Revelry and Reflection by Pipwise Brandygin
Wordweaver · 16 December 2004 · Chapter 1
Very nice! Good characterization, interesting dialogue and a balanced tone, not too silly and not too sentimental. I enjoyed it very much.
Author's reply
Thank you very much for the useful feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Giu · 16 December 2004 · Chapter 1
Nice! I really like this story. well done
Author's reply
Thanks for your feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Anso the Hobbit · 15 December 2004 · Chapter 1
I enjoyed this very much! It was great to see Elrond prais the two young hobbits so, and to see the hobbits getting back to their old hobbity ways after all they have been through. I like how Frodo takes care of them and how Pippin and Merry react to what Elrond say.
Author's reply
Thank you for reading and letting me know what you liked, Anso! I always love seeing these two get praise and recognition - even if it makes them uncomfortable, lol. Thanks for pointing out that they have got back to their old hobbity ways - Frodo looking after them is part of that, I think. I see him reverting back to being the older cousin, rather than needing to be taken care of himself :)
Anny · 15 December 2004 · Chapter 1
I really loved this story! Great praise for great hobbits!
Author's reply
I'm so glad you enjoyed this - I love to see these two recognised for what they did! Thank you for your feedback :)