The King's Commission by Larner
songspinner · 5 December 2004 · Chapter 1: Revelations
What a sweet beginning! Such a sense of humor - I could just see the twinkle in Aragorn's eye as he completely confuses people...but at the same time, you showed how much he loved and admired Frodo. And your idea of the sculptor's talent is an intriguing one. I can't wait to see how he gets the image for it completed.
Author's reply
Forensic artistry of the Fourth Age in Middle Earth--a fascinating idea, is it not? Thanks for the review.
annmarwalk · 5 December 2004 · Chapter 1: Revelations
I'm awed, as always, by your originality, and incredible attention to detail. I'm so looking forward to reading this! startlingly beautiful Pherian - Ah, so very true! Ann
Author's reply
Yes, I agree. A hobbit who continues to look like a young man though he is of low middle age for his race. And I appreciate your response, as always, Ann.
Nightsky · 5 December 2004 · Chapter 1: Revelations
Fascinating story -- but then I like anything with Thorongil in it. Looking forward to the next chapters.
Author's reply
Glad to oblige.
FantasyFan · 5 December 2004 · Chapter 1: Revelations
The premise of this story is intriguing, and the descriptions and dialog are wonderfully done. But the heart of this scene is Aragorn, his compassion and understanding, and his love for Frodo that shines out and really does paint a portrait of this most remarkable hobbit. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's reply
I have always loved Aragorn, and love to imagine him enjoying a bit of anonymity now and then to break from the tension of always being on display as the King. Glad you like this.