004 · Chapter 1: Groth Môr
Ooh, nice illusion here. Although I am left wondering, do spiders pray? H'm. Regardless, a perspective from the other side is always intriguing.
Jay of Lasgalen · 2 November 2004 · Chapter 1: Groth Môr
Oh, very creepy! Nicely done - I didn't spot the twist until the end. Jay